FF: Desert Rose (Chapter 7, Pg 35) 11/07 - Page 3

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

You felt that too? It was the strangest sequence I have seen in the show! Never seen both of them so uncomfortable and the editing was so bad! BDs are used all the time in some shows but the editing saves the day always. This was horrifying in its editing cuz it all looked like air kisses. Pari didn't even kiss his hand! And he kissed her maangtika, not forehead o_O

maybe it happened during the quitting fiasco

Vow Amazing ... Continue soon... and if possible can you please pm me when u update... Thanks

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

Why do you think I chose to write this? Annoyed with the show, at present. The CVs are messing it up!

Awesome start dear.
Today I just read ur another work. That was really passionate. Loved it. U r a very good writer dear. U write those passion that feeling really very beautifully.
pls continue soon. And I m 18+ So no problem in reading 😉 😆

I was a big fan of your last FF.😳So Happy to see you back here.😃 ❤️ 😳 🤗
This one has an Awesome Start...👏 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️Totally loved the prologue.❤️ 😳 ❤️
Pls continue soon and PM me too.😳 😳

P.S.:- Umm,I'll be 18 this year,But I love to read your work and the passion you create between Akdha so I'm deffo reading.😳

very intoxicating storyline ... absolutely wonderful plz continue ... i loved it 😊

Nice start.👍🏼 Continue soon and PM me if possible 😛

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Vow Amazing ... Continue soon... and if possible can you please pm me when u update... Thanks

Thanks for the encouraging words. Will put up the PM list on the first page asap 😊

Originally posted by: SUMESHNI

Awesome start

Plz continue soon

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: Kesha_H.

ik those stupid camera angles not giving the situation the passion it deseves its so unfair mayne hope u can do justice plz pm me the next piece... but dude i just read this piece n it was so totally awesome so far she seems attracted to him sexually can't blame her lol jalal is a hottie 😆 love her a aggressiveness n stubbornness reminds me of myself when I am arguing with my guy friends lol 😆

Haha 😆 How I love it when people expand their feedback to tell me more about how they felt. I save my stubbornness for my boyfriend 😛 My friends have a lot more to bear about me. I am putting up the first chapter soon. No Jalal yet, but my next update will have him for sure. He is seriously a hottie! ☺️ Yep, I will put up the PM list too. Lemme know if your name isn't there. And keep giving me your feedback!