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hemakeerti

@hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: ..dreamygatz..

thank u dear for appreciating my work! 😳
hey, i din gt wat u meant? can u just quote that line.. then i may understand! 😃

I was referring to this line gayatri.. "Ever since death of his Jalal has gone careless, he too made mistake in the functioning of his school"

On whose death has he gone careless?

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Gayatri

@FeistyQueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

I was referring to this line gayatri.. "Ever since death of his Jalal has gone careless, he too made mistake in the functioning of his school"

On whose death has he gone careless?

thanks for pointing it out.. i missed out a word.. will edit it..

its not father's but its "ever since death of his love"😛

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

fantastic supertb lovely update... continue sooon & do pm

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harshita singh

@oshinchaudhary

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

I hv unres my post on page .11... see I did remember it this tym😆

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Gayatri

@FeistyQueen

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: oshinchaudhary
Res...unres
I loved this chapter actually I love how dis story is shaping
Omg jo admittied that she has a crush on that unknown guy (jalal) that to infront of him only😆
I wonder hw will she react when she'll find out the truth...
Mogambo kush hua...😆 ...😆 ...
Keep giving such good update..
N update soon...

thank u so much... 🤗

i will do my best to update on time.. else poke me 😛

wait n see how stroy unfolds.. hope u ll like it 😉