IS IT Hate Or Love CHAPTER 21 Page 144 ~ THREAD 1 CLOSE - Page 103

Originally posted by: Pallavvi

res...

and dont u dare call it boring...

i have already read it three times...

and yet wanting to read again..

Originally posted by: Az3003

Bhavini Di my love my angel and my master writer!! This review is for chapter 12 and I am freaking out it was so suspenseful and s=awesome!!! I'm going straight to the next chapter!! I can't wait👏👏👏👏

You are one in a million Di and you writing captures my imagination like no other!! Jodha was at her heights of despair and so was Jalal,,,, He may have acted rashly but you can't help feeling sorry for him😭😭😭 You wrote him to perfection Di!!!❤️ I love it!! Longer review for the next chapter!!! I'm ending here so I can go and read the next bit of your ART😛😛😛

Originally posted by: Az3003

Just finished chapter 13 Di and all I can say is wow wow wow wow wow!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏

Di I literally cried when Jalal saw Jodha's paintings!! It was so heart-wrenching and so brilliant!! Their hearts had been torn asunder and you captured their pain and their burning desire for each other with unparralled brilliance!! Di just after reading this I want to say that I would have been honoured just being your humble reader, but being your friend and sister as well is the ULTIMATE HONOUR❤️🤗Your story has captured me from Day 1 and I love the complex layers you add to AkhDa! I know you were worried if Jodha forgave him too easily but I think it was a master move!!! This was a resplendent update Di!! When Jalal and Jodha were performing the Rasm I had stars in my eyes!! You described it so beautifully I felt like I was there⭐️ 👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏

I can't wait to read more!! You'll be seeing a lot more of my drivel on your thread Di!!! I can't help it!! Whenever I start reading your chapters my heart begins to race and doesn't let up until I have finished!! YOU ARE THAT AMAZING🤗❤️

Originally posted by: baubles

Bhav di..gale lag jao🤗 You call this boring??? This was awesome di! ❤️

Trust me, I was blushing in the whole of the 1st half..the nok jhok, teasing, challenge and best Jalal's possessive an powerful hold on her Loved it!!😳

I seriously love Abdul..kaash wapas aa jaye wo show me bhi! His friendship with Jalal is amazing!⭐️⭐️

Loved the Jo-Jalal fight at the end..the jealousy is so evident in both of them.😳

Thoroughly enjoyed reading it di...update soon!! Love ya!🤗

Originally posted by: sunshine_sun

oh my i just loved it !! read it from the very first part 😳😳❤️
pm me 😊

Originally posted by: yurimehta11

thanks for pm
you wrote marvollus update in one shot and jodha aur jalal never change teasing tickling part is awesome

Originally posted by: JalalLovesJodha

Hi this is first time I have read any story on Jodha Akbar forum. I usually have very short time, so I just surf around and never bother to look in story. Actually I got attracted towards first night, I didn't know meaning of SR, but I figured myself, now I know Suhag Raat. I started with first chapter and hooked on like glue... I completed all 20 chapters, entire Saturday day night I was reading this story. Silly me, can you post older hot version of SR, you current version is also sensual but I want to read older version desperately and what is pm means? You are really good writer. While reading I saw people put their remarks and opinion. I could not hold myself and every chapter you have requested to like and comment so I decided to create account just to put my comment and like your story. I want you to be happy. I have no words I love this Jodha Jalal. Their love, anger, hate, separation, passion and emotion gave me Goosebumps, pain, cry, everything throughout reading. Shahbhavini Thank you for hard work. You deserve applaud. It is very hard to find your story for this many post. This morning it took me 10 minute to search it. Can you send me your story on my account so I can share this with my friend?

Originally posted by: Angel-

Wowww... :-):-scenes r beautifully developed by u:-):-)...

MINDBLOWING update dear:-)

I Jus LOVED IT:-):-)..,
Thanks a lot for PM me:-):-) ...

Originally posted by: JAN_SA

superb update, glad they out by themselves on not in agra or else they would be constantly interrupted, more romance the better

Originally posted by: roshaeldsouza91

Updateee🤣