Originally posted by: sashashyam
I am impressed, Mansi.
This was a very eventful week, with practically all the characters we have seen so far (bar the much-missed Abdul, and the currently AWOL Motibai) milling around and creating assorted complications, plus so much happening on the ground.
From this tangled skein, you have managed to draw out a single, coherent connecting thread, by grouping the interactions characterwise and not chronologically. It is a compact, coherent, very useful read.
I might attach different weights to some parts of your collage, as with Jalal's epiphany at the Kali mandir, which I see as a seminal event whose significance goes way beyond the Jalal-Jodha equation, but that does not affect my pleasure in reading this very neat summary.
Shyamala
Thanks Shyamala!😛
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