AkDha OS: LOVE UNTOLD part 2 completed - Page 4

Originally posted by: SShreShthA

for u all three nancy, azra and tahni... a biggest jasdu ki jhappi as big as our hawai from my side...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Love you Shreshtha!!!🤗

Originally posted by: SShreShthA

for u all three nancy, azra and tahni... a biggest jasdu ki jhappi as big as our hawai from my side...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Tahniat !! its beautiful !!🤗 heart wrenching...please Jalal ko mohabbat ka iahar karwao😭

Pls continue...pm us...😃
Do make it elaborate...no need to hurry from scene to scene...itminaan se likkho...🤗

Love untold...
Jalal sat beside Jodha. He caressed her face. How could he do this to her?? Why did he do this to her? Now after he realized his mistake and his love for her, she is almost dying. Jalal then remembered Jodha's words that he would never ever get his love. A tear escaped his eye. Then he saw Jodha's hand moving. He screamed out for the doctor. The Hakim immediately came to the room and checked Jodha's condition. Jodha started breathing heavily. She wasn't getting enough air. She opened her eyes slowly. "Jodha Begum, aap thik ho jayengi. Aapko thik Hona parega humare bte ke liye. Humare liye. Jodha Begum hum apse Beinteha Mohabbat karte hai.. Aap Hume Chodkar JA Nahi sakte. Aap use badduwa ko vapas le lijiye. Hume muaf kardijiye." Jalal said it all in tears.Jodha tried to smile at him. "Aap humare bte ka kayal rakhiyega. Humare Jaane ki baad unhe ek Maa ki kami maat hone dijiye ga." Hakim "Mallika aap shant hojaye." "Jodha begum aap Apni Jaane ki baat kaise kar sakte hai??? Aapko hum Jaane Nahi denge." Jodha faints. Hakim gives her all kinds of medicine. "Kuch paal intezaar Karna parega Shehensha." Jalal spent the night sitting beside Jodha and handling his baby. Whenever Jalal puts him on his cott he starts crying. "Dekha Jodha aapke beta kitna ziddi hai. Bilkul aapki tarha." He said to Jodha who lay I'm the bed unconscious. Jalal sits beside Jodha,Salim in his lap who is sleeping soundly, he kisses Jodha's forehead. Jodha's eyelids move. Jodha slowly opens her eyes. Jalal calls the Hakim "arey vaah! Mallika ki to tabiyaat Mei sudhaar hai. Kuch din baad wo bilkul thik ho jayegi.Shehensha agar aap burana mane to aap bahar JA sakte hai." "Zaroor!" Mainavati, Bharmaal and Jodha's siblings rush to her room. The ladies only go
Inside.

The night passes by. Jalal kept on waiting it was almost noon. He had not seen Jodha.Mainavati and all the ladies leave the room and Jalal enters with His baby.Jodha Begum!" He wanted to hug her tightly and never let go. Jodha sees Her baby and "mere bte ko Zara mere paas dijiye." "Nahi Jodha Begum aap kamzor hai." "Apne bte ko Utha sakti hu Mei." Jodha plays with Salim a little. Jalal "Jodha begum aapne Hume muaf kiya?" "Maafi itni Jaldi milti Nahi. Aapko kuch aisay karna hai ki hum aapko maafi dene ke liye Majboor ho jaye. Aur aisay din kabhi Nahi ayega kyuki hum Majboor Nahi honge." "JODHA BEGUM HUM AAPKO MAJBOOR KARDENGE. Dekhte jaiye." Jalal smirked at Jodha. She rolled her eyes. Let the game of LOVE begin!


THE END


thank u sooo much for the wonderful reviews. This Chapter was for my readers. ESPECIALLY FOR SRESHTA AZRA AND NANCY DARLING. Thankx to all for the reviews. Btw I planned on killing Jodha but as I can see people will kill me I changed the storyline.. Enjoy

Thankx for the appreciation guyz!
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wonderful update👏
ending was cute..😳
totally lOved it.

Originally posted by: Sofia13

wonderful update👏
ending was cute..😳
totally lOved it.

thankx Sofi

Short& Sweet Loved The Ending.
Iam Glad Jodha Didn't Die At The End. (:

Originally posted by: SilverFairy

Short& Sweet Loved The Ending.
Iam Glad Jodha Didn't Die At The End. (:

thankx neeti! I don't know I wnted a tragic ending..