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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok a scene for me is when Jallu was looking at Jodha who was in the palki on her way to the Ganghaur festival with the voice over ... The way Jallu was gazing at Jodha was
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Scene writer1: likh rahe honge...aaj jalal jodha ko ache se dono haath pakdega...

Scene Writer 2: don nahin ek haath bas...

SW1: bas palm touch hoga.,.not more than that...

SW2: think he...bas 2 sec ke liye...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: VincyAnne

Ok a scene for me is when Jallu was looking at Jodha who was in the palki on her way to the Ganghaur festival with the voice over ... The way Jallu was gazing at Jodha was



The Voiceover was so good ..se*y n jalal's expressions my god...i felt as if he is going to make love to t jodha then n thr only...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: subha_rath2004



The Voiceover was so good ..se*y n jalal's expressions my god...i felt as if he is going to make love to t jodha then n thr only...


Uh huh me too ... ☺️ Jodha you better be careful Jalal can be a very passionate lover I tell you 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: VincyAnne


Uh huh me too ... ☺️ Jodha you better be careful Jalal can be a very passionate lover I tell you 😳



yesterday i was imagining a beaituful scene...

i am writing in short ok...

1. jallu is drinking in his khema...
2. jodha comes to say something from her side...(something like i admire u)
3.. jalal tells her to sit..
4. jodha n jalal talk a lot..
5. jalal is still drinking n is now almost about to fall whle standing up
6. jalal tells jodha that he drank more than his usual amount because he couldnt realise it as he was talking to her
7. jodha helps jalal in goig to his bed as jalal cannot walk proeprly...
8. while making him sleep, jalal sleeps on jodha duppatta...
9. jdoha tries to take it out...but couldnt,..she further doesnt try as she doenst wanna disturb jalal...
10. so she tries to sleep thr only on bed...
11. morning shows...
12. jalal's arms around jodhas belly n jodhas back side -jalal's front
13. jalal first gets up n sees jodha like this...he is shocked n thinks what happened...he is a bit gulity as well as confused...
14. as soon as jodha wakes up jalal pretends to sleep...
15. then jodha gets up n sees herself like this.
16. she immedialtely runs away as now no dupatta problem
17. after sometime, both meet in angoori bagh...

rest i will write...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: subha_rath2004



yesterday i was imagining a beaituful scene...

i am writing in short ok...

1. jallu is drinking in his khema...
2. jodha comes to say something from her side...(something like i admire u)
3.. jalal tells her to sit..
4. jodha n jalal talk a lot..
5. jalal is still drinking n is now almost about to fall whle standing up
6. jalal tells jodha that he drank more than his usual amount because he couldnt realise it as he was talking to her
7. jodha helps jalal in goig to his bed as jalal cannot walk proeprly...
8. while making him sleep, jalal sleeps on jodha duppatta...
9. jdoha tries to take it out...but couldnt,..she further doesnt try as she doenst wanna disturb jalal...
10. so she tries to sleep thr only on bed...
11. morning shows...
12. jalal's arms around jodhas belly n jodhas back side -jalal's front
13. jalal first gets up n sees jodha like this...he is shocked n thinks what happened...he is a bit gulity as well as confused...
14. as soon as jodha wakes up jalal pretends to sleep...
15. then jodha gets up n sees herself like this.
16. she immedialtely runs away as now no dupatta problem
17. after sometime, both meet in angoori bagh...

rest i will write...


Wow this is awesome !!! Plz do continue ...
Maybe Jallu thought that something happened between them ... ☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: VincyAnne


Wow this is awesome !!! Plz do continue ...
Maybe Jallu thought that something happened between them ... ☺️



generally the girl thinks that something happened...but this time the boy will think...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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16.before they meet in angoori bagh, jodha comes to her room...n thinks what just happened between them...they were sleeping like that...

17. she is very embarassed as just what happened...

18. she thinks that perhaps jalal doesnt know this...so she thinks better not to talk about anything...

19. jalal is in room...having a hamam...he is confused...happy...sad...guilty all in one...a bit angry on himself as he is thinking whether he did something forcefully on her...

20. jalal remembers till the point jodha carries him to bed...after that he doesnt remember...

21.jalal sees sees a scratch mark on his neck...(the neck mark happened when jallu fell suddenly on the bed...n jodha's nails scratched his neck)

22. he is just not sure what happened...he feels very embarrased...he feels he cheated on jodha...but at the same time he thinks if he cheated then why jodha was sleeping there whole night...was she ready for it...

23. he is confused...he wanted to talk to jodha regarding this...but what shall he ask...he is afraid if he says something then jodha might be angry...or he is afraid as what to ask jodha...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i'm the queen of GM ☺️
Angoori bagh scene ...

Jodhu standing , Jalal comes , he bck hugs her and kissed her shoulders and her neck ... smelling her fragnance ...

then opens her blouse dori .. kissing her bare back ... hayeee ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ---Mehak---

i'm the queen of GM ☺️

Angoori bagh scene ...

Jodhu standing , Jalal comes , he bck hugs her and kissed her shoulders and her neck ... smelling her fragnance ...

then opens her blouse dori .. kissing her bare back ... hayeee ❤️



maza aajayega agar yeh hua toh...CVs are not kind yar.,...
...GM activated hai morning se...actually 24X7...

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