~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair ~* Thread 1~Parts 1 - 18 - Page 37

Originally posted by: preet_pal320

Lash, you should try to update during weekends; it would give us something to look forward to 😊

The one thing I love about a good writer is when they paint with words. Reading HP, Hunger Games, and so many other books are enjoyable for me because I create images in my mind based on the authors writing. And I want you to know that you also have this magic. I love it!

Looking forward to the next update!

Originally posted by: komalcutie

Well we say okie dokie with a twist like 'okie dokie aloo laukie'...🤣...Well one of my friends is very stylish, so she tries to keep the group in style and make us try new hairstyles, frankly it irritates me alot as i really dont like spending my time on hairstyles and all...😆...quite tomboyish you know..😉

Erm...Okay where are my manners?😆 I just went through your profile and I realise I should with all sincerity call you Lashy Di...🤗😆

Originally posted by: juggaad

I agree. I am so glad it is Rajat here. I loved him as PrithviRaj and now he is doing great as Akbar. He has this inborn kingly attitude I feel.

By the way, my name is Sneha. 😃. A lot of people are facing this problem of not knowing what to call me because of that username.😆

@ Tahni - specially for you 🤗

~Not just a passionate affair~

The name itself draws audience like a magnet! Brilliant choice of name! I'm honestly saying that I loved ur previous FFz. But this one is something way different from that one...

Thank you so so so much dear... yes, I've been writing historical stories for quite a while now so thought of delving into a modern storyline for a change... the inspiration was a passing comment by someone in the forum who'd stated their story had the proper ingredients for a modern day romantic venture...and so voila, here I am!😃

Firstly, I'm really sorry that I couldn't post on the previous chapters as I had exams. But I did press the like buttons on each and every update of urs becauz I had planned to read it once my exams were finished. You are so kind that u understood my situation! Hug I stayed up all night reading FFs. The last one was urs.. As I had saved up the best one for the last.

Tahni...I genuinely didn't want you stressing yourself dear...I only was a bit confused since I saw your likes' first in row..and then had no idea if you read them😆...as I mentioned, I TOTALLY understand if you didn't have the time/inclination... reading for entertainment should be 100% voluntary - never a compulsion!😊

I'm must say that I'm impressed di! Ur writing has a different style from the others. You write it in a very grand way.. The IPad Man part was quite interesting! Modern Jodha is just like the one in the show.. Stubborn, but sweet.

Thanks sweetheart, once again! Jo is Jo...she's stubborn, strong, defiant and protective of her loved ones...comes from a sheltered loving home... 😳

I love the Jalal u have here... His character keeps changing from point to point.. Sometimes he is a bully.. Sometimes he is arrogant.. But the last 2 chapters u gave changed his character completely! He asked for forgiveness and hoped to start everything afresh! And in the last chapter he was like a gentleman.. He waited until Jodha's friend came. I'm quite surprised with the sudden change in his personality. He is a nice person at heart.. I have doubts over his niceness!

He is only a normal person Tahni...he's not like the Jalal in the serial - so don't go by that...this story doesn't come with the tagline Haivaan se banaa insaan' (as it wouldn't even really suit this 21st century story much)...it is only a modern day normal college romance between two adults of different mindsets (much like a Yash Chopra light hearted venture)... its only with the execution that I promise to bring some novelty - like the scenes and settings!😳

As for his character itself - Jalal is egoistic and short-tempered, a bully to his enemies - but nothing worse than that (like Maan said)...

Also, a lot of the portions that we see of Jalal are from Jo's viewpoint...only slowly is his actual reality being showed in the open.. so, as we start off thinking he's quite mean (like from Jo's perspective) - it doesn't really appear so as the story goes on...as for the transformation - he only was ever REALLY mean to Jo and that changed as soon as he realized what she was made of!😊

My Favourite part of this FF was when Jodha sang.. Even without the mic.. It proved how brave she was.. The Favourite line of this FF is "What goes around comes around." Jodha is certainly very clever here. I'm just really anxious to know who is the secret admirer of Jodha. Sometimes I feel it's Jalal. I don't know about others but I strongly feel it can be Maan.. I think he likes her!

She is! She is clever and so is Jalal - she is egoistic, so is Jalal - she is proud, so is Jalal - thus the takkars!😃

Secret admirer? We'll have to keep watching for that...😛

Over all the plot seems amazing! Eager to read more! Do update soon.. And plz pm me from the next update onwards! Keep up the good work di Hug

Originally posted by: lashy

Took yours and Soumyas advice and managed to whip one up for Sunday...hope it lived up to your expectations! 😳

Btw, I don't know whether you realize...but you've actually paid me a compliment of the highest order! My work being compared to HP and hunger games? OMG OMG..😲.I actually had to show your words to my husband just to gloat!😆

Big big big big hugs to you and thanks for support like yours that keeps me going

Hugs sweetie 😃

Originally posted by: SUMESHNI

Love it . awesome writing

Originally posted by: lashy

Took yours and Soumyas advice and managed to whip one up for Sunday...hope it lived up to your expectations! 😳

Btw, I don't know whether you realize...but you've actually paid me a compliment of the highest order! My work being compared to HP and hunger games? OMG OMG..😲.I actually had to show your words to my husband just to gloat!😆

Big big big big hugs to you and thanks for support like yours that keeps me going

Hugs sweetie 😃

Originally posted by: preet_pal320

Hey, I know good writing when I see it! I'm happy to boost your ego and bug your husband 😆

Hugs😳

Oh and I loved the update! The story is so simple, yet intricate! Beautiful!