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Az3003

@Az3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: KDR81
Hi Dear,
It's Mesmerizing Azi...The scene you drew out was as if it was happening in front of us...!!!!!Pls continue...For I know Jodha cannot Die...rather Marium -Uz- Zamani is Born...!!!!😊 It's said that with Every Child Born, A mother too takes Birth...😊

Regards,
Kamal

Well said Kamal!!👏👏👏 I'll continue soon and thank you!!

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..Sofia..

@..Sofia..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

it was an amazing update👏
Do continue sOon😳

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SShreShthA

@SShreShthA

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Mmmuuuaaahhh...

So dear u hv brought an another terrific... Splendid... Beautiful... Superb... Emotional... Touching piece of ur writing... It is simplyyy excellent... And with songs u hv added it hd become more precious...
👏

U r seriously a brilliant writer... I m totally short of words for u, ur writing skills and ur imagination with which u wrote such an amazing prologue...
⭐️

So it is d consequence after fake luv shown by jalal to her...So if it is jodha so I dont think she could die... I know hv planned something for her... 😉 😃

As u said above that it is a point of CLIFF-HANGER... Plz yaar dont make it to be bear for very long... I m seriously very bad at handling suspense... Plz yaar do update its next chapter peity soon infact fast... 😃

Once again dear it is tremendously out of d world so as u... Keep it up... 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

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pooja urf pari

@parish99

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

it's amazing dear
please do continue soon
& thanks for the pm

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Az3003

@Az3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Wow Thank you Priya!!! And everyone who commented!!.. 🤗P.s. Guys I only send pms to those who comment not merely like😭... Your feedback is what means the world to me!!🤗 Sorry I love you guys❤️

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lourel24

@lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

it was wonderful though saddy saddy types but wana read wat further u have got in ur store where jodha died in the very beginning.plzzz continu😭

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L Azra...I love the way you've expressed yourself here...its amazing!

So heart-whelming it was...and I'm glad its not in Hindu/Urdu so non-speakers like me enjoy it too...

I can sort of guess what's in store for us 😳...but I'll let your writing do the talking - especially since its so wonderful!

The sad thing with FF esp unpredictable stories like yours is that us readers are at the mercy of writers...waiting for them to update 😭

Will wait for it...please add me to your pm list...😃

Edited by lashy - 11 years ago

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philantus01

@philantus01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

hey AZ

amazing concept...

love games by jalal 😭😭he played it wid her just to make her bow in front of him😭😭

does hamida know everything wht exactly her son did to her poor daughter-in-law??

now der is a suspense ova here " The Begum looked so pale... A corpse. Hamida sat with her for a few minutes. What happened next in that chamber would become the best kept secret of the entire Sultanate in all of history. After that, Hamida looked gravely at everyone in the chamber, Gulbadhan, Khwaja Shera, Moti, Reva and Jiji Anga, making them vow to never speak of this night again. "

whether shez alive??? if yes den y hamida kept it as a secret...y she dint said nything whn jalal was out of control...

u know wht u r very gud in choosing songs for ua update...dis song suits well wid ua update...

at first i was filled wid disgust for dis jalal den afta hamida informed him dat his wife died...i felt pity ...poor jalal...he realised her worth afta she left...

love ur writing...u make it sure dat d audience shud connect wid d story...hardly sum writers hav dis skill...*boon for u*

do continue soon...now i ll b eagerly waiting for d secret to b disclosed...😭😭 no patience in me...

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Az3003

@Az3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

@lashy (Shraddha right?)... Thanks for the review! You are officially on my buddy list!!🤗 @Priyanka... Very perceptive my darling!! Thank you!! Will try to update soon🤗 And thank you Radhika and Priya!!❤️

Edited by Az3003 - 11 years ago

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ApurvaLovesARVI

@ApurvaLovesARVI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

You are so brilliant in writing my sweet dear Choco-Pie [I decided to give you this name]

I literally had tears in my eyes on Jalal's condition. Loved Jodha's determination to give birth to his baby. Poor Jodha!! But I know you have some twist up your sleeve because I too have an experiance in writing such cliff-hanger stories.

I am warning you, Update it and TuJahan Mai Wahan soon or you I will murder my Choco-Pie. [Just kidding]

You are one of the Queen of AkDha stories, Sorry!! If it hurted you but JA Forum as so man exceptional writing talents, many of them are Queens!! What to do now?? But each one has a special charm and Power.

Update it soon!!