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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
@ LD
🤗 Big big hug for this review... thanks so much da...
Sorry for another review...Bear with me...There are certain songs which are catchy and hummable...You instantly love them, hum them continuously and they become a rage within no time...While there are certain songs that after 3-4 times of hearing, give you a beautiful feeling and you keep on humming them even after the movie has gone long back...😃...This chapter falls in the second category...This chapter grows on you after you read it a couple of times...And that is exactly what I felt...😃... ...I have selected some sections of this chapter that I loved the most😃
This made my hour, day, week.. whatever
'Ro raha hu mai? Perfect lyrics...' came their comments

'Abbe ro hi rahaa thaa... gaa nahin rahaa thaa!'

That was really good...I laughed too, along with them😆
😆 Bichaaraa yaar...sportive hai.. main hoti tho ekdam chup ho jaati...

I know your girl is already impressed ...ab aur kitna impression jamaiga mere Jallu😉... But your girl again fell for your muscular charms...Hai re meri Jo ... tu to pakki gayi kaam se😆

Impression thodi jamaa rahaa tha... he was just making it reader's paradise.. ma'am khud ba khud impresswa ho gayee.. 😆

the manner with which she'd snugly made him her home.

Jo is coming out of her shell slowly and steadily😳...Jallu is very happy...and so are we😳😳😉
Awww yes... I loved it...
'I'll try...' he grinned, slowly beginning to run his fingers from her forehead all the way through her long wavy hair that cascaded across the swing. Pursuing with his mischief; Jalal continued to check out her enticing features with unbroken gazes, while she attempted very hard to concentrate on her story. Sometime later and she had to give up

'Jalal' she protested softly, closing his eyes with her hand 'Stop staring at me and READ your book!'

I loved all the above...Word by word😳...He staring at her lovely face with unbroken gaze😳...finding it hard to concentrate and so does she😳...She closed his eyes with her hand😳...But he still continues caressing her forehead and lovely long locks😳...I can imagine Parijat doing that in front of my eyes while swinging and reading😳...

Kab karenge serial waalaa akdha.. no hope only

After making it through a few pages in this fashion, Jodha subsequently spoke up on a mild note 'Jalal...what you're doing to my hair is undoubtedly A-M-A-Z-I-N-G...but, anymore of this and I'm just going to fall off asleep on you...'

😳😳 ...I loved her line
Awww 😆

'Keep guessing' she teased him, flipping another page as she did so

😳😳 ... I love this line too...They keep their relationship interesting by taunting, teasing and keeping each other on the toes😳😳
I knowww 😳

Anywhere? Surprisingly, despite a thorough investigation he found none. So, she wasn't joking? She genuinely loved to watch him sing? Wow!

He is so used to thinking beneath her words that he cant believe that there was nothing beyond her dialogue😆...Jo ek din Jallu ko pagal kar degi😆
EXACTTTLY... he is so used to reading double meaning.. single meaning mushkil se pad paa rahaa..😆
Kneading his forehead with his fingers, he exhaled awkwardly 'Hmmm...but promise me you're not gonna making a habit of this...'

'I'll try...' she giggled

😆😆 Come on Jo...😆...Tere Jallu ko pareshan kar...I love that😆
Bichaaraa... 😭

We will not only like but also add comments...Not just one but many...Till you say, this writer is fed up and needs no encouragement from harassing readers😆...Please stay away😆
Awww sweetu...thanks so so so so much big grizzly bear hugs my dear.. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Grizzly bear hugs...Aise wale kya😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Pals2411

Grizzly bear hugs...Aise wale kya😳😳

Something that brought the BIGGEST smile to my face
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
@dodoneha

First of all 🥳 🥳CONGRATULATIONS 4 d new thread🥳🥳
Thank you my dearest 🤗

as 4 update it was wow😲 really awsome⭐️
Thanks again!

loved d teasing session😉... liked reading dis new singing hunars of jalal😉...
New singing hunars... awww I loved the way you've worded it.. 😆

i really love both jalals nd jodhas personality in ur story😛...And espcially loved deir moment of peace... it was too good... nothing cheesy or exceptional lavish seetings... but still they both managed 2 have d moment of peace with each other while deriving pleasure from others company😃
Thanks sooo much... I'm waiting ki aise kab mil jaaye serial mein bhi
And now jo has become so easy going in jalals company... now she has no qualms inasserting her rights over him😳
Yup!
dis stalker has become so daring now😡... after sending lewd texts, i guess he has started calling her also🤢... i guess we will soon know d identity of dis stalker😊 right??
Not very soon dear.. no.. 😊 but yes, he is getting bolder..
thanks 4 d pm😳 nd plzz update soon😉
Thanks dear for the comments 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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When is the next update Lashy😳...Thursday ya Friday😳...Picnic ke next part ka intezaar hai😉😳 ...What will Jo give Jallu during this picnic ---- glass painting of his and Robbie or something involuntary from Jo to Jallu that left incomplete due to Renu entering😡...OR MAYBE BOTH😳😳😳...Jo gifts glass painting and Jallu gives return gift to Jo☺️ ...When is the next update...Tab tak khayali pulav banati rahungi🥱😭
Edited by Pals2411 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Congrats on thread # 3 !! 👏
Enjoyable, terrific part ! Smiling and chuckling whilst reading it. It's a lovely group that you showed. Loved them in this avatar. And Jalal ke kya kehne !! Awwe shoo cute !! ❤️ Be it singing/braying (hehehe...kya wrds use karti ho yaar !) or setting the perfect spot! And this Jodha...amazing!
Update soon... did u really have to end on this cliffhanger..huh? Jaldi pardafaash karo do ab!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

congrats for the new thread...
part 31 n 32
awesome updates...

Thanks so much dear 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
@nims23
Hi Shrads..how are you dear? You know that I have been a silent reader of this forum since the serial hs started... but finally, its your ff, your writing..which has made me write this comment :)
What can I say about this ff yaar ??... I am already fida over your writing.. this is one more feather in your cap... really awesome ff...
I liked these JA.. :)
so, part 32 ended with a suspense !!!!..oopsss... I think the caller is Jodha's suitor... am I right or am I right?? Wink****
Lots of love...
What can I say other than I'm might mighty mighty mighty touched nims.. thanks sooo much dear and I hope to keep you entertained in future chaps too 🤗
Are you right? Dekhna padega dear...😆 mwah! 😛
Edited by lashy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: RKholic

It was as usual amazing😊👍🏼

Thanks yaar 😃

@J2lover
aweiee...thnxx for that NICKIIEE NAME...😳😳.but why do u find me LITTLE...😳
Arre you only told me na that you're yet to go to college.. so I called you lil.. 😛

Awww I hope you get such a group... btw, such a Jalal bhi chaahiye ya sirf group se hi kaam chalaa loge 😆
only if JALLU MILEGA TOH HI...☺️☺️
😆 Ok ok.. mil jaayega tum chinta mat karo

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Posted: 11 years ago
@ LD
]When is the next update Lashy😳...Thursday ya Friday😳...Picnic ke next part ka intezaar hai😉😳 ...What will Jo give Jallu during this picnic ---- glass painting of his and Robbie or something involuntary from Jo to Jallu that left incomplete due to Renu entering😡...OR MAYBE BOTH😳😳😳...Jo gifts glass painting and Jallu gives return gift to Jo☺️ ...When is the next update...Tab tak khayali pulav banati rahungi🥱😭
Hmmm awww thanks dearie.. my thursday night maane aapki Friday morning... 😳
Edited by lashy - 11 years ago

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