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PROLOGUE At AMERAll the ladies of royal household are waiting impatiently outside a room .Their facial muscles clearly said they were tensed as well as excited too.After wait of months finally that moment arrived and they will listens a good news soon.Eagerness is visible on everyone's face and crying sound of a newborn is clearly audable to everyone.Lips turns to smile,joy of royal family cant be explained in words.Daasi ran to ring the bell on terrace to announce arrival of royal child.Daasi rang the bell and it alarmed people that its celebration time.Its for joy ,its time for celebration in Amer palace. RajdarbarDaasi ran there in excitement and stood at entrance ,waiting there for ending of court procedure .Happiness is clearly visible on her face.Bharmal sign her to speak.Rajasa ,ranisa gave birth to a baby girl Daasi exclaimed.Bharmal became so much happy after hearing this news .he gave ornaments and other valuable things to daasi who brought this good news to him. He walk as fast as he could to reach the room of his queen .Everyone congatulate him outside the room.Happiness is clearly visible on his face.An eager father arrived in the room and sight infront of him is priceless .It was visual delight for his eyes.On bed his queen lying with a smile on her face and a little princess sleeping peacefully beside her mother. Bharmal never saw mainawati this much happy in his entire life.She has a different kind of shine on her face.When their eyes met she gave him a smile.Congatulations Maharani Bharmal whispers ,trying not to disturb beautiful angel sleeping peacefully.Mainavati replied in same tone.Both of them look at their child.Bharmal took her in his lap and he notice she has white complexion just like her mother,rose petals like lips and sharp yet beautiful features.He kisses on forhead of child and then handover her to Mainavati.Afterthat he announce a grand fiest for arrival of his first child.Invitation were sent to all relatives and friends for this occasion.Everyone arrived with new cloths and toys for this new member.A grand celebration is arrange for welcoming new member of amer family ..whole amer is decorated with flowers .everyone is happy and excited for this function .Dancers were also invited to glorify this occasion.Whole Amer is invited to enjoy this function by Bharmal .Bharmal touches his childs hand with plates filled with coins and than ordered to distribute it among beggers,handicaps ,orphans and people who were abdoned by everyone.He gave sufficient money to poor's that rest of life they can live peacefully and give blessing to new princess rest of their life . A grand pooja and Naamkaran cermony was also arranged.Bharmal and Mainvati sat with their princess..Royal priest conduct whole ritual .Everything happened traditionally.At last Priest gave her name .Princess got name Jodha.Everyone mumbles her name in their breath.Dadisa inquires about future of young princess.Priest announce this girl born with her fortune.She will becone great personality in future and marry to king of whole Bharat. Bharmal and mainawati overwhelmed by hearing this.

Index

prologue page1

part1 page 2


part 2 page3


part 3 page4

part 4 on page 6

part 5 on page 8


part 6 page 11

part 7 page 15


part 8 page 18part

9 page 21 haldipart

10 page 26 mehandi and sangeet


part 11 page 28 the marriage


part 12 page 31


part 13 page 33

part 14 page 37

part 15 on page 40


part 16 on page 43


part 17 on page 48


part 18 on page 52


part 19 on page 55


part 20 on page 61


part 21 on page 64http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3800364&TPN=64


Part 22 page 70http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3800364&TPN=70


part 23 &24 on page 74 & 75


part 25 on page 79


part 26 on page 85


part 27 on page 96 (SR chapter )


Part 28A on page 115


Part 28 B on page 119

Part 29 on page 130
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome FF dear ... Continue soon ... 👏 Guess what It might take a bit long to roam around in AKDHA LAND for Forumwassis? ... Kaash AkDha ke kuch scenes dekhne ko milte aapke Update mein 🤗
Bteween ... Keep up the work 😳
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continue soon and plz pm me when u update.
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Five years passed happily .Those was most beautiful time of Bharmal and Maina's life.Palace were filled with antics of Sujamal and Jodha.They used to play ,eats and laugh together.Everyone was amused with the pair of brother sister.One dayJodha left amer with her nana(mother's father) for visiting Mathura . It was so exciting for her as first time she is visiting outside the palace.She was so much excited to explore new place and most important she was excited to see place of her Kanha.She was amused as she is going to see place where kanha born and where he ends that demon kans.She always listens his story ,how he born in jail then sent off from mathura etc.But her excitement was more for the one that she visit it before sujamal bhaisa .She tease him so many time. A bright and sunny day she starts her journey towards matura.She watches so many things which exciting and amusing for a five year old either it was dense forest or commoners doing normal work or people talking in their different mothertongue .She prayed at mathura for well being of family .She prayed to kanha for keeping her life as such .She prayed for new toys and better things than bhaisa.It takes almost 20 days to complete her journey. Her journey was quite peaceful and spritual .She was excited to share all happenings of mathura trip to her mother.She returns to amer in cheerful and exciting mood .She ran into palace in joy but everything is changed in palace in her absence. Amer palace is quite , silent than anyother day. People watching her with sympathy .Little jodha cant understand what is going on. She ran towards her father to ask him what is going on . Her father don't utter a single word just keep his hand on her head. She ran to find her mother to ask her what going on why everyone behave strange . she ran towards her mothers room .she is not there she search every corner of palace but she failed to find her. Suddenly someone place a hand on her shoulder she turned to see who is this.It was her cousin sujamal .Jodha feels relaxed to find him as she can asks him anything and he wont disappoint him.Despite their several fights sujamal always fulfill her every wish.


sujamal bhaisa where is masa? I searched whole palace but failed to trace her.why everyone is behaving strange towards me? Jodha asked him with hopeful eyes that he would satisfy her query.


Sujamal turned her and pointed his finger towards sky and said look jodha those bright shiny stars .Jodha gave puzzeled look to sujamal.She didnt understand what he wants to convey.


jodha my masa told me that your mother was favourite of kanha so he called her and now she became star Sujamal replied as per his best knowledge.


But why bhaisa? Masa is mine ?You know how much she loved me so how can she left me like this??How can kanha snatch her from me?Jodha ask so many questions which doesnt have answer BR]

I dont know Jodha but after your departure they send me to travel Jodhpur and when I return I dont found your mother and when I enquire my masa replied me the same Sujamal concluded. Jodha and sujamal two young kids unware with harsh reality of life that Mainawati died,sits on terrace for hours looking stars continuosly ,they dont realise when they dozed off and maids takes them to their respective rooms. -


Next day in palace temple Everyone listen sound of bells and aarti .for one moment everyone think mainawati is alive and doing her prayer and ran towards temple . for their surprise jodha doing all things which her mother do till date .there is a smile and tears in eyes of everyone present there .Little jodha doing work of her mother with the help of her brother sujamal.Sujamal ringing the bells and Jodha was doing aarti .They stands there to let them complete their tasks. After that Jodha distribute prasad to everyone. they takes prasad in hands and looks her with faint smiles.They put hands on her head. After that day jodha spent most of her time with sujamal . she don't like to live alone in palace.This hard time makes their bond so strong. That it seems impossible for them to stay apart and this thing doesnt go well with sujamal's learning process.


One day bharmal sent sujamal to gurukul to learn war technique, politics , economics. He leave jodha and palace with heavy heart. He promise her he will come back soon. He will try to meet her at least once in a year.Jodha wept whole night when he left .First few days her father gave her full attention but as time passes Bharmal became busy in state matters. Jodha is again alone in whole palace .
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Part 2 After sujamal's departure jodha again left alone in palace. she spent most of her time in praying and learning Krishna bhajans. It gives her immense pleasure . Rest of time she used to watch her father practising in practice arena with soldiers.She used to depicts his tactics when she was alone at terrace. As time were passing Jodha's skill getting better and better but still she miss sujamal.She needs company of same age group with whom she can share her joy and sorrow.Palace have all amnities for her luxury but still there is a miss in her life. One day she was sitting in balcony of palace , watching outside movements . Today she felt there so much movement on there.she inquires about that from a daasi and she find out a fair is organized there. Jodha didnt experiance this before so she decided to go there.She became ready for this occasion and she was very excited to go outside and enjoys something new .She pass inner skirt of palace very easily and reaches to the main door of palace .She was about to cross palace door a guard stop her. rajkumari sa you cant go outside A guard said politely to her and doesnt open the door. Jodha feels a little offended by this gesture but said proudly you are ordering me, dont you know me. I am sorry my highness but we are just following rajasa's order .I request you please show us his approval otherwise we wont let you go outside guard said politely to tame Jodha's anger. Jodha returns but thinking ways to go out from palace. She is mumbling to herself once I decided something I'll do that at any cost.she saw daasi are freely going that day from outside . she knows what she have to do. She came out from palace in simpl daasi attire. On coming out from palace little did she knows this small step of her take her to some where which she cant imagine in her dreams . a world which is completely different from her world but it is said destiny plays strange games . Jodha mumbles wow environment outside the palace is so much beautifull . here is I am feel free. No boundation jodha you are a princess you cant do this . you should behave properly you are a princess. I am just jodha here. Than she move towards the fair with a smile on her face..She walk freely in fair. Buy things which she like and eat delicious food and plays there. She makes moti and reva friends there . after her mother's death this is a happy and pleasant day in her life. Might be this is effect of freedom or finding same age people .she is happy and that is important. After that day whenever she feels bore she ran from palace to meet moti and reva . days passed jodha's mischievous deeds increase day by day. Sometime she steal fruit from fruit garden or breaking water vessels of woman or something else. After sometime bharmal find out about her deeds but he cant say anything to her. He just compensate the damages .he just think if this things give her happiness let her do that but his minister and other family member insist him to fix jodha's marriage as she is 16 years old now.after so many efforts bharmal agreed. Bharmal- if you all wish this I'll send proposal to suitable rajvanshi prince. all became happy as jodha getting married infew months and their problem will solve
Edited by yurimehta11 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hayye Jodha is very mishiveous! Jalal entry?? Amazing update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful update dear... gud to see naughty jodha...
hey when our jalal is entering...and when we hv our akdha together...
plz continue soon...
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tahniat and sshreshta pahle jodha ko pahle rajvanshi prince ko to handle karne to phir jalal ki entry karwate hai
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Originally posted by: yurimehta11

tahniat and sshreshta pahle jodha ko pahle rajvanshi prince ko to handle karne to phir jalal ki entry karwate hai



uuufff...ri8😊😊
bt plzz jaldi karao na...😃
mujhe toh har story mei akdha ka intezaar hota...😉😉
do one thing give us few fast update...😆😆😆..isse akdha jaldi milenge😆😆

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