AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 3- Chap 12 (Part 3) - Page 25

Originally posted by: Akdhaparijatluv

Omg this update was awesme amazing pp loved it very much 👏 😳 🤗 finally JJ met n u hv described his feelings n emotions beautifully 😳 😳 aww his desire for her no to touch but stil cudnt control n finally kissed her 😳 that means even atagh saheb dint kidnap Rico 😲 is there any chance of chuchak entry in ur ff by kidnapping Rico 😆 hope Rico reaches his parents soon dnt know how his halat... pp u r amazing writer 👏 I must say again u expressed their emotions too Gud n I'm reading ur chapter again n again 😳 plz do update nxt chapter soon 😳 I know Jo is in stil ghrina mood 😆 Jallu shud give emotional support to her now and they both r heartbroken who else kidnapped Rico let me guess Maham, adham, rukayya or bhabya 😆

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

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Suspense pe suspense :O Prianka tum CID ke khandaan se belong krti ho kya? :O You write with such thrilling urge that i get hooked to your story and towards its end i just don't want it to end man! I am like keep writing man don't stop!! Jalal ko kab akal aaygi, i don't like the way he treats jodha :/ Par koi naa it will be really amazing to see how he will change :) And you should take a bow for this update! The way you have penned their emotions in this update, wow! Like wow! Expressing jalal's emotions in such a way that it doesn't appear like lust and at the same time remains a bit away from love is brilliancy which you just wrote here. You justifief the title of your writeup in this.
Keep writing, now i can say that update sooonish :)

Originally posted by: Gudiyalovesguru

intresting teaser...
continue soon...

Originally posted by: Pals2411

SBS TRPs:

5) Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlta Hai/yeh hai Mohabbatein

4) JODHA AKBAR/Mahabharat

3) Tarak Mehta ka Ulta Chasma

2) Diya Aur Baati Hum😲

1) Saath Nibhana Saathiya😲

JODHA AKBAR NO. 4 PE

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

pals yeh toh hona hi tha...

show dekha hai aajkal...its like any other SH*T on srceen

agar parijat nehi hote toh I would have left it by now😡

Originally posted by: Pals2411

I don't skip JA (except power cut ho to)...and ONLY AND ONLY for PARIJAT...

I cant see JA sliding down, though I know tracks are faltu, logic window se bahar and all.🥱

My Parijat😳😭

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great teaser

waiting for the update