~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair THD 2 ~*PART 31 Pg 127-UD 21st Apr! - Page 104

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Posted: 11 years ago
@jaskaran.kaur08
yaar u write so beautifully... nd i love the possessive jalal... kash ye bhi kiss puri ho jati😛😛😛...but i hope the next update willl be more romantic... nd i wonder who the stalker is???... tell me when r u going to update..
Hello dear,
Thanks for your lovely comments...🤗
more romantic.. 😲 yahaan par tho romance ki barsaat chaayi hui hai 😆 ...but, don't worry there's more..
Hmmm @ kiss... personally, me thinks the 'tension' behind the near-kiss was more than when they actually kissed 🤔

Thanks so so so much dearie once again... 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
I feel that the fact that they didn't kiss, but instead played with each others' eyes...felt that tension... that passionate moment... was more thrilling and enjoyable than if the kiss actually took place! SO I LOVED that scene! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Lashy,

I'm back for a proper comment now. I'd posted a small "commenti" some pages back. But wanted to give a proper compliment too.

Again, a really good update. Somehow your stalker's letter gave me creeps. For a moment I felt YUCKS because of his words. I guess credit is all yours (not for the YUCKS 😆) for getting even such reactions from your readers. When are you going to reveal who the stalker is? Do it soon yaar.

Oh, how I wish, this kiss could completed between the lovebirds. But then again, I also feel, it's sweeter for being incomplete. Btw, what's with this Renu yaar? Did she fancy Jalal? If yes, how come she is not mentioned any time between these two. I remember once she was. Jodha said, even Renu was jealous. But Jalal's reply was like "That's different". So I assumed, it was different. 😆 and didn't spare her a second thought.

One more thing. Why have you not reserved more spaces for future updates? I think this was supposed to have around 50 parts, right? Then is there a reason for you not reserving spaces?

Arre yaar, hope you are not abandoning this amazing tale in half. 😲


Edited by flemingo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


@ Choti

Lol! I know my Soda... Intelligent gal she is.. waise uski and my soch mils a lot... 😆
I know 😆
Ek baat bolu Nams...ur great!!! Di told me the amount of effort you put into finding clues about the stalker..and I was😲😲 !! Accha bata na mujhe who it is😆😆
Yeah... I am gonna read that poem so many times, after deleting the last line, of course!
Yeah.. I'm gonna imagine Jalal having said those lines to her too
But I am so glad... They both met in the car after confession, and she got that lewd text...what did it result in? Their first hug!😳😳 Robbie's death resulted in their first 3 kisses 😳😳 The last bloody message resulted in the deadly hot passionate moment, without the kiss, which was even more enjoyable!😳😳 So I am thankful to the bad times, they always bring JoJa closer...closer..closer...!!! The trust, the love is only increasing 😳😳

Ooo👏

Trust me! I have NO NO NO hopes from the show... I can bet we are not gonna a get a simple proper kiss/hug/ passionate moment between Jo Ja... NO HOPES!
BUT... This story gives me everything and much more than I want! So I am thankful to this show, in which I am losing interest, that it made you give us this wonderful and most amazing FF!😃😳

I've given up choti.. I only read WU this week.. cos I can't stand the serial any more.. I'm going by the stories here only and these were some lovely lines my dear..🤗
I didn't even bother doing that yesterday! Bored of the show and mighty pissed off with certain characters!😡 Staying away so I don't end up becoming a mass murderer😵
Hee hee... many seemed to have liked this line..🤗
Liked it?? LOVED it!😳 ☺️

Ooo again

LOOOL!! How much I wish I got this NJAPA Jalal in my life... ☺️

I know... baant dete hain usko 😆 Sojji is going to kill me now..

Here I come...koun tha wo!!! Nathuuu😡😡😡 Diii😡😡😡 Mentioned something in my previous sentence...you both better not force me to become that..the targets will be different this time though!😈😆

Oh Please! I cannot imagine if only one of them goes on picnic...😭 I want BOTH of them to either go or not go... but obviously, 'kuch' masaaledaar masti should happen between these two ☺️ iykwim...☺️ ☺️

😆 Romancaaya nahama!

Rofl🤣 Mine is Jalaalaya Namaha😆 Yo Nams!😎 Btw, I can go in place of Jo..only that you don't replace her..shya!😆😆

PS : Why I ditched you thrice - The answer is awaiting you...😆
Ok gonna check! 😎

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Originally posted by: flemingo

Hey Lashy,

I'm back for a proper comment now. I'd posted a small "commenti" some pages back. But wanted to give a proper compliment too.

Again, a really good update. Somehow your stalker's letter gave me creeps. For a moment I felt YUCKS because of his words. I guess credit is all yours (not for the YUCKS 😆) for getting even such reactions from your readers. When are you going to reveal who the stalker is? Do it soon yaar.

Oh, how I wish, this kiss could completed between the lovebirds. But then again, I also feel, it's sweeter for being incomplete. Btw, what's with this Renu yaar? Did she fancy Jalal? If yes, how come she is not mentioned any time between these two. I remember once she was. Jodha said, even Renu was jealous. But Jalal's reply was like "That's different". So I assumed, it was different. 😆 and didn't spare her a second thought.

One more thing. Why have you not reserved more spaces for future updates? I think this was supposed to have around 50 parts, right? Then is there a reason for you not reserving spaces?

Arre yaar, hope you are not abandoning this amazing tale in half. 😲






Hey Sam!
The thread is going to get over soon. So next parts will be posted in next thread. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW...
AWESOME UPT
CONT SOON
Thanks dear 😳

@ Sojji Begum
Heyya diii...hope you had a wonderful trip!! Great to have you back here..that too with an update. Yippeee!! I didn't even expect an update so soon..so special hugs to you for this awesommee surprise! And it's WOW!!! Just an 'I loved it' is not done at all...Bass, it was beyond that..❤️
Awww thanks so so so so much 🤗

The change in Jo's character from the beginning has been beautiful...such a contrast, in terms of her opinion about gf-bf thing and never even imagining she would have a bf one day and be this changed Jo!! And now she's landed herself the BEST guy in the world!!☺️❤️😎
Yes, as I said yesterday this is the transitional story of a middle class young strong lady who comes from a traditional background breaking her boundaries😳

All those swear words, coming from Jalal were HOTTT bass...the possessive, worked up Jalal is a treat to visualise!! This guy can't get any hotter than he already is! And the cutest scene followed then, with Jo enjoying his jealousy and him teasing her back...these two are irresistible! Jo actually waited so long to kiss him? I couldn't have waited 2 secs! ☺️😆
😆

And as for the stalker...I somehow felt that card wasn't from Jalal and it really wasn't! Damn that stalker...if Jalal doesn't I'll wring his neck..pathetic loser!😡
Yesss 😡

And Jo's family...it was just a matter of time till it came up..and the fact that her mom noticed this small change in her was very realistic! You do notice these things..this time Jo got out of it but looks like it's going to take quite a lot of convincing later..😒
Yes that scene reminded me of many-a-scene from my bachpan too 😆

Loved the glass painting idea of hers...Jalal and Robbie..awww..😳🤗
Thanks so much da 🤗

Update soon...love ya loadsss🤗
Love you too dear 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Hi my little dearies, I'm thinking of putting the next update up on Friday😳



Yay waiting eagerly for friday 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome as usual
nice updates yaar
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please update as soon as possible!😭😛

Acha btw, I told you about my hot dream na...and you said that what if its not like that..

I just got another thought... the picnic may result in some mischief/action by stalker...or cheapo might play some trick!

But for one fact I am sure... this whole thing will be very exciting... and at the end of it...JoJa will come closer...😳

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