4~*NOT just a passionate affair~*Pt 42

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disha

@disha15

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#151

U have time to write ffs but no time to drop into the cc? 😡 aao na 😭

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: lashy

Edited by Pals2411 - 11 years ago

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Awww...that was another emotional chapter now! And so so beautiful...❤️❤️❤️

You mostly always see a woman give up something for her man at every point in life...going that extra mile..but Jalal amazes me!! He is willing to sacrifice these last days of college, all the fun, the Outstanding Achiever award-which every student hopes to get-even after knowing he has been chosen for it, his seminars, presentations, all those marks...for a person like Jalal who aims to be the best, a go-getter, letting go of all this is a big thing! And yet he does it...for HIS GIRL...the one girl he loves so so so very much!! This shows the extent of his love for her! I'm so touched by this...he's the best any girl can get!!! ☺️

As for Jo...nothing seems to be getting better for this poor girl..on the contrary, everything going downhill..her father's health scare has made things worse for her! Noone can decline a request by his/her father in such a fragile state, with folded hands..pure EBM i say! On top of it..her mother's taunts..sending her on a guilt trip about how Jo doesn't care about what her family has and is doing for her...no wonder the fighter in her is losing confidence..😔😭

And the thing is you can't blame her family entirely either...they don't know the man Jalal as a person, if there is one thing they know it's just that THIS MAN has caused problems in all their lives now and is the sole reason for the mess, plus they probably feel he's somewhere taken away their Jo from them, the one who wouldn't have dreamt of doing any of the things she's done in the past few days...Wish they would give him a chance..😭

Jalal's gang...I went awww seeing their reactions...my Renu actually had tears, though she did have some nasty things to say about Jo n her family after that..😆😆

What was with Abdul interrupting when Jalal spoke about the stalker...I'll kill you if you make him the stalker..😡😡

Btw, why is Jalal missing the farewell???? Oru naal...n it's the best day of your college life, the last meet with all your buddies...can't he get this one day to enjoy? After all he's missing the last one month...he deserves this 1 day di..Cmon di...plzzz!!!😒😒

Btw, I'm marginally happy Jo's bhabhi, though doesn't understand Jalal but is atleast not being as bad as the others...

And the level of understanding between these two...mwaah! They have no idea what's going on at the other person's end, no communication and yet they he's dong all he can to ensure she doesn't lose out on her dream and she is trying her best to make her family see Jalal is not that bad...they are both doing all they can for each other and their relationship, hoping it will help and make things better! LOVE THEM WITH ALL MY HEART...!!!🤗

So all in all...an AMAZING chapter again, an emotional one! Loved it...and want moreee! 😳❤️You start writing again from today..want the next update asap! Btw, after how long have I commented this fast after you updated..hehe..😆😆

Love you loads and loads Sharaddha akka...🤗🤗

Edited by baubles - 11 years ago

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

I am sorry ... No comments ... This was 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 ... How can u do this to my jalal , lashy ??? Why are you being soo cruel to my Jo & Ja ... 😭😭 ...

And I hate this jodha's family ... Feel like strangling each & everybody ...😡

🤬 Abdul or maan is the stalker now ... 50 50 chances I doubt both as of now ...

🤬 Abdulll 😡

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Sam

@sam_0506

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

😭😭😭

This is how I was after reading the update. The first thing I did in the morning was check for update. there it was. As usual very very well written. But I felt 😭 after reading it.

I'm feeling sad for Jalal and Jodha and strangely for Jodha's family too. All of them are right in their places, but "paristhitiyaan hi kharab hain".

Now, Jalal.. just mind blowing. Every time he does something for her, I think this is it, he can't exceed this benchmark. And the very next time, he does something. And I'm stumped. (Am I making sense?) He is not saintly selfless. He feels bad when the college tells him that he may lose his chance on winning the awards. But he has his priorities. And that's her. For her happiness, he's willing to do it. Lashy, how did you come with this guy? 👏

And Jodha .. really feeling bad for her. I can actually relate to how she must be feeling. Being forced to do something against your wishes is bad enough. Having to do it in her circumstances is worse. Her dad's in the hospital. She has become the villain in her family's eyes. And she has to go through this engagement. On top of it she is gonna be so guilt ridden when she comes to know of Jalal's decision. Poor poor girl. I just want to see her back to her resourcefulness and feisty spirit. Pleaseee..😭

Jodha's family now, strangely, I feel bad for them too. I guess Jodha before Jalal was the girl who always toed the line. She was the "Aankhon ka noor" of the family. Suddenly she has turned into someone they can't identify with. Mind it, we readers have seen her journey from Part 1 to Part 41. Her family hasn't. For them, she's broken their trust. And the way you have described each individual's reactions here says how they are hurt because of that. 😭

I'm also curious as to how Jalal's mom is gonna react to all this. You haven't written much about her, so can't really wait to find out how she takes the news😕

And this stalker business is killing me. Kaun hai ye banda? Btw, plz let him do one good thing. Let him talk to Rishabh and get the rishta cancelled. Jodha as it is has so many problems. At least ek problem to kam karo uski...

And even if you're tired of reading my long boring reply, I've one more request. In the next part let Jodha Jalal have at least one scene together. Apne serial jaisa mat karna. SR done, then those Jodha and Jalal don't even spend time together, let alone get behind closed door together. 😉
Let at least these two spend some time together yaar !!

And here is my big wala hug for you, for part 41.. 🤗

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Preet

@rishbala3018

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

Aaj meri neend khli jab subah 4:30 baje...the first thing i did was look for ur pm 😆
My God.. 4:30 neend kyun khuli aapki😲
Its an awesome update...very emotional! Poor Jo...she is being blackmailed emotionally by her family & not one family member is ready to support her,
Because what she's asking for is something too big...too too out of their understanding...
i thot may b her bhabhi wud support her she is trying to get her some time and understanding from family but so far she has not shown any support for Jalaal...may b she is scared of the family...but the y she said Jo was astrayed by the boy?? Guess she wont support her on this 😔
The thing is Preet as I said, her bhabhi also would come from a traditional family na...so, while she doesn't react as harshly as them, she can empathize with her family more than with Jodha...and these people don't even know Jalal na.. so yes, they think there's a boy who's leading her astray since they can't even recognize their Jodha now...😭

On the other hand Jalaal has taken the decision to leave college for Jo and she doesnt even know:(
Yeah... she doesn't know...
They r both in such bad shape right now...he left college and her father is in hospital and tilak ceremony is being done in 4 days...i dont know what to say...
Yeah...
Just want to request u to give a happy ending to this cute love story...dont separate them! Somehow make her family agree...
Of course the ending will be happy...🤗don't worry dear..
When will u reveal the stalker???
Bataayaa na.. end mein..😛
[DIV]

Arre aise hi neend khuli, any other day i wud have turned to the other side and went back to sleep but today since i knew u wud have posted update i thot of checking...IPhone zinda baad else i cudnt have checked...
Thank u for telling the ending wud b happy one, i m so relieved...i hate sad endings!!!

Btw i forgot to mention earlier...y did Jallu leave Mirza so easily?? I mean i understand he waa intimidated by her brother and his parents presence that night and he had to say something but even after that he didnt tell Jallu anything, he cud have called him right away and given them heads up on the situation or even sat morning or sunday...he had 2 full days yet he didnt think of telling Jallu anything...now y wud he do that??? Unless offcourse he hates JaJo being together and he is the STALKER 😡

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Alakhnandaa

@Alakhnandaa

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

'manhoos ladka' i object ths...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
.she's been led astray by that boy i have an objection to such statements my lord. if the opposite party repeats such sins again il file a defamation case against them.
di i jst hope u dont say objection overruled.
congrats 4 ths new thrd di n sory for the late( actually vry late) reply.
i dont know what to say had i been a writr lyk u i wud have bn able to put those simple wods of english to compose somethng in ur praise n for ur beautiful story. A standing ovation for the pain u take to update ths story apart from fulfilling all the duties of a mom ( rathr supr mom) n a wife.u know u can be a role model for many . n i want to lrn from u how to manage tym... these lines are 4 u di
" if i cud give u smthng in life i wud give u the ability to see urself through my eyes thn u will realize how much i respect u"

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: The.Patthaaka.
U have time to write ffs but no time to drop into the cc? 😡 aao na 😭

I'll come..😆

Originally posted by: Pals2411
As for that stalker and Rishabh, I only PITY THEM😆

Kyun LD? 😆

Because both are daydreaming about Jo being their partner while Jallu Dulhaniya Le Jayega🥳

One more thing...Rishabh will get a big THENGA😆...Stalker will get THENGA plus BEATING😆...Jallu will get JO

Arre wah kitni soni baat kahi ho 😆 wah wah meri LD

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: baubles
Awww...that was another emotional chapter now! And so so beautiful...❤️❤️❤️
Thanks dearie... 🤗
You mostly always see a woman give up something for her man at every point in life...going that extra mile..but Jalal amazes me!! He is willing to sacrifice these last days of college, all the fun, the Outstanding Achiever award-which every student hopes to get-even after knowing he has been chosen for it, his seminars, presentations, all those marks...for a person like Jalal who aims to be the best, a go-getter, letting go of all this is a big thing! And yet he does it...for HIS GIRL...the one girl he loves so so so very much!! This shows the extent of his love for her! I'm so touched by this...he's the best any girl can get!!! ☺️
🤗 Yeah... I told you, you'd feel like hugging him and hugging him once more..

As for Jo...nothing seems to be getting better for this poor girl..on the contrary, everything going downhill..her father's health scare has made things worse for her! Noone can decline a request by his/her father in such a fragile state, with folded hands..pure EBM i say!
I know... but not that it doesn't happen in our Indian families.. 😲 God.. its tough I tell ya!
On top of it..her mother's taunts..sending her on a guilt trip about how Jo doesn't care about what her family has and is doing for her...no wonder the fighter in her is losing confidence..😔😭
I know.. but from their angle that's how it'd seem na..
And the thing is you can't blame her family entirely either...they don't know the man Jalal as a person, if there is one thing they know it's just that THIS MAN has caused problems in all their lives now and is the sole reason for the mess, plus they probably feel he's somewhere taken away their Jo from them, the one who wouldn't have dreamt of doing any of the things she's done in the past few days...Wish they would give him a chance..😭
True.. they are trying to protect their daughter.. they might have seen many-an-example of bad ladka spoiling the ghar ki ladki... and they want to stop that from happening to their Jo
Jalal's gang...I went awww seeing their reactions...my Renu actually had tears, though she did have some nasty things to say about Jo n her family after that..😆😆
Again from her angle, I didn't find what she said wrong either 😆
What was with Abdul interrupting when Jalal spoke about the stalker...I'll kill you if you make him the stalker..😡😡
😲 Kill me aa kill Abdul aa..
Btw, why is Jalal missing the farewell???? Oru naal...n it's the best day of your college life, the last meet with all your buddies...can't he get this one day to enjoy? After all he's missing the last one month...he deserves this 1 day di..Cmon di...plzzz!!!😒😒
I guess he doesn't wanna take a risk.. a farewell party given by juniors to seniors.. after annual day function what if her brothers come to drop her pick her up.. what if they see Jalal.. I guess that's why..
Btw, I'm marginally happy Jo's bhabhi, though doesn't understand Jalal but is atleast not being as bad as the others...
Obviously...they're the more modern of the lot.. she and Vishal Bhaiyya..
And the level of understanding between these two...mwaah! They have no idea what's going on at the other person's end, no communication and yet they he's dong all he can to ensure she doesn't lose out on her dream and she is trying her best to make her family see Jalal is not that bad...they are both doing all they can for each other and their relationship, hoping it will help and make things better! LOVE THEM WITH ALL MY HEART...!!!🤗
🤗 True.. I love them too...
So all in all...an AMAZING chapter again, an emotional one! Loved it...and want moreee! 😳❤️You start writing again from today..want the next update asap! Btw, after how long have I commented this fast after you updated..hehe..😆😆
ok ok.. yes it's a miracle indeed!
Love you loads and loads Sharaddha akka...🤗🤗
Love you too Sojji Begum 🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni
I am sorry ... No comments ... This was 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 ... How can u do this to my jalal , lashy ??? Why are you being soo cruel to my Jo & Ja ... 😭😭
I'm only going to repeat what I have before... for it to be epic.. they will face trials.. warna story mein mazaa hi kyaa.. and tumhaari husband ko kam pappad thodi bhelne pade tumhe paane ke liye... jo baaki sabko khos rahi ho 🤣
And I hate this jodha's family ... Feel like strangling each & everybody ...😡
They are right at their place you know... you and I know Jalal.. other than a name they know nothing of this ladka.. and they can see how much their daughter has changed oflate. so they hate him

🤬 Abdul or maan is the stalker now ... 50 50 chances I doubt both as of now ...
🤬 Abdulll 😡
Awww...🤗