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Besharam Pallu... update de pehle...đOriginally posted by: Pallavvi
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Originally posted by: surbhimathur
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Gosh after reading all the 35 chapters i am so intrigued about the story that i don't know what else to write here.
Awww ... vow U read all 35 chapters omg!!! beginning ke chapter small the par... after chapter 13 ... chapter length increase...
Bhavini di i am awestruck at two things, first the concept of your FF and story is just mind blowing!
Thank U so much... I am glad U enjoy this story... đ Tu muje ek baat bata itna sara tu muje kese zel pai... đ
The way it began and is still continuing is just so interesting that it has hooked the readers towards it.
I am glad U didn't lost interest in between... I have written in chapters... so possible...when you read together feels boring... but I am glad no complain... heheheh
Secondly your writing capacity đ itni badi updates kaise likh lete ho đ˛ but i have no complaints lol i was thoroughly enjoying my reading time đ
i know...sach kahu... to I write without thinking... most of the time mere update bahot long hote hai... I like to compelte track in one or two chapter... so me bina soche likhti rehti hu jab tak track khatam nahi ho...đ Par Registan ka Gulab...me try karne wali hu... quantity se jyada quality pe dhayan du... đ
Jodha and jalal's journey was very beautifully explained by you since the start...whether it be jodha loathing him in the start then jalal giving her a piece of mind by harassing her mentally as well as physically...but i am glad jalal stopped suddenly when he was trying to shove himself on her...jodha stopped doing krishna's puja affected jalal so much! That was amazingly penned btw.
Entire FF... is like roller coaster ride for them... after reading your comment I felt like I gone through their journey again... What I wanted to show in this story how their hatred convert in to pure divine love for each other... I wanted them to go through what normal couple go through... like Jealousy... ego... love... passion... separation... love... all this event little by little grew their love for each other deeper and deeper... Finally their love reach to a point where they felt divine connection between them... their soul connected for eternity...I wanted readers to feel difference between now and before when they married for ther first time... How everything has change... their love at the pick... Although they both clashes all the time but their heart never apart... I don't know why...I don't why I am writing all this thingsđ
Then that tree scene was soo romantic...
That is my most favorite part in entire FF...
loved it absolutely! First intimate scene amongst AkDha was brilliantly written. Then all the misunderstandings and then the realizations were very nicely portrayed. Their first SR was beautifully descripted, it was magical and passionate!
SR hmmm... lot of reader liked it...đł
The camp scene and the views wow! Plus abdul is very sweet here, i so like his characterization. Then i loved the tracks after that...jodha being declared mallika...they both teasing each other, their love their glances everything was so cute and sweet!
In this story Jodha's character is not strong from beginning... I wanted Jalal to give her support to build her strength and make her realize that she is really a powerful personality... and when she realize and acted ...his ego came in between...đ because she pointed at him and make him realize where he was wrong... So both of them supported each other... to grew their qualities... With the support of Jodha... and her thoughts Jalal became great ruler... and Jalal made her realize that she is not ordinary women...
The epic heartbreak track which just got finished was truly amazing, the way it started and then finished, woah so amazing!
it was heart wrenching ... track... where because of Ruku... Jalal and Jodha get separated... All proof were against Jodha but Jalal trust didn't move a bit...
Their pain of separation and their feelings were aptly emoted by you. Jodha being hira and jalal sensing jodha's touch was superrr...then their fight and jalal winning...then the rain sequence and after that the hut scene was amazing.
thank U so much... I am glad U like that part...đ
Now its marriage time! That kanika is so disgusting huh...i loved that jalal ka "inaam" scene ;) jodha manaofying him was amazing. Now i am waiting for the next! Update soon! Superr FF di! Keep it up_/\_
heheheh Kanika... Yes she is disgusting... Jalal will not spare her... Thank U so much for reading entire story... I am so touched by comment...
U know when I started this story I had no idea reader will like this story... I never wrote any story in my life... and I always hated writingđ in school... I always loves numbers... I am an Accountant... so writing is not my cup of tea... but I never knew that I could write this much in quantityđ U know, I am not satisfied with the quality of my writing... đ I always felt that my writing is not upto the mark...but I guess people loved it because of strong story track and emotional roller coaster...đ ONCE AGAIN THANK U SO SO MUCH FOR THIS COMMENT...
Last two months I got so jammed up with work at office and home and I am still catching up... don't really get time to write longđ chapter... once this marriage finish... then i will feel relaxđ
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Aww... Thank U sweetu.. updateOriginally posted by: lovergirlalina
cOngO shOngo foh d new thread di đ 𼳠it was Awesome n lovely thread di đâď¸
great job namyy đđđ
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Sara... me tuje to bol bhi nahi sakti updateđĄđOriginally posted by: SARA4444
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