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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess_saumya

hey guya yaar pallu update kuin nhai de rahi hai hum mare ja rahe hain updateke liye!!!!!

please de do!! ma🤢

pllss someone tell her to close the thread... i really want that😡😡😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
This update i would like to dedicate to jaskaran, bhavu, vasu, preet, nancy and everyone who requested so dearly for it😳
esp jaskaran...jiski dhamkiya abhi bhi mere kaano me gunj rahi hai😆

Chapter 31: -

(Oh god...here Jalal challenged the Raajvanshi khoon...she replied back with a wider smirk..."MANZOOR...DEKHTE HAI KISKI HAAR HOTI HAI AUR KISKI JEET..."...and she moved out from the room...walking proudly with a victory look on her face...Jalal shook his head saying..."HMMM...DEKHTE HAI JODHA BEGUM...AAP KAISE SAAMNA KARTI HAI HUMARE MOHABBAT BHARE WAARO KA..."...and he laughed out trickily...)

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(Jodha reached her room and quickly got into the washroom...she freshens up and taken the bath...she got dressed into a cream satin bathing cloth covering only the required portion of her body...From upper chest till the knees...)

Jodha: - (while running her hands over her arm...washing out the turmeric paste...with a smirk) samajhte kya hai apne aapko??...hume chunauti dege ...jodha ko ...mana ke hum unse prem karte hai...kintu yudh shetra me koi premi ya pati nahi hota...sirf shatru hota hai...aur aaj hum unhe dikha ker rahege...ke wo chahe jo bhi kar le kintu hum bhi piche hatne walo me se nahi hai...aur na hi hume koi bhay hai unse...huh...bade aaye shenshah e hind...ek baar harne ke baad bhi dobara harne ke liye taiyaar baithe hai...theek hai(shrugging her shoulders)...yadi unki yehi mansha hai...to wo bhi aaj puri kar hi dege hum...(And she giggled to herself covering her mouth with her hand...)

(In her self talk...she dint noticed when all baandhis left the place and now she was all alone there...and at once a sarcastic voice broke the chain of her thoughts..."Badi hansi aa rahi hai Jodha Rani sa??"...she turned at once to have a look at the owner of the voice...as the voice seemed too husky and heavy to be a baandhi's...)

Jodha: - (confused and casually) ye tumhari avaz ko kya hua Mo... (But she couldn't complete her sentence as her eyes widen in shock to see someone she was not expecting to...) shenshah??...aap??

Jalal: - (with lot of mischief...coming closer to her) kyu??...nahi aa sakte kya??

Jodha:- (she splashed some water over her face to confirm if it was a dream like the previous one...but no...he was there...right in front of her...approaching her with little steps...with his eyes fixed over her...)...ki...kintu...aap yaha...yaaha...kyu??...kab??... (She noticed her condition...her lower body was completely soaked in the water...rose petals were clinging to her neck and shoulders...her arms still had some unwashed turmeric paste remaining on them...her slightly shifted clothing revealing her cleavage beautifully...noticing all this and his piercing killer expressions...a chill ran down her spine and she was not able to hold her blush...she started to cover her bosom part with her little hands...adjusting the sheer cloth that was wrapped around her body...she was not even able to meet his passionate gaze...Jalal smirked seeing her shyness...he was too lost in her eternal beauty...)

Jalal: - (taunting) ab kya hua aapko??...bolti kyu band ho gayi??...abhi to bahut hansi aa rahi thi... (He came forward and sits over the marble railing build around the bath tub...but as soon as he seated himself over there...Jodha moved to the other corner...she was turning completely red like a strawberry...still trying to cover her front part with her hands...Jalal was thoroughly enjoying her embarrassment...He decide to tease her a bit more as it was the most pleasurable thing for him in the whole world to do...he swiftly shifted towards the corner while sitting...where Jodha has moved and leaned really close to her face ...Jodha could feel his warm...long breaths over her cheeks and lips...she at once got scared with this sudden action of his...it happened so quickly...but before she could react or utter a word...he shushed her up by putting his index finger on her wet lips..."shhh"...then leaned more close to observe her flustered face... with a sigh..."haayee...aapki yahi ada to hume diwana kar jaati hai...kabhi sherni ki tarah khunkhaar humle karti hai to kabhi khargosh si masum ho jati hai...aap to ese Sharma rahi hai jaise hum pehli dafa aapke kareeb aa rahe ho...is waqt aapki haya ko dekhker koi andaza bhi nahi laga sakta ke aap wohi Jodha hai jo kal hume saans lene tak ka mauka nahi de rahi thi..."...Jodha felt extremely shy...she moved her face aside...and said all smiling...trying to catch-up her breath..."ye...ye kya keh rahe hai aap??...lajja nahi aati??"...and she tried to move away but he held her arm and pulled her at once...)

Jalal: - (in fake anger)acha...hum ye kya keh rahe hai??...pehle ye batayiye...aap kya keh rahi thi abhi haan??...ke hume haarne ka shauk hai??...hume yakin nahi hota ke aap peeth piche is tarah humara mazak udati hai jodha...??... (Jodha thought...he was serious...she lowered her eyes...she dint know...He will get so much angry...she said all that unintentionally...)

Jodha: - (nervous) shenshah...wo to hum...bus...wo...mazak... (But before she could complete her sentence...Jalal...at once jumped into the bath tub and came in front of her...Jodha's heart skipped many beats with this sudden action of his...Jalal was continuously having a wicked smile playing on his lips...but Jodha couldn't notice it...as he hid it immediately as she lifted her eyelids in shock...she could only notice his angry yet passionate frown...)

Jalal:- (with a stern expression...in a husky voice...enclosing her lips with his thumb) shhh...ek aur lavz nahi...koi safai nahi...kyuki galti ke liye koi safai nahi hoti humari saltanat me...sirf saza hoti hai...(Jodha's figure trembled in fear...Jalal was too good in his acting that even Jodha couldn't guess it...she thought that her words had really hurt his ego...He continued) to kya aap apni saza sunne ke liye taiyaar hai...(Jodha lowered her gaze in guilt...and nodded silently...Jalal smirked widely at her gesture...she closed her eyes in anticipation...waiting for the punishment...but not getting any reaction for few minutes...she hesitantly opened her eyes only to find him...undoing the doris of his Jama with a grin on his face...her mouth got wide open in amazement..."ye...ye kya kar rahe hai aap shen...??"...but before she could complete her sentence...Jalal interrupted her...in a way too seductive voice...removing his top...throwing it aside..."JALAAL...Shenshah nahi...Jalal kahiye"...Jodha looked at him confused and scared..."kintu shenshah...aap...humare..pati hai..hum aapka naam kaise..."...again she was not able to complete her words when he slid his arm around her petite waist...and pulled her towards him with a startle...their chests collide with a thud..."Hukm hai humara...nafarmaani bardasht nahi karege..."...he said while smiling naughtily with wink...His smile was enough to make Jodha realize that it was all his prank and a trick to get close to her...she looked at him in awe and suddenly pushed him with all her might..."aap...aap bahut kutil hai shenshah...kaise abhinaya karne lage hai...ek pal ke liye to hume laga ke aap sachmuch krodhit...arghh...dara diya hume...chaliye choriye..."...and she tried to get away but he held her wrist and twisted it behind her back..flipping her towards the marble railing...Jodha mourned in slight pain..."ahh...shenshah...humari kalai..."...)

Jalal: - kyu??...abhi thodi der pehle to aap keh rahi thi ke aapko kisi se dar nahi lagta...phir ab kya hua??...

Jodha: - (irritated) haan...to nahi lagta na bhay hume...wo to hum bus ese hi... (After thinking for a while)...haan...abhinaya kar rahe the bus...aapki tarah...aah...aahh... (Flinching her eyes...)...ab choriye bhi...pida ho rahi hai hume...

Jalal: - (but he pressed her wrist further) lekin hum natak nahi kar rahe the...saza to dege hum aapko... (And with it he placed his finger on her chin and moved her face sideways towards his...their lips inches apart now...Jodha looked straight in his eyes with an annoyed frown)...chaliye...ab achi maashook(lover) ki tarah..hume Jalaal..kehker bulayiye..

(An already irritated Jodha was in no mood to give in so easily..."nahi bulayege...kya kar lege aap??"...he twisted her wrist further..."Jodha...Jodha...Jodha...majboor mat kariye hume...aap janti hai na zid me hum bhi aapse kam nahi hai...chaliye...jaldi se kahiye...Jalal... "...and he put some more pressure on her wrist while smirking..."aaahhh...ishh...maa saa...theek hai...theek hai...urggghh...Jalal...jalal...jalal...ab choriye humara haath..."...she almost shouted on his face...but Jalal dint loose his hold yet..."ese nahi...thoda nazakat se...sharafat se...mohabbst se kahiye...Jalal...hume aap bahut dilkash lagte hai...kahiye..."...and pushed her towards the wall...smooched on her neck...this made her more irritated but she somehow controlled her anger and spoke in a made up..fake calm tone..."Jalllaal...hum aapse bahut prem karte hai...aap hume bahut manmohak lagte hai...hume bahut pida ho rahi hai...kripaya humari kalai chor dijiye"...Jalal kissed on her cheek sensually and left her wrist with a wide winning smirk...as soon as Jodha realized her wrist free...she turned to face him with her eyes fuming In anger..."ye kaun sa tarika hota hai apni baat manvane ka Jalal...abhi tut jaati humari kalai to..."...Jalal again pulled her by her waist towards him..."ab natak band kariye jodha...hume pata hai humari baaghin itni bhi naazuk nahi hai...jo kalai 20 dushmano ka kaam ek baar me tamaam kar de...zara se zor se toot jayegi...esa to ho hi nahi sakta..."...but she moved her face away in anger and frustration...Jalal moved his other hand and now took her in his embrace completely..."acha baba...galti ho gayi...itni zor se lag gayi kya?"...but she dint buzz and kept on looking away from him..."offo...itna gussa...baap re...acha zara dikhayiye to hume..."...he took her wrist in his hand...and noticed that it really had his finger marks on it...he spoke out in a pampered tone..."are baap re...ye to bahut chot lag gayi aapko jodha...ab kya kiya jaaye...hmm...kya kiya jaaye...haan..."...with a wide smile that soon got converted into a passionate smirk...he took some of the turmeric paste in his hand and applied it on her wrist...and started rubbing and caressing it softly...Jodha was still carrying the same annoyed look but somewhere his tender touch soothed her pain to a great extent...seeing his actions having no impact on her...he slowly washed out the paste...and asked in a low tone..."ab kaisa lag raha hai??..."...she replied in a stubborn tone..."theek hai...choriye ab..."...Jalal with shocked tone..."sirf theek...acha rukiye..."...he intertwined his hand with hers and brought it close to his lips...and first kissed softly on it with his slightly moist lips...but after some time he almost started licking and smooching on it very softly...Jodha smiled slightly...she finally looked at him who was busy in soothing her pain...her nerves were going numb by the way he was kissing and making love to her wrist...she asked him in a stammering voice..."ja...jalal...hum...hum...theek hai ab...reh..rehne.."...but by the time she said that his kisses had approached her shoulder...he held both of her wrists up and encircled them around his neck and took her in his lap...and after some time she felt his hands gliding upwards on her completely drenched back...his one hand reached at the back of her neck...pushing her wet hair to the other side...thus giving space to his lips to suck the soft skin of her earlobe and side of the neck...While other hand rested on her lower waist moving towards her belly...he squeezed their suddenly that made jodha to gasp...she clutched his hairs so tight...and hissed..."jalal..."...but jalal was in no mood to leave her...he tilted his head a bit backward and started licking the water droplets out from her neck...Jodha was getting highly turned on by his actions...but she dint want to get week this time...so she controlled herself and stiffen herself...but jalal being jalal...was too lost in her...once his lips had her body contact..It just became impossible for him to stop...but before his hands could reach to open her bathrobe and his lips to explore hers...she gathered all her strength and pushed him away...both were looking at each other breathing hardly...Jodha shocked and Jalal as usual smirking... )

Jodha: - (almost panting) aap? kya ho jata hai aapko??...shayad aap bhul rahe hai...is samay hum humamkhane (bathroom) me hai...

Jalal: - (advancing towards her...trying to catch her again...) to??...kaun si kitab me likha hai ke humam me hum apni begum ke saath mohabbat nahi kar sakte... (And he grabbed her again...Suddenly jodha got an idea...and she knew that he will surely stop after listening that...)

Jodha: - lagta hai koi prartispardha(compete) karne se ghabra raha hai...tabhi to prayas me hai ke sara samay yehi vyarth ho jaaye...aur unhe humare saath abhyaas na karna pade...

(Jalal...who was busy in exploring the sweet spots behind her ears...and snuggling the intoxicating fragrance of her open wet hairs...at once stopped listening to her...)

Jalal: - (confused) kya matlab??

Jodha: - (sarcastically...her nose up...full on ready to argue) itne bhole banne ki koi avshyakta nahi hai...aapko kya lagta hai...ke hume kuch samajh nahi aata...kintu aap bhi ek baat ache se samajh lijiye...yadi aap ye sochte hai...ke humare nikat aaker ya humse prem dikhaker aap humara dhyaan humare lakshya se bhatkane me safal ho jayege to ye aapki bhool hai shenshah...

Jalal: - (at once covering her mouth with his hand...which made jodha stunned) bus...bus...bus...ya allah...kitna baat karti hai aap...apne chote se dimag per itna zor dalne ki koi zarurat nahi hai jodha...aur jaha tak rahi baat aaj ke mukabale ki ...to wo to hum hi jeetege...aur ye jallaluddin mohammad ka aapse wada hai ...(with it he removed her hand from her mouth and tends to get up but stopped thinking something...and got really close to her face...their position is like...Jodha is sitting in the bathtub with her back leaning to the wall behind...and jalal...on his knees...in front of her...leaning over her face...with both of his hands beside both her shoulders...looked straight in her eyes...whispered in a seductive and sexy voice...)

Aur rahi baat aapse mohaabat karne ki...to hum jab chahe...jaha chahe...jaise chahe...aapse mohabbat kar sakte hai...aur isse... hume koi nahi rok sakta ...(Bringing his lips closer to hers)...aap bhi nahi...kyuki jodha per...sirf jalal ka ikhtiyaar hai ...aap sirf humari hai jodha...sirf humari... (And with it...he gave a long peck on her lips with soft nibble...leaving jodha with a thundering and shaky sensation...then fetched a shawl from beside...and wrapped it around himself ...got up from the bathtub...and raised his hand to bid her adieu for the time being..."khuda hafiz begum saahiba...riyaaz per milte hai..."...and he left from there all smirking...leaving a completely flabbergasted and speechless Jodha behind...Jodha shook her head to come out of the spell...and as soon as she came out...the irritation returned again...and shouted at the top of her voice..."Moti...Reva...Panna...kaha mar gayi sab ke sab...humare abhyaas ke vastra leke aao jaldi...ya iske liye bhi patra likhna padega tum sabko..."...to herself..."ye bahut kathin hone wala hai jodha...na jaane kaun si nayi tarkeeb chal rahi hai inke kutil dimag me...kanha...sahayata karna..."...she folded her hands and looked upwards at her dear kanha for giving her strength)

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SOMEWHERE AT THE OUTSKIRTS OF AGRA: IN A DEEP FOREST:

(Adham was roaming around a lake, located at a secluded area...which looked like hardly visited by anyone...thinking about the next step...that how he is going to take revenge on Jalal for his insult...he was fuming in immense wrath...the soothing cold morning breeze seemed to have no impact on his already boiling body temperature...though maham instructed him to stay away from agra but he just couldn't...How could he stay away from the place that belonged to him only...at least he thought like that...He was enraged that he got defeated because of a mere girl...whom he thought was nothing in front of his masculine power...he picked up some stones and started throwing them in the lake aggressively in extreme anger...and shouted out loud..."JALLLAAALLL...HUH...MAI TUMHE NAHI CHORUGA...MAI TUMHE ESI JAGAH MARUGA JAHA TUMHE SABSE JYADA TAKLIF HOGI...HAAN JALAL...TIL TIL TADPOGE TUM...AAHEN BHAROGE...JAB MAI TUMHARI SABSE AZIZ CHEEZ KO TUMSE CHIN LUNGA...AUR TAB TUMHE EHSAAS HOGA JALAL...KE JALAN KISE KEHTE HAI...AB MAI TUMHE TUMHARE HI SABSE AZIZ MOHRE SE SHIQAST DUNGA...AUR TUM KUCH NAHI KAR SAKOGE...HAHAHHHAAA...KUCH BHI NAHI...HAHHHAAHH"...and he started laughing like mad...he was busy in his own dreamland when he listened some horse steps coming towards him...he pulled out his dagger and hid behind the rock for shelter... ...The attacker reached near his hiding spot and came down from the horse and started walking towards the Lake...he reached near the bank and looked carefully in every direction as if trying to observe the surroundings...his face was not visible as it was covered with a mask...only his sharp eyes were visible...then suddenly Adham came out from his hiding spot and grabbed him from behind and put his dagger on his neck..."KAUN HO TUM AUR YAHA KYA KAR RAHE HO?"...he expected an afraid reaction from the masked man but it dint come...instead of it...he started laughing hard...and said while laughing..."AGAR HUME MAAR DOGE ADHAM TO APNA BADLA KAISE PURA KAROGE TUM...HMMM??...HAHHHAA"...and within a flick of second...Adham too burst out into fits of laughter...he removed his dagger from his neck...and the masked man turned towards him...and removed his mask...)

Adham: - (with a wicked smile) ye to tumne sahi kaha sharifuddin...tumhe hum chahker bhi nahi maar sakte...humare aziz dost jo ho tum aur ek laute jo humare yaha hone ki malumaat rakhte ho...hume janker khushi hui ke tum humare maksad me humraaz banne ko taiyaar ho...kaho kya khabar laaye ho...

Sharif: - (with hysteric laugh) haahh...kaise hamraaz na bante adham...shiqaar bhale hi alag alag ho...magar manzil to akhir ek hi hai humari...khair...tumhe ek tajjub ki baat batani thi adham...mehel me abhi tak kisi ko bhi nahi pata tumhare jalal per humle ke bare me...

Adham: - (little surprised) kya??...esa kaise ho sakta hai...jalal ne kisi se kuch nahi kaha...??

Sharif:- nahi adham...kal tumhari ammi jaan ne janne ki koshish ki to usne baat taal di...phir hume laga ke shayad kal sham diwan e khaas me elan karega...magar baad me adhka se pata chala ke usne wo bhi radd kar di...hume to kuch samajh nahi aa raha...aakhir chal kya raha hai iske dimag me...

Adham: - (wickedly) uske dimag me kya chal raha hai usse hume fark nahi padta sharifuddin...kyuki humne jo socha hai wo to hum karke hi rahege...aur wo bhi bahut jald...kyuki...ab tak ammi jaan tak humare laapta hone ki khabar pahuch chuki hogi...aur jalal bhi chup baithne walo me se nahi hai...bhale hi usne kisi se kuch na kaha ho...magar hume pura yakin hai ke usne humari khoj me sipahi dauda diye hoge...isse pehle ke uske haath humare girehbaan tak pahuche...hume apni saazish ko anjaam dena hoga...

Sharif: - hmmm...to kya socha hai tumne?? Kaise humla karoge jalal per ab...uske ird gird hifazat ke intezaam aur bhi pukhta kar diye gaye hai pichle humle ke baad...

Adham: - nahi sharif nahi...Jalal nahi...is baar humara nishana koi aur hai...wo jiski wajah se ye sab hua hai...jiski wajah se jalal humari giraft se nikal gaya...aur jiski zindagi jalal ke liye uski khud ki zindagi se bhi zyada mayne rakhti hai...

Sharif: - kiski baat kar rahe ho tum adham...hum kuch samajhe nahi...

Adham:- (gritting his teeth) Joodddhhhaaa...wo namurad begum...agar wo jalal ke saath nahi hoti us din...to humari jeet tay thi...us zalil ne humari...Adham khan ki beizzati ki hai...aur iski saza to use bhugatani hi hogi... ...ek baar wo humare shiqanje me aa gayi to bus...uske naam per kuch bhi karwa sakte hai hum us jalal se...tum nahi jante sharif...wo kitni badi kamzori ban chuki hai jalal ki...aur ab isi kamzori ka hum fayda uthayege...

Sharif: - (almost yelling) kya bak rahe ho adham??...tumhe ye sab mazak lagta hai kya...jodha koi mamuli begum nahi hai...wo jalal ki behad khaas begum hai...tum unhe kuch bhi nahi karoge...tumhara badla to jalal se hai na...jodha begum ko in sabse door rakho tum...

(At first adham got a bit annoyed on him...but after a while...a really wicked smile played on his lips..."kya baat hai sharifuddin??...tumhe badi fikr ho rahi hai US JALAL KI BEGUM KI...dil aa gaya hai kya us kamzaat pe tumhara...?"...Sharif couldn't control anymore and pulled out his dagger and pound over Adham like a wild beast...and pushed him on the ground...put his dagger at his neck...shouted at the edge of his voice..."AAADDDHHHAAAMMM...AB AGAR TUMNE EK LAFZ AUR KAHA TO...HUM YE BHUL JAYEGE KE TUM HUMARE DOST HO...JODHA SIRF HUMARI HAI...SIRF HUMARI..."...Adham giggled out loud..."ARE ARE TUM TO KHAFA HO GAYE...AUR YE HUM KYA SUN RAHE HAI...JODHA AUR TUMHARI??...YE CHAKKAR KYA HAI...?"...Sharif got up from there all frustrated and faced away...fuming in wrath...threw the dagger away..."HAAN...HUMARI HAI WO...SIRF HUMARI...AUR AAJ NAHI TO KAL HUM USE HAASIL KARKE HI RAHEGE..."...Adham too got up and started dusting his cloths with a grin on his face..."ACHA...YE TO TAZA TAREEN KHABAR HAI...HUME TO MALUMAAT HI NAHI THI ISKE BAARE ME...TUM...JODHA KO PAANA CHAHTE HO??...AUR HUME LAGA KE TUM HUMARA SAATH TAKHAT AUR SIYASAT PAANE KE LIYE DE RAHE HO...")

Sharif:- (calming down a bit) kisne kaha tumse ke hume takhat aur siyasat me dilchaspi nahi adham...beshaq hai...magar usse bhi jyada agar hume kisi cheez ki chah hai to wo hai jodha ki...jante ho adham...hum jalal se itni nafrat kyu karte hai...kyuki usne humare saath dhokha kiya hai...hume laga tha ke aamer jitney ke taufe me jodha hume milegi...magar usne chal chali humare saath...aur khud nikaah kar liya humari mohabbat ke saath...jalal se badla to hume lena hi hai...aur uske liye hum kisi bhi had tak ja sakte hai...

(Adham came forward with a devilish smile on his dirty face...and put his hand on sharif's shoulder from behind...)

Adham: - (assuring him) to tum itne baukhlaye hue kyu ho sharif...humara maksad to ek hi hai na...aur wo hai jalal ki shiqast...to phir hum aapas me ladkar waqt zaaya kyu kare...tumhe jodha chahiye na...mil jayegi...tum uske saath kya karte ho hume koi fark nahi padta...hum to bus jalal ko uske ghutno per gidgidata hua dekhna chahte hai...hume pura yakin hai ke ab hum tumhe jo batane wale hai...usse tumhari saari fikr hawa ho jayegi... (And he told him about the entire plan what he was thinking about...Sharif turned towards him with a startle...the excitement and happiness on his face could clearly be seen...he held adham by his shoulders and exclaimed out loud..."UMDA...BEHAD UMDA TARKEEB HAI...MAGAR YE HOGA KAISE...ISKE BAARE ME KUCH SOCHA HAI TUMNE..??")

Adham: - humne sab tay kar liya hai sharif...magar jodha ko us jagah tak kaise laana hai...ye zimmedari tumhari hai...uske baad hum sab samhal lege...

Sharif: - tum fikr mat karo adham...ye kaam aaj hi hoga...bus ek baar sahi mauka mil jaaye hume...yakin nahi ho raha hume adham... (he held him again)...agar sab kuch humari tarkeeb ke mutabik hua to aaj raat...(and he hugged him in excitement...Adham hugged him back...with a devilish grin..."Haan sharif...aaj raat tumhari saari tamannaye puri ho jayegi...aur humari bhi..."...to himself..."bevkoof aadhmi...unjaane me hi sahi...par tumne hume jalal ko todne ka wo zariya de diya jo usne khwaab me bhi nahi socha hoga...apne gusse me to hum bhul hi gaye the ke us rajwanshi ke liye uski jaan ka koi mol nahi...maza to ab aayega...jab hum usse wo chinege jo uski zindagi tabah karke rakh dega...shukriya sharifuddin..."...with a fuming angry look..."Jodhhaa...tune meri beadabi ki thi na...ab tujhe pata chalega ke adham ke raste me aane ka anjaam kya hota hai..." )

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(After getting dressed in her warrior attire...Jodha headed towards the practice area...continuously trying to make herself mentally prepared for this fight...Sword practicing was nothing new for her...be it with anyone...the only problem was that she somewhat still have not recovered from the effect of previous night...she was amazed as well as embarrassed at herself ...that how could she turn into something that she never even thought of...and now it was becoming her weakness...and she very well knew that jalal is a very cunning persona in this matter...he will definitely try to take advantage of her this weakness. ...her love and attraction towards him...though she knew that he was a thousand times better sword fighter than her...but she wasn't weak as well and could be proved as a tough competition...but now...with this weakness...where her hormones goes out of her control...even at a slightest touch of his...what she is going to do... she gradually started to lose her self confidence...at a moment she was about to curse herself for accepting jalal's challenge...when suddenly her rajwanshi blood bounced back..."no jodha...don't do that...you are not weak...what if you love him...you can still face him...look at him just like a competitor...if you have taken up this challenge so now...you have to give your best...just focus...and you will succeed...yes...I will succeed...I am a Rajwanshi Sherni...I am going to defeat him...yes...I am..."...but her thoughts were interrupted when the sight at the practice area stuck her...In all her self talk...she dint realize when she reached the practice area...and there he was...already there...practicing the best of his skills topless...looking like he has just taken a shower and came back...his stretching and shrinking muscles...his perfectly chiseled well built body...drops of sweat making their way from his face along with the length of his torso...continuously running down until soaked by his dark maroon afgaani...His twirling around and highly aggressive moves...his anger...his fiery eyes...his dominating expressions...uff...any women would find herself immensely lucky...finding such a hunk as her lover and life partner...and jodha was no exception this time...her heart surely skipped many beats at his very arousing site...her eyes were not able to move from the hypnotizing site...she was literally jammed at her position...just staring at him...or we should say drooling over her man's drool worthy physique...)

i m really sorry friends...

i could write only this much...

i m moving to hostel today...

going away from my family for the first time..

wont be having any pc or laptop...

though i will visit the forum and read all ur works but wont be able to update further...will miss you all...love u...thanks for liking my work till now...

hope u like my last update...i m feeling so sad that i have to leave my stories in middle...so sorry😭

Edited by Pallavvi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😡res...thodi der mein comment karti hoon.. mujhe sadme se bahar aane de.. ki aapne comment kar diya oh my god.. aj ka din kitna accha hai.. thank u so much...bara comment baad mein😛😛yippe 1st one
UNRES

😡UPDATE BHI POORA NAI DIYA... SWORD FIGHT KAHAN HAI.. UPDAR SE STORY BICH MEIN HI CHOR DI... NAI NO SORRY ACCEPTED REALLY ... ITNE INTAZAAR KE BAAD YE ..???? BAS TIK HAI... GO TO HOSTER.. BEST OF LUCK...😭..IM REALLY HURT... NEVER NO ONE MADE SUCH A FUN OF ME🤢🤢THERE WAS NO NEED TO DEDICATE THE CHAPTER TO ME
Edited by ...jaskaran... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...jaskaran...

res...thodi der mein comment karti hoon.. mujhe sadme se bahar aane de.. ki aapne comment kar diya oh my god.. aj ka din kitna accha hai.. thank u so much...bara comment baad mein😛😛yippe 1st one

padh le...padh le...padhne ke baad to gaali hi dee wali hai...i know...😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pallavvi

padh le...padh le...padhne ke baad to gaali hi dee wali hai...i know...😭

KARDIYA MAINE UNRES PADHLO😡😡
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Posted: 11 years ago

hey r u joking leaving the stories in middle not fare😭

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa

hey r u joking leaving the stories in middle not fare😭

dont cry yaar...😡😡... we should not get affected😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Pallavi Di!!! 😭
You are not gonna update anymore,ehsaas bhi khatam??? 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Plz...try to understand yr...m not able to...I won't be having laptop or PC fr nxt six months...even m feeling really very sad..I HV planned so much but won't be able to write that😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
PALLAVI MAM!!!!
ILL SURELY COMMNT
VO BHI BIG SE BIG WALA!!!!!!!!!

I AM PROMISING U!!!

PLS WAIT!!!!!!

love u mam!!!!


love saumya!!

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