||~*~PariJat OS: 'A Cherished Christmas Eve'~*~|| - Page 3

Originally posted by: happygolucky099

awesome dear👏

loved it MUZ😳

Seems like got a good reply after ages 🤢 😆 😛

Originally posted by: roshaeldsouza91

😭😭 Nehu you made me cry dear

This was such a brilliant piece... i never thought maggie cuts her hair could be adapted here so beautifully.. such a beautiful way of presenting such lovely O.S🤗 Thanks dear🤗

akdha and this story clubbed together.. super thought dear,,,👏

Unconditional Love for each other you showed between them.. awesome work..

P.S: Sorry for late reply was busy earlier😒

p.p.s: Please write more and do pm me🤗

Originally posted by: pupumon

Utterly Sorry for being so late that u had to remind me

Well i haven't read The Gift of Magi so it was really fresh for me to read ur OS but the first thing that came to my mind was a chapter from the ever so famous Little Women! Where Jo sells her hair for a gift too. If u hadn't wrote it was ur first attemt to OS i would not have known, it is almost perfect to be published commercially! Neha, your degree is certainly working 😆😆 I wish you continue giving such fabulous piece of writings more often... It was good to have Parijat in it than the usual AkDha.

Well i hate writing long posts so i'll end it here. Keep updating n plz don't be angry if i don't respond soon, der hai par andher nahi i try to read all my the FFs here as soon as possible, next tym i won't let u remind me 😃😃

Originally posted by: sweetystubborn

My meethi ka laddu 🤗❤️🤗 First at all sorry for this unpleasant delay of mine to review on your OS as you were obligated to remind me so that I can *unres* I have RES everywhere that sometimes it's difficult to find back the OS to *unres* it as they are lots of authors and stories here on forum 😃😃 Coming back on your story , I was really glad to find out that your's story on AKDHA is different from all other versions as I was bored to read the same story everywhere so wanted to read something different and you have come up with this one 👏👏⭐️ Well , it's sad that Akdha are living in poverty and don't have much income even on christmas eve , they're so poor that they couldn't afford anything on christmas for each other 😭😭 but how they sacrificed for each other's happiness by selling the most precious thing they have , just to buy a gift for each other 😳😭😛 It's touched me , they were spiced up of love , sadness , happiness and sacrifice 👏👏😳 Love it 👏❤️👏 They spend christmas in each other's arms , fill of love ☺️☺️❤️ So touching and lovely 🤗❤️🤗 It was a superb mix of different emotions 👏👏⭐️ It's wonderful and a treat for us to read it 😳😳😛

A big *tight hug* and thanks for you to share it here 🤗🤗

You should write more laddu 😳😳❤️ From me you have 1000000000000000 likes 👏👏⭐️ Keep it up 😛😛

OMG OMG OMG.!! Such an awesome pretty longish review of my first ever OS here???? 😲 I'm flattered and elated to the core seriously.!!! Thanks a ton for appreciating my efforts honey, Gladly my story touched your heart

Fabulous write up..your way with words is magical... 😃