OS : Akdha's remarriage PT 8 *UPDATED* ON PG 27 - Page 14

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

unres. my rasgulla... omg U have updated ... I will update my detail comment soon... Yaar may be tomorrow but I will read it now😆... love u sweety...

Vow!!! Amazing!!! Mind-Blowing!!! Beautiful!!! Marvelous!!! Wonderful!!! Spectacular

Sorry for late comment. 😭😭😭 I read both the chapter as soon as posted but I read it from phone so couldn't write comment... Since last Saturday I am suffering from server pollen allergy😭. My eyes are so itchy, red and watery... with extreme cold...So I was not able to write comment...

I am so touched you have dedicated chapter to me... Love U so much... I have no words for your love my laddoo...Thank you so much I am honored...

I am really stunned reading this beautiful description of nature... Vow... U R writing skill Subhan Allah..!!! I am completely speechless... How U write all this... UR imagination is out of this world and you penned down this really blow me away... to some fairy land... than divine prayer... I am really speechless for this master chapter... Her simple beauty without any jewlary... her divine look... U R gifted with writing skill... Hamida bano called her... hmm sounds very interesting...I loved how Jalal and Jodha both enter in Hamida's chamber at the same time... and Jalal recall their beautiful moment together... Jodha still in her dilemma why he is impacting on her so much. What a Royal proposal by Hamida... I loved the way Jalal answered and gave a naughty look to Jodha... he has already left while Jodhaa reveals a secret smile, a secret and bright one in which can be found her answer , her response to the question ! (this line really touched me.. what a line)

I can't wait for more... I want more Jodha and Jalal's interaction ... More nok jok... This is mind-blowing update but after long wait... Next update Jaldi karna please... U writes like proficient professional writer. 👏

Originally posted by: sweetystubborn

I am touched and honoured Laddu 😳🤗😳 Touched and charmed by your lovely and gentle words which always blow me away from reality into my own illusional world until I reach at the end of your comment 🤪😆 Thanks for encouraging and covering my banal updates with so much lovely praisings and charming words Didu 🤗🤗 Honoured to recieve those words from such a splendid and unblemished writer like you my laddu ⭐️⭐️⭐️ Only you and other talented writers on this forum are my source of inspiration and example , you guys are always a big hand in helping me to improve my writing skills and for that I want to bend myself infront all of you so that you can take bows , thanks a lot lot lot 🤗❤️🤗 I have made lots of efforts in the first physical descriptions part and happy that it overcomes to please you 😳😳😛 And yes , naughty and attitude wala Jalal is back 😎😆⭐️ Until now , he was in sad and tragic Devdas avatar and he is sensing that slowly everything is regaining to normalty and happiness is soon going to take place in their lives so his old avatar is back 😃😃😆 Oh ! Didu , the fact that you loved the kast line means a lot for me 🤗 Yes , I have specially made it lovely and symbolistic 😳😳 All credits go of course to you as you were the one who kept requesting me to write and there the story goes for you ❤️❤️ I know that my laddu didu gonna unres for sure as if she isn't unresing it , that's surely because there is a reason , and see you were ill 😭😭 but now you are fine and healthy 🤗😃😛 That's the main thing 😳😳⭐️ Despite that you took time to read it from cell , OMG ⭐️⭐️ You couldn't have complimented me in better way then this my Laddu 😳😛⭐️ Love you so so so much my Laddu didu ^^ 🤗❤️🤗 but it doesn't mean that I will sway away from your updates 😆😆😆 You must update Registan ka Gulab and Is it hate or love . . . 😈😈 But you must take good care of your health , samji didu 😈😈

OMG!!!!😃 YAAR TERE REPLY NE TO MUJE SENTI KAR DIYA...PEHLE DO CHAR PAACH ZUPPI HO JAYE🤗🤗🤗

LOVE U SO MUCH MY CUTIE PIE... U R VERY HUMBLE PERSON... YAAR SACH KAHU TERI WRITING IS THOUSAND TIME BETTER THAN MINE... TERI AMAZING VOCAB... GRAMMER... AND WRITING... EMOTION... EVERYTHING...IS WAY BEYOND... SACH ME KAHU YAAR... MUJE Sometime I feel I need to improve my vocab and grammer ..par... I have studied in Guju medium through out... English ka hello mene 10th grade me sikha... ab me try bhi karu to bhi proficient ki tarah English nahi likh sakti...What I love about Ur writing is each scene is filled with so much detail and emotion... When Jodha was getting ready to meet Hamida ... U have wrote that so much in detail with Royal class... Mene jab se teri story padhi hai... me ek zatke me impress ho gayi thi... U R Very talented ...

Aur meri allergy abhi bhi thik nahi hui... just got use to...it take about 3 week to completely cure... I am taking cold medicine which make me really sleepy to late night tak update nahi likh pati... jese likhne bethti hu nind aa jati hai...I will update soon too... Two story ko handle karna muje bhari padne vala hai😆 UPDATE PLZZZ😆

Waiting for ek do din char paach acchi wali kiss

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Waiting for ek do din char paach acchi wali kiss

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

OMG!!!!😃 YAAR TERE REPLY NE TO MUJE SENTI KAR DIYA...😭😭PEHLE DO CHAR PAACH ZUPPI HO JAYE🤗🤗🤗

LOVE U SO MUCH MY CUTIE PIE..😛. U R VERY HUMBLE PERSON... YAAR SACH KAHU TERI WRITING IS THOUSAND TIME BETTER THAN MINE... TERI AMAZING VOCAB... GRAMMER... AND WRITING... EMOTION... EVERYTHING...IS WAY BEYOND👏👏👏... SACH ME KAHU YAAR... MUJE Sometime I feel I need to improve my vocab and grammer ..par... I have studied in Guju medium through out... English ka hello mene 10th grade me sikha... ab me try bhi karu to bhi proficient ki tarah English nahi likh sakti...What I love about Ur writing is each scene is filled with so much detail and emotion... When Jodha was getting ready to meet Hamida ... U have wrote that so much in detail with Royal class... Mene jab se teri story padhi hai... me ek zatke me impress ho gayi thi... U R Very talented ...

Aur meri allergy abhi bhi thik nahi hui😭... just got use to...it take about 3 week to completely cure... I am taking cold medicine which make me really sleepy to late night tak update nahi likh pati... jese likhne bethti hu nind aa jati hai...I will update soon too... Two story ko handle karna muje bhari padne vala hai😆 UPDATE PLZZZ😆

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

chal paanch nahi to ek kissi to de de... 😆