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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Awesome update!👏👏

Cant believe jalal actually spent night wid her..urrghhh😡 Poor Jo
I am so excited for next update!!
Bhavya this is an amazing SS.. update soon!

thanks nancy will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ufff bhavya😆 inna Idea aaya kaha se tujhe...
kitna mast likha hai😎 totally loved your idea... please update soon..
gosh would like to know exactly what had happened.. prank ke saath love hua joja ka ki nahi?
Adi kiska beta hai.. joja ka kyun lagg raha hai... ayyo..😆 tune suspense create kar dia..

But we are loving it..
jalal jo ke aisse na kar..😒 hush 😲 plus he said hez gonna make her pari's mum...

ye jallu na pranay ko khud batayega😆 very very confident i am... god knows pranay kaha se kudega.. just hope their flat isnt in heights😆

felt bad for jo.. but jallu ko kaise hate karu... it feels bahut bada kuch hua hai.
Bhavya maar mat... jaldi update dede.. 😆

am leaving from mumbai for a trip with family... mujhe mere flight catch karne se pehle update de,, i will die with suspense otherwise.. mere par daya kar

..Sorry for replying late.. was MIA for sometime.. but read the updates... could not reply.. sorrry...

all were brilliant👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: roshaeldsouza91

Ufff bhavya😆 inna Idea aaya kaha se tujhe...was writing SS than thought why not make him jallad



kitna mast likha hai😎 totally loved your idea... please update soon.. will update soon as much as possible... thanks for liking it

gosh would like to know exactly what had happened.. prank ke saath love hua joja ka ki nahi?

haan thats the suspense do the guess work till i reveal the past...if i reveal now only the curiosity will die in reading it...
Adi kiska beta hai.. joja ka kyun lagg raha hai... ayyo..😆 tune suspense create kar dia.... Adi is Jodhas son only that i can reveal now...

But we are loving it...thanku
jalal jo ke aisse na kar..😒 hush 😲 plus he said hez gonna make her pari's mum..... Jallad is gonna fulfill the promise he is very highly professional in commitment ...you will love his jallad janwar in him one day 😉

ye jallu na pranay ko khud batayega😆 very very confident i am .. haan kud batayega ek din...jodha nahin bolegi damn sure she is scared bechari... god knows pranay kaha se kudega.. just hope their flat isnt in heights😆 .. no pranay suicide nahin karega, already he is in true love with his wife..bechara married her knowing her past too...

felt bad for jo.. but jallu ko kaise hate karu... it feels bahut bada kuch hua hai... Hmm even i felt bad for jodhu ...dont hate him love him more when past is revealed...!!!!!
Bhavya maar mat... jaldi update dede.. 😆 ..ayyo i update every now and than

am leaving from mumbai for a trip with family... mujhe mere flight catch karne se pehle update de,, i will die with suspense otherwise.. mere par daya kar .. dont worry will update soon if i get idea to proceed

..Sorry for replying late.. was MIA for sometime.. but read the updates... could not reply.. sorrry...

all were brilliant👏..thanks again

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Posted: 11 years ago

See my response updated above😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update
But I really don't like this Jalal
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am so much into this SS now.. I want update
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...
feeling bad for jodha...
eagerly waiting to read next part...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 8:
(its just filler update so not sending any Pms to anyone)


jalal reaches his car and opens the door, he gets a call from the lawyers that the case is withdrawn, and PRanay will be released after the legal formalities for that sake jalals signatures are needed...

"Okie, i will be coming to station now..."

Jalal drives back to police station, the two lawyers will be waiting for him and jalal reaches on time...

Pranays lawyer feels happy and shakes hand with jalal...

"sir Myself, Atgah khan, i am pranays lawyer, sir thank you so much you agreed for out of court settlement, it took me so much effort to convince Mrs. Pranay,"

the lawyer was in no mood to leave jalals hand...

Jalal smiles

"Atgha khan, thank you very much you convinced her ... it took you more than half a month to convince her, but it took me just 8 minutes to convince her...by the way thanks for taking pranays case, and for fighting it to loose ..."

Atgah smiles...
"sir when you called me up to take Mrs. Pranays case, you had promised me that about the job in your company..."

"yes i remember, meet me in my office tomorrow, it will be your first day in the office..."

"thank you so much sir..."
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jalal signs the papers... and leaves the station...

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Police station...

After the formalities were completed... inspector asks pranay to come and sign the documents...

pranay seems doubtful..

"arrey bhai, you are so lucky, the owner of the company took back the case and because of you, even i got much money, and this lawyer got job at your company..."

Pranay self talk..

"how can jalal release me so easily, why he has done a favour this time..."

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Jodha sits beneath the shower and cries and rubs her skin roughly...she cries...
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jalal reaches home, and takes a glass and drinks...

"Jalal, why are you playing this game, she is married now...whatever happend to you in the past is not right, but taking revenge on jodha is also not right, and pranay is innocent jalal..."

Abdul speaks out...

Jalal turns to see him...

"tum, how come you came here...what a surprise visit..."

Jalal gets up and hugs him...

"i had to come here jalal, i got to know about what are you up to these days..."

"who told you"

"i get your every day information..."

"so you are spying on me..."

"i am your friend i have every right to look for your well being jalal..."
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Pranay reaches home, and rings the bell jodha hears the bell ring and gets scared what if he is jalal again...

she opens the door hesitatingly... and sees pranay at the door...

she is happy to see him and hugs him and breaks down... pranay too is happy and kisses her on her forehead...


"jodha stop crying i am back safely, i missed you and adi a lot..."

"i too missed you, pranay lets go from here, i dont want to be here in this city...lets go"

Pranay breaks the hug and looks at her..

"jodha calm down, i am fine, jalal himself released me, i cant believe why he arrested me when he had to release me, there is no need for us to run away from him, we are not wrong, lets face him, untill and unless i teach him a lesson, i am not gonna sleep peacefully..."

they both move inside the house and jodha closes the door...

Pranay sits and asks for a coffee, jodha reaches the kitchen, she is not able to concentrate on anything as yesterdays night incident has disturbed her...

she starts talking to herself...
"why did you jodha?? you would have shown some courage, how could you cheat him"

She pours the milk in to vessel and place it on the stove...

"if i had not agreed pranay would have been in jail only, what i did was times priority"

she gets tea powder bottle and mixes it in vessel...

"but i have done a sin, how could i do it, just to get my work done, i sold myself to him"

she wipes her tears...

"i slept with him to save pranays life, i dont want pranays life to be ruined because of me.."

She adds sugar to the tea...

"but it was a sin, whatever the reason may be, i made a mistake...i would have waited for few more days"

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Pranay keeps his hand on her shoulders...

Jodha gets scared and turns around...

pranay comforts her..

"jodha its me why are you so scared its me pranay..."

jodha wipes her tears...

"no, i am not scared, you suddenly touched me na, when i was thinking something else so "

"its okie i understand, is coffee ready..."

"haan its ready"

jodha serves him tea instead of cofee...

Pranay smiles and takes the sip..

"jodha its tea not coffee... whats wrong with you, i think you need to rest.."

"no pranay i am fine,..."

"you are lying to me jodha you are not fine...go and rest for sometine..."

Jodha wont agree but pranay makes her sleep...

he pats her head to make her sleep...

"jodha where is adi??"

"i sent him to my friends house for few days, i will call him back now..."
"okie you did good thing, but his school is missed na"

"haan dont worry, i will make it up"

Pranay starts caressing her head... he sees some marks on her neck...he uncovers her hairs hiding it...

"jodha what is this its some rashes here..."

Jodha moves her hand over there...she immediately gets up...


"nothing pranay, i fell in bathroom yesterday so i got some scratches in my body, i have applied ointment you dont worry, nothing serious..."'

'jodha relax, you speak with one go, take some air..."

Pranay makes her sleep and goes out of the room and picks up newspaper and gathers all the information regarding the case ...

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"Abdul, you are my friend, but i have not given you rights to talk in my personnel matter, when its related to jodha..."

"but jalal, you are hurting yourself "

"the bad days of my life is over long back abdul, now its black days of jodhas life, she will loose everything in her life..."

"jalal think once more, what if she takes wrong decision"

"dont worry abdul she will never die, even her death is written by me"
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Jodha could not sleep peacefully as she was guilty for what happened...

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jodha comes out of the room and sees pranay is reading all the old newspapers and collecting information about the case...

"jodha, you got up so soon, why dint you sleep for some more time...by the way, can you give me the lawyers number, i wanted to speak to him.."

Jodha gets scared...
"pranay, why are you digging up, forget it, i said na lets move out from this city, i spoke to salima she is ready to get us job in Delhi...lets shift from here..."

"jodha, i am not going anywhere, unless i teach jalal a lesson i will not run from this city..by the way how did he took this case back, i felt the case was so strong against me, and all the proofs were against me...Jodha did you speak to him"

Jodha gets scared...

"haan pranay, i begged him for your release and he agreed that was out of court settlement..."

Pranay gets angry and gets up...

Jodha is guilty and scared...

"jodha you begged him for my release, why did you do it..."

pranay gets angry on jodha and holds her arms tightly ...

"pranay i dint had any other option left...so"

pranay releases her when he sees her crying in pain...

"i am sorry jodha, i understand he would have forced you to beg him for my release...!!!!, what else can he do..."

"pranay leave his matter, please lets move out from here..."

"no jodha i have agreed everything till thid day, but i wont from now on"

Pranay moves out of the house saying that he will meet his few friends and come back in the evening...

Jodha is worried that if pranay comes to know the truth what will happen to their relation...

Jodha gets a call from jalal...

she picks it up in one ring...

"good jodha, you picked it so early, congrats your husband is back home, did you say about the out of court settlement..."

jodha cries and wipes her tears...

"jodha you are crying, dont cry now only, you will get many more oppertunites to shed your tears...dont waste them in one day"

Jodha stops crying and listens to him...

"hmm jodha, actually i got a new offer for you and your husband, actually my house need a supervisor cum wife who takes care of all the needs of my house i have selected you for the job...and your husband can work in my office again...so tell him to join the duty soon with all due respect and dont forget to meet me in my home tomorro..."

"no i wont "

"jodha if you wont agree than, unfortunately i will tell about your compromise with me, and than think of the consequences so do as i said, tell your husband to join the company again, anyways my PA will be informing him..."

Jaalal cuts the call and laughs mercilessly... jodha cries as she dont have any other option left now...

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Pranay meanwhile gets the call from the PA to join the duty from tomorrow, his frinds too advice him to join the job again...

pranay thinks about this proposal from jaalal;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;



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Precap: Jodha reaches his home, and abdul invites her inside the house...


Edited by Parijatrocks - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Parijatrocks

thanks bhavi, but jallal is here is jallad soon he will realize he is wrong...

Hey I can't wait for more... U are amazing in story track... twist and turn... this update took my sleep from me... love U Bhavya for the dare... U Rock Sweet heart...😳 Us Jallad Jallu ko tadpana... gin gin ke badla lena... kamina...😡 I am taking out my frustration... Actually I post my comment after reading immediately ...to kuch jyada senti hogaya... lol...😆

OMG !!!! HORRAY UPDATE HO GAYA ME FIRST ONE... HOORAY
Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Bhavya U R amazing Writer👏👏👏... U R creativity I salute... Superb... U know that i am in tears and my heart is crying😭😭😭... I can't bear her pain😕... I love this story to core... update soon... CVS ki tarah hame rulana nahi... Pata nahi kyu par this story directly hit to my heart...👏👏👏
Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago

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