IS IT Hate Or Love CHAPTER 21 Page 144 ~ THREAD 1 CLOSE - Page 38

Originally posted by: baubles

This was simply brilliant dear!! Beautifully written! And as much as I wish Jalal was punished more I can't see him in pain either😆

I'm glad Jo didn't forgive him at once though...enjoyed reading the update! Do update soon Bhavini..can't wait!!🤗

Thanks for your comments and specially agreeing with forgiving Jalal...Glad you liked it!!!

Originally posted by: anshfever

wow yr...its amazing update...

it ws enough...jalal nd me cant bear pain more than ds...what she did ws ok.

loved it plz continue soon.

Thanks... so sweet of U!!! I am glad u like this chapter!!

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

thanks...fabulous..well done...superb...loved the moments between jodha and jalal... can't wait for holi between them...please update sooon

Thanks!!! I am glad you liked it

Originally posted by: ashpat

i love reading ur ff for several reasons. one of the reason is that they are long chapters and have so many things happening with balanced amount of details and pace. Although, i did not Jalal to be forgiven easily but the way jodha reminded him againa nd again and how each time jalal apologised and showed his real emotions, i was ok with him for being forgiven and i am glad that jodha did not make love to him readily especially after what they just been throught and jalal just got a kiss which i do not think he should have got but because jodha realised he is falling in love so that made it justified.

i cannot wait for holi chapter. thanks for pm. u r just awesome.

Vow!!! Really nice and detailed comment!!! Thank you for appreciating long chapters. I so glad you felt it is balanced... some time I feel I focus only on Jalal and Jodha and ignore other character. I know while writing I got too emotional with Jalal's character and forgive him little easily...I

beutiful update thans for pm pls continue soon

wooowww dear u r really awesome i heard my heart beat while reading story. i love ur writing is very small word to express my feeling and any combination of 26 letters(A,B,C,..Z) Can't express ur writing talent.

this for 12th chapter di...bahut mast scene diya h aapne...

Amazing update Yaar! I was really have with the size of the update... It was truly amazing.. The painting part was really beautiful. It showed the feelings she had for Jalal...

Yaar I really badly want a SR! Why did Jodha stop Jalal?? 🤣

Awesome update Bhavni..👏👏👏..😳😳😳...Oh loved it ...Wish CV's read this man!!!! 😊😊😊

wow awesome reunion of jalal and jodha heart touching