~||Teri Saason Mei Aisey Baas Jau||~ CH5 updated 9th July pg 43

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...janu...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

nice one thanks for the pm plz continue soon

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SIVARANJANI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

superbly written loved to read the updates

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onaisa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

It was really awwwsum ! 👍🏼

Plz update sooon 😊

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bhavisweet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..
Tha k u so much bhavs 🤗

aahaan lovely name u gave me
bhavs 🤗

Btw really amazing story Tahni dear 😊

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bhavisweet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

will wait fr next update

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PoPo/PoPu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Arrrghh.. Jalal.. couldn't he regret b4 even touching her... I want passionate Jalal 😳 Next update sooon

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

till part 3
nice...
so Jodha has run away from her Kingdom and landed at Jalal's place...
and HB is supporting her to escape...
cont soon dear...

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Awesome!!! 👏👏👏👏👏Superb!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I am officially announcing that I am in love with this story... Feels so fresh... going through their journey all over again... This story is like magnet... I am waiting for update for this story... once a week is not fair... twice a week kar de Jaan...

Love entire chapter... Thank god U have not shown Hamida too dramatic... I don't like too senti... She should be practical... and support her son too... I like when she shut her up when she said I will kill him... I am glad she tried to save her from him...

After seeing roses he thought about her... Vow he is fall for her beauty... wants to lust her beauty... My heart torn for Jodha... Poor girl is so scared... ghar se bhagi aur fas gayi... Vow...She dares to point dragger at him...she hurt his manly ego... she awake monster in him...OMG... her tears shatter my heart... he hungrily kissed her... so sad... my tears came out...Jodha...life less doll... my heart cried out loud..Your words really put dragger in my heart... I am glad he stopped it... and apologies... At least he has some decency...Thank god... Even after apology... His attitude is their... he wants to take revenge from her... I can't wait for more... Superb update... Very emotional... and Scary... I AM IN LOVE WITH UR WRITING... LOVE U SWEETU🤗🤗🤗 (SORRY FOR LATE COMMENT)