Originally posted by: divyavm
Hi- need to sign off but I had commented on most of your lines but because of formatting they did not stand out- I have underlined those comments now.
Dear.. let me tell you what cv's potrayed...
Hakim:Jodha was n her death bed n unconscious... ..thats when hakim told jalal that she is not responding to any medicines..she lost all hopes to live...so she is not fighting agianst vish..
jalal:he realised its only him who can bring her back..so he did say takliya to every one..remember...next min he said aanke koliye jodha begum...next authoritatively he repeated the same words...this is not his soul..its jalal who told jodha who is sleeping peavefully...then he said hum aapko jane nahi denge.he was hodling her hands...
Jodha's soul: jodha's soul left her body n started to go to another world...she is listening to his words..but her soul left her body..she cud listen to what jalal was saying..then her soul realised that jalal was hodling jodha's hands n not allowing her to go...with continuous pleas...then
Jodha's soul:Chod dijiye hume jane dijiye hume...
Jalal:hum apko jane nahi denge...
Jodha's soul:can hear his words..thinking its he who is stopping her not to leave him...her soul said to him u dont even want to see my face...even if i die also..leave me i hv to go n i am happy..i fulfilled all my responsiblities n vanchans...
Jalal:he was still crying that she is not responding ..out fo fear in real he did confess his feelings to unconscious jo..first he confessed to god n dargah..now jodha when she was not n her senses..
Jodha's soul:since her soul left her body hence her soul thinks thats jalal did confess n her dreams..
Jalal:later he said u gave me this life..ilo live only with u..if not il not..god save my jodha...
Jodha's soul:when she was happy with his confession n got a reason to live she came back to this world back...
Jodha(n this world):after she opens her eyes he found jalal was next to her holding her hands..she thoght what ever happened was its her dream..but in reality its jalal's confession n pleas made her to come back..
Jalal:he knows abut his confession..so todya he kept quite coz he wanted to no n c how jo feels.use kya kya yad hain..but again his bad luck she thinks it as dreams..thats y wen jo was saying about this dream he was not shocked..he was pleasent n calm n happy that its he n his love who forced her to come back..did u notice moti wen jo was syaign about this dream i cud see the pain n her face...so for jodha its a dream..for jalal its reality..what will he say no jodha begum its not dream..i did confess mmy love ..he is scared of another rejection..so he noticed her every talk ..now he is sure she is happy with his confession..but he doesnt no if she loves him or not..hence he kept quite...
I hope this gives u clarity..for jalal its not dream...for jodha its dream...one day he il accept that it was not her dream..its real..that he did confess his love to her...
Gud n8..bye...c u tmw..
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