AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 2: Chap 7-10 - Page 15

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

babya pehle pad to le😡

Originally posted by: Parijatrocks

padliya poora...accha tha...lekin chota tha...poora poora change karke rakdiya wow...👏 but kaise bhaag gayi phir se...

dhoondo jodha ka bhi thoda FB hona hai next chappy maein...this jalal is so much haan pehle baar dekha aur jaha mili wahi pe mauke pe chauka...

Originally posted by: SARA4444

dii amazing chapter 👏👏

the flashback.. was hot 😳

rico kidhar se saya di????😕

super update

update soon 😊

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

ganda Jalal...😡

anyway bhabya this is first time u have actually commented on the chapy...😆

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

thanks for liking it dear...

yaar sabhi pooch rahe hai..Rico kaha se aya...😆

update late ayega re

I loved the first red parts of him recollecting her... somehow I could sense a gentler side to his uncontrolled passion in THAT bit - obviously, what followed was very disturbing...😳

Jalal got up from bed and entered the washroom. He turned on the shower. Six different outlets were showering cold water on his bare body. Water droplets were running down his toned torso, dousing the fire within. Jalal placed both his palms on the wall...let the water drops run through his hair. Closing his eyes, he lifted his face to let the shower flood his face. The chillness of water was cooling his body, but his inner self was yet to find peace. Jalal pressed his forehead against the wall...trying hard to push her away from his mind...trying hard to find some peace, but with every failed attempt he could feel his grip loosing...he could feel his thoughts growing wilder.

ye oopar waalaa para reminded me exactly of Not just a passionate affair waalaa chapter after Jodha told him 'No' 😆

I LOVED the description of Simla and I loved even more the manner in which he was resting on his bonnet and enjoying the quiet lake...

I LOVED the detailed description of Jodha coming out of the water too... bahut sensual thaa...

Readers could sense the growing lust in Jalal's eyes ...the manner with which you've corresponded her 'looks' her 'actions' and his desires is marvellous re...I wish he'd stopped with only lusting her... because, what followed thereon was quite disturbing...

And I think he does marry her na.. isn't that way Ruq says too... something that irks him a few chapters ago? 😳

I thought Jalal might have guessed Rico to be his son - similar personalities.. the age that corresponds with when he last did ahem ahem etc..😆 chalo jaldi pata chal jaayega usko..

Can't wait to read the next update..please update soon! 😳

Originally posted by: Parijatrocks

accha maine bahuth baar comment maari hai...rhico rhico

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

and chota chota...log toh kuch our samajh ne lage the😆