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Jas2204

@Jas2204

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#981

Beautiful story. Loved the last chapter. Thank you very much for adding English translation to paragraphs you have written in hindi. I am able to understand most of it 😊

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Az3003

@Az3003

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#982

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
FINALLY MOST AWAITED ... COMMENTS... I WAS WAITING FOR THIS REVIEW FOR TWO MONTHS😃😃😃

GURU JI THANK U VERY MUCH FOR AWSOME SUBPERB COMMENT...AAPKI SHISYA KO RULA DIYA😭😭

AFTER READING YOUR UPDATE SAR STORM HAWA HO GAYE...LOL😆

SERIOUSLY!!! I AM SO BLESSED U AND NANU BOTH MY FAVOURITE WRITER READ MY TUFU TI ENGLISH WALI STORY... AND APPRECIATE IT...ACTUALLY ENJOY IT...

I DON'T MIND TAKING A PRAISE FORM AN AMAZING WRITER... AZ AFTER READING YOUR REVIEW I HAVE READ THAT CHAPTER AGAIN... AND I ALSO ENJOYED IT...ATLEAST MERI TUTI FUTI ENGLISH THODI IMPROVE HUI HAI LOL😆

NEXT TWO CHAPTERS ARE MY MOST FAVOURITE IN ENTIRE STORY...

AKDHA IS ALL ABOUT ROMANCE... I AM GLAD U LIKE THEIR NOK JOK AND CHEMISTRY...😳

JALAL DIDN'T WANTED TO BE PASSIONATE.. IN KISSING... JODHA IS CHATAK ... NEVER KNOW... EK UTHAKE CHATA LAGA DIYA TO... VESE MY JALLU IS SMART TOO... ISS LIYE SIMPLE KISS ME MAN GAYA😆

THANK U SO MUCH ... HOOREY AZ (GURUJI) IS BACK😆

lol Di I should be calling you that!! Mein toh choti machli hoon!! MY HINDI IS THE WORST!! It's only after I read yours, Nanu's and Aanchal's stories that I get a wonderful hindi lesson!👏👏👏👏! I learn hindi from u guys!! So u my Guruji Di!! I'm gonna go read the next chapter now!!! I'll leave a review wen I'm done😛😛😛

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HEMA KJ

@hema042

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Posted: 11 years ago

#983

FAntastic bhavini ji❤️ ,i have become ur fan now after reading all ur writ up,i am expecting more write ups from u ,superb really nowords to explain my feelings.blockbuster ,awating for ur next writeup soon 😊

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Pallavvi

@Pallavvi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#984

res...

and dont u dare call it boring...

i have already read it three times...

and yet wanting to read again..

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Az3003

@Az3003

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#985

Bhavini Di my love my angel and my master writer!! This review is for chapter 12 and I am freaking out it was so suspenseful and s=awesome!!! I'm going straight to the next chapter!! I can't wait👏👏👏👏

You are one in a million Di and you writing captures my imagination like no other!! Jodha was at her heights of despair and so was Jalal,,,, He may have acted rashly but you can't help feeling sorry for him😭😭😭 You wrote him to perfection Di!!!❤️ I love it!! Longer review for the next chapter!!! I'm ending here so I can go and read the next bit of your ART😛😛😛

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Az3003

@Az3003

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#986

Just finished chapter 13 Di and all I can say is wow wow wow wow wow!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏

Di I literally cried when Jalal saw Jodha's paintings!! It was so heart-wrenching and so brilliant!! Their hearts had been torn asunder and you captured their pain and their burning desire for each other with unparralled brilliance!! Di just after reading this I want to say that I would have been honoured just being your humble reader, but being your friend and sister as well is the ULTIMATE HONOUR❤️🤗Your story has captured me from Day 1 and I love the complex layers you add to AkhDa! I know you were worried if Jodha forgave him too easily but I think it was a master move!!! This was a resplendent update Di!! When Jalal and Jodha were performing the Rasm I had stars in my eyes!! You described it so beautifully I felt like I was there⭐️ 👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏

I can't wait to read more!! You'll be seeing a lot more of my drivel on your thread Di!!! I can't help it!! Whenever I start reading your chapters my heart begins to race and doesn't let up until I have finished!! YOU ARE THAT AMAZING🤗❤️

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akdhadeewaanii

@akdhadeewaanii

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#987

edited my comment on page no 146..

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#988

Bhav di..gale lag jao🤗 You call this boring??? This was awesome di! ❤️

Trust me, I was blushing in the whole of the 1st half..the nok jhok, teasing, challenge and best Jalal's possessive an powerful hold on her Loved it!!😳

I seriously love Abdul..kaash wapas aa jaye wo show me bhi! His friendship with Jalal is amazing!⭐️⭐️

Loved the Jo-Jalal fight at the end..the jealousy is so evident in both of them.😳

Thoroughly enjoyed reading it di...update soon!! Love ya!🤗

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Hena

@sunshine_sun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#989

oh my i just loved it !! read it from the very first part 😳😳❤️
pm me 😊

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#990

😃

Originally posted by: shreya931
oye hoyee...mazaa aaa gya...dil loot littaa..kudi ne..😉 thnx for updating...my jaan..bhaavu..❤️❤️🤗🤗
update was phenomenal..itna cute sa pyara sa update krte ho..bchhe ki jaaan loge kyaa..😉😆
innaa naughty jalal..mjhse control nhi ho rha..flirtuuu..par caring...😳😳😳😳haaayyeee...

ur humaari jungleee billi..ke kya kehne...👏👏chalo a6a hai ye aise games khelte rahe ur hume aisi hi pyaar bhari updates miltii rahee..mjhe ur kch nhi chahiye..

thnku bhaavu for such a lovelly update..tu kahe to tere ghar truck bharke thanku bhej dun yar..

the part wid tree was so loving..i m touched to the core of my heart❤️..what i have given to rajat early before..😳😳
kaaasshhh serial me censor board ke rules ke tehet kch aisa ho jayee..😳mai to khushi ke maare suicide hi kar lungii..abdul jaisa friend is needed in everybody's life..

chalo the FATTU'S(both surya nd kanika) CASE is cleared...much relaxed now..

jallu itta pyaar karegaa..to hum fans ki apne future ke liye xpectations badh jayengi naa..jbki i knw nothing xsit like that in this materialistic world..fir b kitna a6a lagta h tumhare aise updates padhnaa..😳
i luvd the scene when he show his marks given by her..😳😳
i luved many dialogues but mentioning only one here to meri Junglee Billi ko katne ke alawa chillana bhi aata hai...isshhh😳😳😳😳
thnku bhaavu..

oye hoyee...mazaa aaa gya...dil loot littaa..kudi ne.. thnx for updating...my jaan..bhaavu..

update was phenomenal.. itna cute sa pyara sa update krte ho..bchhe ki jaaan loge kyaa..

OMG I AM FAINTED...JALDI SE AMBULANCE KO BULAO... ME TO GAYI KAM SE... YE KUDI NE MUJE HASA HASA KE RULA DIYA.

YAAR TERI COMMENT ITNI PYARI HAI KI..MUJE SACCHI ME SENTI KARDIYA... LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS CUTIE PIE COMMENT...
innaa naughty jalal.. mjhse control nhi ho rha..flirtuuu.. par caring... haaayyeee... I LOVE MY NAUGHTY JALLU... HE IS SO FLIRT...CARINIG LOVING...GOOD LOOKING, BRAVE, KING OF THE KINGS... I AM AGAIN LOST IN dream land... KAASH SACHI ME AESA KOI HOTA...

ur humaari jungleee billi..ke kya kehne... chalo a6a hai ye aise games khelte rahe ur hume aisi hi pyaar bhari updates miltii

HAMARI JUNGLEE BILLI CHANCE MILE TO KATNE KO DODTI HAI!!!😃

rahee.. mjhe ur kch nhi chahiye..

thnku bhaavu for such a lovelly update..tu kahe to tere ghar truck bharke thanku bhej dun yar.. JALDI SE BHEJ... I AM WAITING HERE... AKDHA DREAM LAND PO BOX # 143😆

the part wid tree was so loving..i m touched to the core of my heart ..what i have given to rajat early before

THAT WAS MY FAVOURITE PART... MOST ROMANTC... AND PEACEFUL... RAJAT KE PAAS AUR KITNE DIL HAI... MERA DIL BHI USI KE PAAS HAI...FLIRT...CHEATER... HUM DONO KE DIL SE KHEL RAHA hai...

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kaaasshhh serial me censor board ke rules ke tehet kch aisa ho .jayee.. mai to khushi ke maare suicide hi kar lungii..SENSOR BOARD SUNO... SUICIDE!!!!!!!! KUCH MAT DIKHANA VARNA KITNI LASO KO KANDHA DENA PADEGA...😆

abdul jaisa friend is needed in everybody's life.. I AGREE EVERYONE needs friend like him

chalo the FATTU'S(both surya nd kanika) CASE is cleared...much relaxed now.. SERIOUSLY ACCHA KHASA ROMANCE CHAL RAHA THA... KITNE PYAR SE JALAL KI GOD ME SO RAHI THI... YE DONO KABHI NAHI SUDH RENGE JALLU KAHI KI

jallu itta pyaar karegaa.. to hum fans ki apne future ke liye xpectations badh jayengi naa.. jbki i knw nothing xsit like that in this materialistic world.. fir b kitna a6a lagta h tumhare aise updates padhnaa.. HELLO SHREYA SWEETY YE SAB KUCH AKDHA DREAME LAND ME HI HOTA HAI... CONFIRM NEWS HAI...
i luvd the scene when he show his marks given by her..

LOL...I LOVE THAT PART... YE HARKAT SIRF MERA JALLU HI KAR SAKTA HAI
i luved many dialogues but mentioning only one here to meri Junglee Billi ko katne ke alawa chillana bhi aata hai...isshhh

LOVE U SWEETY... THANK U SO MUCH😃😃

thnku bhaavu..

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago