New || AkDha FF || part 1 updtd page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys so decided to write a new FF after todays episode...so here is the prologue :-

She went out of the party, she could still hear what MA told her "Jalal does not want you in this mehfil..plz go out"..she just kept on thinking about the harsh words that came out of jalal's mouth and she couldnt control it anymore... big warm and salty drops of tears started coming out of her eyes but she wiped it..tried to control them but to her dismay she couldnt..shehensha's action and words had affected her, affected her so much that she went in her room and started weeping loudly..she felt all alone..she thought "why shehensha why?? what did i do that u insulted me so much and that also in front of everyone...i know i shouldnt have pushed you..but u were not in the right state of mind...i considered u as my friend now but you..." she sat on her bed and weeped, weeped at her fate..

Meanwhhile at the mehfil everyone was engrossed in tansen's magical music.it was so soothing and relaxing..but not for one person..Jalal. He was thinking about Jodha the way she wrote him a letter inviting him to her room, then rejecting him...he clenched his fists angrily..he thought " Jodha Begum today u must ne feeling insulted and humiliated..thats how i felt last night" he looked at benazir and thought "Just wait and watch Jodha begum..how i will insult you" and he smirked

Hope you all like it..it was just a prologue and i will continue it if you guys like it...the story will be slightly different from the serial 😳

if anybody wants pm hit like button or add me to ur friendlist 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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prologue : pg 1

Part 1 : pg 3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice even i wrote an OS about the same track,do read it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanchal_c

nice even i wrote an OS about the same track,do read it.


thank you 😊 Sure 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing story

plz do continue soon

and do pm me plzzz

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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!!!... I LOVE UR STORY!!!... 👏 🤗
Pls pls pls continue
Update soon!!!...
Love ya <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! Beautiful!👏⭐️ Please continue soon!😳 Cant wait for what will happen next..😛😳 Serial se to umeed hai nahi...yahan par hi kuch mil jaye to maza aa jaye.😳 Love you dear..Thanks for awsm prologue and Continue soon!⭐️👏 DO pm me If possible!😛😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

awesome prologue

please continue


thank you dear😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: malini96

amazing story

plz do continue soon

and do pm me plzzz


thank you dear ya will pm you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jodha_Akbar_Luv

OMG!!!... I LOVE UR STORY!!!... 👏 🤗
Pls pls pls continue
Update soon!!!...
Love ya <3


thank you dear 😊

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