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mandy001

@mandy001

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#421

subhan allah...bhut hi khoobsurat likha h...😆...

seriously ds ff z going amazing nd now ds ff z one of my fav ff nd always wait for ur pm.

tdy when i saw update a broad smile came at ma face...

sachiii me i luv ds ff.

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Amaira

@MonalisaJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#422

woww., Awsmm update.., 👏

Can't for Jallu's reaction...,😉

why did u get this kanika...😡

Update soon.., and thnx for the pm...😊

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Gudiyalovesguru

@Gudiyalovesguru

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#423

superb update...
i can understand jodha's feelings...
continue soon...

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Pallavvi

@Pallavvi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#424

dunno what to say yaar...

m speachless...

just awesome...

u r an amazing story teller...

ur imaginations...gosh...

so perfect and appealing...

passion out of bound...words are getting short for this chapter...

brilliant yaar..👏

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SIVARANJANI

@pranavvikas

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#425

wow awesome dear
ur narrating the story in such a beautiful way that
we are loving ur updates so much
thanks for the update and also pm
Please update ur next chapter soon will be waiting eagerly

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mesmeric893

@mesmeric893

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#426

wow firstly its commendable u wrote such a lengthy part

secondly the JaJo love scene was breathtaking, amazing beautifully described just loved the whole part & the narration

keep up the good work...

cant wait to see what jalal will do next.

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SShreShthA

@SShreShthA

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#427

wwoowww diii aaj toh no words...

nearly aapne toh sr kara hi thi...loved it ...

bt na jitna accha mujhe romance...passion.. ..hottness...laga h utna accha mujhe jalala ka jealous...romantic... caring...understanding...and eager to know reason atitude accha laga...

and i m super duper happy to know that finally jalal know that jodha not only luvs him but also too much possessive abt him...and also d reason why even after so much of luv and passion to come close she is staying away from him...

uuufff di kya jaan leva update di h aapne...totally mast...fully jhakaas di...

its brilliant and magnificent di...aapne toh mera dil garden garden kar diya...mmmuuuaaahhh di...

tusi toh gr8 ho...nearly sabkuch karke bhi kuch bhi nhi karaya akdha ke beech...

jalal and surya part is also superbbb...uufff jodha teasing jallu...wwoowww...

aaj aapne mera dil na bahut hi jyada khush kar diyaaa...

luv u di...thanx for it...

continue soon

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ash

@ashpat

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#428

i loved it! I could totally imagine their sensual session. so wish we could c this on the show. I also liked jalal asking forgiveness from kali mata and then lila and jodha sharing their married life. I was wondering what was stopping jodha- i felt like it was trust but did not know that she was possessive about him so loved when jalal heard all that. Now, i am waiting to c how jalal handles this.

By the way, did I tell u that u are an fabulous and creative writer. i love ur tracks, plots and their execution.

thank u so much for writing this ff and giving us long and amazing updates and thx for pm, too.