Is it Hate OR Love ~ ALL CHAPTERS TOGETHER IN THIS THREAD - Page 80

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

hi shahbhavini...

its truly a fantastic update with so much of lovy dovy , fiery , passionate moments of akdha ummm...loved it !

inshort it was full on entertainig 👏

Originally posted by: onaisa

supeerb chapter dii thanx fr updating sooo long

awwsum update thanx fr d PM dii

love u :)

Originally posted by: sri_divya

👏

awesome chapter...!!!!!!!

i am eagerly waiting for next chapter...

please post it soon di...😊

Originally posted by: justlovetv

Di! I read 36 and 37 together! Both are fab! Will comment in detail soon!😃

Originally posted by: Sundari1

Awesome update!!! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter ..

Originally posted by: shailaja1678

Hey just loved d chapter..worth of waiting so long..i just luv JA of your story they r so passionate.

also u r a great writer of this forum. keep writing and if possible send me links of ur previous ffs also.

Actually its an relief to read this while the worst of jodha akbar is airing on zee..

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Okay ... bhaaviii my dearest writer ... what can i say about this update ... tu hai hi acchi writer ... mujhe itna darr lag raha tha ki ye update mein tu karegi kya kar ke ... as it is , tune dara diya tha ... ki mind freezed hai ... pata nahi kya likhu ... blah blah blah !!! tu har baar yahi bolti hai ... aur ekdum jhakaasss update deti hai !!!

Sachhi... Varsha... My mind was really freezed... I had no idea how I wrote this chapter... by every chapter it is getting difficult more and more to keep readers interest... and after writing this chapter I told preet that I have no hope for this chapter... and she said she loved it... so I said okay ... Yaar sometime dimag itna tej chalta hai...aur sometime mind me kuch aata hi nahi... but kehte hai na DER AAYE DURUST AAYE... muje har bar lagta hai after writing chapter is bekar... after reading all reviews I feel nahi nahi chapter was good... I am so happy with 89 likes... and so many comments...

Tujhe pata hai ... in this update what is the most best thing I loved ... u will fall off the ground from ur chair laughing ... Jodha's twisting nose to jalal ... you have written it so beautifully when jalal is trying to instigate jodha during the teerandazi ... I so so so so ... love this teda & naughty jalal of yours ... bhavviii this para

Jodha twisting nose...hehehe... When I wrote I felt the same way...I pictured annoyed Jodha and mischievous Jallu

This was my most favourite part ... this shows how much my jalal loves his jodha ... he wants her to be confident , fiery & cannot see fear & tears in her eyes , awwweee my jalal ... in this chapter I just felt to crush jalal in my arms ... i so so so much want to hug him ... ... jodha is so lucky to have such a husband

So many time I feel Jalal loves more deeper than Jodha... but U know how passionate is my Jalal... I tried to make it equal in this competition emotionally... Yes Jodha is so lucky... and Not just Hug...I want to kiss him too

now coming to teerandazi - jalal is sucha brat , khud toh expert hai hi ... but he didnt even give an inch of over confidence expression ... infact nobody had any idea of jalal being so good in archery ... everybody's jaw dropped seeing him like this .. esp the stupid rajvanshi kings , including rana pratap i was so overwhelmed to read jodha's expression & thoughts bhaaviii ...

You know I wanted to surprise readers as well... Because everyone had seen Jodha's talent in Archery... My Jallu is a brat... yes he is... He love to surprise to everyone including Jodha...

really no wonder you have written it so beautifully ... tujhe pata hai I could actually visualize the archery contest ... it takes a lott of brainstorming sessions to write & describe the contest ... marvelous job bhaaviii btw tera sword fighting kitna hot tha na ... mujhe pehle laga shayab teerandazi bhi utna hi hot hoga ... ye jalal bhi na sabke saamne announce kiya archery ka ... gussa hi aay mujhe toh ,& the last one where jalal was blindfolded & he hits the arrow where the payal makes its sound was just mind-blowing ... i could visualize this as well you knw i was so happy that jalal won & more than happy becoz jodha was happy seeing jalal's victory

I am so glad you were able to visualize... U Right I really had to thought about Archery and every time I think about Archery... ramayan and mahabharat comes in mind... and that really didn't help me... but finally I don't know how it came in mind and I wrote it...but the last part blindfold I have seen that in Priviraj serial so I use that idea... Yes Jodha loves Jalal so much she couldn't see him losing in front of entire Rajvansh...

& next was rana pratap's taunting to jalal made me so angry ... thankgod jodha ke bhashan ka kuch toh asar hua jalal pe... nahi toh yuhi haar maan leta ... pagal kahinka !!

U right my Jalal is little bit crazy... He was only a love that time... He was not thinking straight that time... and Jodha made him realize it's not about them anymore... and it was a wakeup call...

coming to surya -suku = bhavviii tu aur tera shaitaan dimag ... ... mujhe toh lagta hai tera ye teda jalal bilkul tere jaisa hi hai .. dushta ... kya planning ki bande ne ... matlab a true politician , cum warrior ... this jalal is a complete package ... !!! loved the possessive surya .. the way he behaves in front of mirza ... aur ye mirza bhi kam nahi hai , bilkul apne bhaijaan pe gaya hai ... uff bechari jodha ... do do shaitaano ko handle karna padta hai

Yes... Jallu was indeed true politician and great warrior...and passionate as well ... a complete package... I was worried to add Surya... shivani... mirza and suku... actually in our forum reader only like to see Jodha and Jalal love no one else... but glad everyone enjoy it surya and suku part...

btw surya called suku on jodha's terrace ... doosra terrace nahi mila kya ... itna bada mehal hai ... fir bhi ja ja ke jodha ka hi terrace ... aur ye jalal ye apne kamre mein nahi bula sakta tha kya isko bhi same terrace hi mila ... mujhe toh itna gussa aaraha tha ... jee toh kar raha tha ki jalal aur surya dono ko ek ek mukka maru ...

I laugh out loud reading your comment... they really didn't find any other palace... Yeh mera kutil dimag hai... muje dono romance sath me dikhane the... Aur abhi SR ka time aaya nahi tha... to kabab me haddi ki avashyakata thi...heheheh

aur phir jodha & jalal ka ... haaye mein mar jaava ... mujhe toh padh padh ke sharam aarahi thi , andar hi andar laddu bhi phoot rahe the ... the way jodha jumps seeing jalal ... the way she talks ... ufff ... this jodha is a surprise packet re bhavvviii how can my jalal resist her re !!!

LADOO phoot rahe the... Yes my Jodha is equally passionate... U right How can Jalal reisist...

jaise hi aage aage padhte gayi mujhe toh laga aaj toh zabardast dhamaka hoyega, jodha ke playroom mein ... lekin nahi ... surya ki entry aur sab Satyanaash mere armaano ka ...!!! bhaavviii uss waqt mujhe na tujhe zor ka ek mukka maarne ko man kiya ... kyun re jo & ja ke romantic moment ko bhang kiya !!! ans me bhaaviii

tere armano pe nahi Jalal ke armano pe pani phir gaya...heheheh MUKKA... AHHH... LAGI MUJE...I have no answer to it... muje maza aata hai... reader ko Jalal and Jodha ko tadpane ka...heheheh

phir surya ka confession & jalal & jodha ka tussle ... omg jodha was being such a villian in that cute about-to-do-confession ...aur beech beech mein jalal ke taunts ... haaye rabba this was a blast of laughter riot for me bhaaavviii !!! & I love you for this ...

Seriously every one love that part... and I thought may be reader wont like to read Surya and suku romance but I was wrong...

as I have said earlier .. that ur chapters have everything ... every emotions , drama , romance , masti , comedy sab kuch complete entertainment package , just like my jalal ...isshhh !! & & finally both the couples kiss ...

Yaar U right I like lot of emotion in one chapter... that is the reason they are sooo lonnng... Yes... finally both couple kiss... ab yeh kiss ka kya tamasa hoga koun jane...

In total I loved loved loved this update bhaavviii ... after a month of waiting ... we get such an amazing update ... good lord ...plz dont take much time to update the next chapter ... warna tera bhurta bana dungi samjhi ... kitna wait karaya hai tune ... wait kar ke kar ke ..meri toh 2 kilo wajan kam ho gaya hai ...btw no precap ... kyun ???

Weight loss karne ki achhi therapy hai... hehehhe... very easy way to loose wait... read my story... I will try my best to write sooner... but don't hope much...I am running out of ideas...

LOVE U SWEET HEART ... U R COMMENT ARE FUEL IN MY BRAIN😆

Originally posted by: ---Mehak---

unresing here 😆

Wao wat a fantastic chpater ... hmm i loved it to the core ..

Jalal won it ...

And surya expressed his feelings ..way to go man !!

Update soon

Originally posted by: kashvi786

hmmm fantastic

Originally posted by: princess_saumya

DIII!!!!!!!!!!

WHAT AN amazing update!!!!

song for u:

Banke titli dil uda hai ,

kahin durr,

!!!!!!!!!!!

ooo ill reply later!!!!