AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 2: Chap 7-10 - Page 16

Originally posted by: Pals2411

Originally posted by: SARA4444

woi toh rico saya kidhar se😆

late kyu 'aayga di?😲😭

teaser toh dena tha na

aur ss bhi update karne ka ha di😆

Originally posted by: lashy

I loved the first red parts of him recollecting her... somehow I could sense a gentler side to his uncontrolled passion in THAT bit - obviously, what followed was very disturbing...😳

hmm yeh banda bada hi confuse hai...but ganda hai...

Jalal got up from bed and entered the washroom. He turned on the shower. Six different outlets were showering cold water on his bare body. Water droplets were running down his toned torso, dousing the fire within. Jalal placed both his palms on the wall...let the water drops run through his hair. Closing his eyes, he lifted his face to let the shower flood his face. The chillness of water was cooling his body, but his inner self was yet to find peace. Jalal pressed his forehead against the wall...trying hard to push her away from his mind...trying hard to find some peace, but with every failed attempt he could feel his grip loosing...he could feel his thoughts growing wilder.

ye oopar waalaa para reminded me exactly of Not just a passionate affair waalaa chapter after Jodha told him 'No' 😆

hai...kis time ki yaad diladi aapne...yeh un dino ki baat hai...jab hum apke jallu ke diwane hua karte the...abhi toh is FF ki chakkar me...kuch bhi pad nehi pati...am so frustrated these days...

I LOVED the description of Simla and I loved even more the manner in which he was resting on his bonnet and enjoying the quiet lake...

my fav posture...bada maza ata hai...kabhi try karna...akele mat chale jana lake ke paas...kahi jallu mil gaya toh...

I LOVED the detailed description of Jodha coming out of the water too... bahut sensual thaa...

😳😳

Readers could sense the growing lust in Jalal's eyes ...the manner with which you've corresponded her 'looks' her 'actions' and his desires is marvellous re...I wish he'd stopped with only lusting her... because, what followed thereon was quite disturbing...

lusting me ruk jata toh story age kaise badta😆

And I think he does marry her na.. isn't that way Ruq says too... something that irks him a few chapters ago? 😳

ruk ne...impotent hone ka jikr kia tha...not about marrg😆...Go!!! I just said that😡

I thought Jalal might have guessed Rico to be his son - similar personalities.. the age that corresponds with when he last did ahem ahem etc..😆 chalo jaldi pata chal jaayega usko..

hume toh dekh ke hi pata chal gaya woh Jalal ka beta hai...magar yeh kambakht Jodha se age dekhe tab na...Abdul ki bhi nehi suni...

Can't wait to read the next update..please update soon! 😳

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

Originally posted by: Arieltabi

Khud itna confusion create karti hai phir bolti hai have a coke 😡 .
This chap was just awesome. Pls update the next one soon na. Okay fine then take 1 week and update next sunday na pls.

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

4-5 din our dede

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

rehne bhi de bhabya...tu bata tune kaunse part skip kiye