AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 2: Chap 7-10

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prianka

@ppluvkuch

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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

SORRY BUDDYs...not being able to reply you...

my DEVIL job...pata nehi itna kaam ata kaha se hai...HELL

plz forgive ME pagal for this...

i know update me thora jyada time lag raha hai...but SUNDAY ko chappy pakka

thank you guys for bearing with me...love you all🤗

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#582

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch
SORRY BUDDYs...not being able to reply you...
my DEVIL job...pata nehi itna kaam ata kaha se hai...HELL

plz forgive ME pagal for this...

i know update me thora jyada time lag raha hai...but SUNDAY ko chappy pakka

thank you guys for bearing with me...love you all🤗

Finally...Sunday pakka na PP😕...Dhokka mat de...

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.GreekPrincess.

@.GreekPrincess.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#583

wow di...🤗
wt a lovey dovey teaser...😳😳
i luved it.beautifully written..plz update soon
aftr read teaser i cnt wait now...
isi baat pe arz kiya h...
aapke teaser pe me wari wari...

gaur farmaiye...

apke is teaser pe me wari wari...

update chappy 4 more shayri🤣😆

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#584

Kya classic teaser daala h yar...kaise wait kare hum :/
Jalal is in lovvveee!! :D

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Nikki

@NikkiReed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#585

Pri all ur chapters are super awesome... Jabardast... Loved all of them... And sorry for the late cmnt a as I can't come online for 1and a half week... And I got 48pms and need to cmnt all my fav ff's and ss's... In total love ur ff very much... Sorry Mai like and cmnt jyada Nahi kar payi but I read ur every update...

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bokul

@bokul

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#586

marvelous magnificent mind blowing update

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...jaskaran...

@...jaskaran...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#587

Amazing yaar.. continue soon😛

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#588

*Edited*

Prianka Charan kaha hai tumhare? Hahaha dekha kuch ghante baad bhi yeh dialogue change nhi hua mera 🤣
Yaar kya solid likha hai tumne! Matlab maan gayi mai aaj...bas maan gayi tumhe! I am in love with your writing man :O Especially with this story! Wow its just soo appealing! Not even jalal its abdul whose characterization is just making me fall for him *Drooolss* jalal ko jodha ke saath tu waise bhi set kar hi degi...mujhe abdul dede 😛 XD XD
Acha now coming to the update...i just love your description about each and every thing...whether its abdul's anxiety or be it jalal's behaviour. It just engrosses me into the story and nor do i feel that its getting boring or something. Its just perfect..i think i need some tips here.
Plus this whole update was jalal and abdul's and included the past. It was indeed fabulously written. Jalal ka gussa..ufff! Khair he himself is Ufff 😆😉
Agar jalal ka behaviour aisa hi raha na toh end mei abdul ke alawa koi bachega nahi shaadi ke liye! Aur abdul ko mai lene dungi nahi..ab sab tere haath mei hai dost...jalal ko thoda dimaag de aur usse bol ki sirf rico nahi jodha bhi hai saath mei! 😎
And update soon 🤗

Edited by surbhimathur - 11 years ago