OS:Incomplete without you updated

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here is the second part of my os incomplete without you.Sorry for mistakes,and do post your reviews..I've used some hindi dialogues also coz that will be more suitable there.

Jodha was so happy.
Jodha:Hmm...he's not that much bad...noo he's good... infact too gud(She smiles).
Mothi comes there
Mothi:Kya baat hai Jodha?You're looking happy today?
Jodha:Mothi you know what ?"Unhone kaha ki hum...bahut sunder dikh rahe hai?"
Mothi:Unhone??(Mothi smiles)So finally you got what you wanted rightt???
Jodha:Yes,mothi..I'm so happyy..I wanna tell you something
Mothi:Say it Jodha
Jodha:I lied to you...Ammijaan didn't call you
Mothi:I knew it Jodha...don't feel bad...
Jodha:You're such a gud friend mothi
Mothi:And you're such a beautiful lady Jodha.Shahenshah is so lucky that you're his beegum.
Jodha smiles.She looks outside the window.Suddenly she saw a bird flying.She smiled again.
Mothi:You like birds right?
Jodha:Yes.I just love dem,they are so beautiful and innoscent,Mothi don't you think that something's wrong with that bird?
Mothi:You're right Jodha..Oh my god,Jodha that bird's injured,look I think someone shot it.
Jodha runs out of te room and she picks the bird up who fell on the ground.
Jodha:Poor bird!Mothi let's bandage it
Ruqaiyya comes there.
Ruqaiyya:jodha beegum give me that bird.
Jodh:Why???can't you see?it's injured.
Ruqaiyya:Jodha You have to listen coz I'm Mallika-e-khaas and it's my command.
Ruqaiyya takes the bird.
Jodha:Hold it softly you're hurting the bird
Jalal enters to the scene.
Jalal:What's going on here?
Ruqaiyya:Jalal Jodha beegum wanna take care of this bird.i was trying to make her understand that it's the good luck of this bird that you shot it.And really you shot the bird with much passion and now this bird has to die
Jalal takes the bird from Ruqaiyya
Jalal:Here you go Beegum Jodha go and bandage the bird
Jodha was surprised to see Jalal supporting her before Ruqaiyya
Ruqaiyya:But Jalal???
Jalal:Ruqaiyya Jodha beegum has stopped me from doing a sin why should I kill an innoscent bird?let it fly free.
Jodha turns back she holds the birds softly.
Jodha:Shukriya(Thank you).
Jodha walks away.Jalal also smiles.And he turns back to go but he see's Ruqaiyya's angry face
Jalal:Ruqaiyyaa...leave it it's just a bird.Let Jodha do whatever she likes..
Ruqaiyya:If you don't have any problem then why would I ?
They both leaves.Jodha carefully bandages all the wounds and the bird was now allright.
Jodha:Go and fly high no one will stop you
She comes besides the window and lets the bird fly.She was so happy.She recalls the scene were Jalal supported her.She turned around but suddenly Jalal comes before her leaning before her.She comes back along the wall.
Jodha:Shahenshah?You?Here?
Jalal:I'm your husband Jodha I don't need any one's permission to come here.
Jodha:Ya but...
Jalal comes more closer holding her waist.Jodha's heartbeat was going high.
Jalal:Jodha beegum I allowed you to care the bird so now you should do anything that I say
Jodha:I never asked you to allow me.You gave me the permission yourself.
Jalal:Uff...Jodha beegum just say who won't become tempted seeing such attitude?
Meanwhile Ruqaiyya was having a chess match in the garden with Maham.
Maham:Be careful Ruqaiyya,your king is in danger..in this game also and in reality also
Ruqaiyya moves the knight and she wins the game.
Ruqaiyya:Maham Anga I've told you many times my king was safe,he is and he'll be.I rule his brain.No one can take my place even Jodha beegum can't...
Jalal cups Jodha's cheeks.
Jalal:I want to taste the sweetness of your lips...Can I???
Jodha:You're the shahenshah of Hindusthan you don't have to take anyone's permission.
Jodha smiles and also Jalal.He brings his lips closer and closer
In the garden
Maham see's Jodha and Akbar who were standing at the window
Maham:Ruqaiyya nothing continues in the same state for long time,may it be Jalal's hate for Jodha or your position of Mallika-e-khaas you think that your king is safe right???then look there,your king who is safe but in the custody of someone else.
Ruqaiyya turns back.She was shocked to see that.Was it really her childhood friend Jalal or someone else???
Jalal was about to kiss her and..
"Gustaakhi maaf shahenshah"
Jalal shuts his eyes leaves his hand fron her cheeks
Jalal(angrily):What is it????
Soldier:Shehenshah some important persons have came to meet you.They are waiting for you.
Jalal:You can go.I'll come.
Jalal was so disappointed.He turns back and looks at Jodha who was still blushing.He was about to leave then Jodha calls him.
Jodha :"Aapki intezaar hongi humein"
Jalal smiles.He was relieved.And he walks away happily

PRECAP
Jalal was feeling very lone.His eyes wasn't filled with tears but was filled with pain.
Jalal:"Ya allah... Aaj tak humne apne liye kuch nahi maanga hai...lekin aaj pehli baar kuch maang raha hu,humaare mohabbath ko humse math chheeniye...Agar Jodha ko kuch hua toh phir kabhi hum aapse baat nahin karenge...


Thank you for reading.Hope you guys liked it.Do post your reviews.Will continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey what abt ur fever?hw r u nw?
Auwsome update dear... Very beautiful...

Precap is surprising...
Abhi toh unki luv story shuru hui h toh jodha ko kya hua...

Do continue soon... Will b waiting...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SShreShthA

Hey what abt ur fever?hw r u nw?
Auwsome update dear... Very beautiful...

Precap is surprising...
Abhi toh unki luv story shuru hui h toh jodha ko kya hua...

Do continue soon... Will b waiting...

Thanks yaar now I'm fine bas chhotta sa bukhaar tha.Waise itna maano ki jo bhi hotha hai achhe k liye hotha hai😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesum update...
Prirecap nice...
Continue soon n do pm me nxt time
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry guys but I can't pm coz I'm a newbie so I can't send links and also I can't copy the story sorry😔.Thank you for the comments and pls keep reading
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: indhulakshmi


Thanks yaar now I'm fine bas chhotta sa bukhaar tha.Waise itna maano ki jo bhi hotha hai achhe k liye hotha hai😊



Waise yeh baat toh sahi h... Tumhare saath kya accha hua??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SShreShthA



Waise yeh baat toh sahi h... Tumhare saath kya accha hua??


Meri saath aaj bahut achha hua tha kal mein class attend nahi ki and I got escaped from the testsss😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow this was amazing👏👏👏 and now after the precap I'm dying to see what happens next😛😛😛 You are awesome!! Jaldi update karo na😃😃😃
And I heard you were sick before😭 u ok?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az3003

Wow this was amazing👏👏👏 and now after the precap I'm dying to see what happens next😛😛😛 You are awesome!! Jaldi update karo na😃😃😃

And I heard you were sick before😭 u ok?

I'm absolutely fine.I had a small fever that's it😊.Thanks meri request maan ne k liee
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: indhulakshmi

I'm absolutely fine.I had a small fever that's it😊.Thanks meri request maan ne k liee

No problem!! But which request?😆

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