AN AKDHA STORY: ISHQ HAI VO EHSAAS PART 1 PG 4 UPDATED - Page 2

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PART 1

4:00 am

The whole palace of agra was silent. Everyone were lost in their dreamland except one...JODDHA

MAN MOHANA...

KANHA SUNO NA

TARSO TUMHI KO MERE NAIN

Suddenly a beautiful melody the palace area...by this everyone was awake and out of their rooms

JALAL - adkha sahab yeh awaaz kahan se aa rhi hai aur ye kiski awaaz hai jald hi pata lagayie...

HAMIDA - ruk jaaiye jalal shayad aapne gor na farmaya ho par ye koi aam sangeet nhi hai balki ek krishn bhajan hai...

JALAL - jodha begum...

Meanwhile hamida saw one of jodha's daasi called her...

HAMIDA - sunu ye bhajan jodha hi gaa rhi hai na

DAASI - jee malika-e-aaliya...

And she left...

RUQAIYA - kya badtameezi hai yeh yadi aapni neend ki koi parvah na ho to dusri ki neend me khalal kyun daal rhi hai ye jodha...

JALAL - ruqaiye ye to sirf wohi bata sakti hai...

Jalal and hamida made their way towards jodha's room. There they saw jodha sitting in front of her kanha mandir and singing the bhajan wid daasis standing at the back...

CHODDH KE AAPNI KAASHI MATHURA

AAKE BAASO MORE NAIN

TARSO TUMHI KO MERE NAIN

KANHA TARSO TUMHI KO MERE NAIN...

BOTH THE MOTHER SON WAITED 4 HER TO FINISH HER PRAYER...JODHA HAS ALREADY SENSED THEIR PRESENCE SO SHE QUIKLY FINISHED THE RITUALS...

SHE GOT UP WID THE PUJA THAL IN HER HAND

JODHA - pranaam ammijan...

HAMIDA SHOOK HER HEAD IN RESPONSE

WITH A COLD TONE SHE GREETED JALAL AND STARTED HER CONVERSATION WID HAMIDA COMPLETELY IGNORING HIM...

HAMIDA - jodha aaj tum itni jaldi kaise uth gyi koi khaas karan hai kya

JALAL - haan amijaan koi khaas karan hi hoga varna bina wajah humaari begum sahiba yun iss tarah mehel me rehne waale logon ki neend me khalal nhi dalti...haina jodha begum...

HE SAID WITH A SMIRK ON HIS FACE WHICH IRRITATED JODHA... IGNORING HIM AND HIS TAUNTS...

JODHA - nhi ammijaan wo kya haina aaj krishn janmashtmi hai isliye hum ye geet gaa rhe the...hume laga ki taki aap ko koi pareshaani na ho isliye hum subah hi puja kar lete hai... parantu..

HAMIDA - nhi jodha beta hume koi pareshaani nhi hai...koi baat nhi..vaise kudrat ka khel dekho aaj ke din janmashtmi bhi hai to dusri taraf eid bhi hai...

BOTH THE LADIES SMILED AT THE THOUGHT BUT JALAL'S EYES WERE STRUCK ON AT JODHA..

HAMIDA - chaliye jodha beta ab hum chalet hai...jalal...

JALAL - jee ammijaan...

AND BOTH OF THEM LEFT...

BUT THEIR WAS ALSO SUM1 ELSE WHO LAUGHING A WITCH'S LAUGHTER AND...

PERSON - manalijiye khushi jodha begum kyunki bas ab kuch hi der ki baat hai aur phir kya pata aap yahan hongi bhi ya nhi...

THE WHOLE DAY WENT LIKE TAT ONLY. JODHA CELEBRATING HER KRISHN JANAMASHTMI AND OTHERS PREPARING 4 EID...

EVENING TIME

EVERYONE HAS GATHERED IN THE GROUND WAITING 4 THE MOON TO APPEAR

JIJI ANGA - aaj chaand aane me bohot samay laga rha hai

HAMIDA - intezaar kariye...

JALAL WAS LOOKING HERE AND THERE WAITING 4 THE MOON...SUDDENLY HIS EYES FELL ON JODHA'S ROOM'S BALCONY WHERE SHE WAS STANDING WID MOTI BAI. A FAINT LIGHT LIKE MOONLIGHT FELL ON HER ANGELIC FACE MAKING HER LOOK MORE HEAVENLY...

Yoon Shabnami Phele Nahi Thi Chandani
Chand Woh Bharman Gaya
Tujhko Dekha To Sharama Gaya
WOh Churane Laga Hai Nazar
Yoon Shabnami Phele Nahi Thi Chandani

Ho Yoon Shabnami Phele Nahi Thi Chandani
Chand Woh Bharman Gaya
Tujhko Dekha To Sharama Gaya
WOh Churane Laga Hai Nazar
Yoon Shabnami

JALAL'S EYES GOT STUCK ON HER AS IF THE TIME 4 HIM HAS STOPPED AND NONE WERE AROUND HIM...

Dheere Dheere Aake Hawa Gungunake
Har Khabar De Tumhari
Kaisa Yeh Nasha Hai
Nazar Mein Ghula Hai
Har Ghadi Hai Khumhari

Nashe Mein Kadam Mere
Udhar Kabhi Idhar
Gumsum Nazar Jaye Kidhar
Kho Gaye Tujhe Mein Hum Iskadar

HAMIDA - jalal dekho chaand aa gya

[Dekho Chand Aaya
Chand Nazar Aaya]3

Aaya Aaya Aaaya
Chand Aaya Sharma

Tu Bhi Aaja
Saawariya

Aaya Aaya Dekho {FROM MOVIE SAWARIYA}

JALAL - hum jaante hai ammijaan...

EVERYONE STARTED PRAYING. DURING THE PRAYER ALSO JALAL LEFT NO CHANCE TO SEE HER...

ALL TOGETHER - AMEN...

THIS EID WAS A SPECIAL ONE FOR JALAL...BUT THE REASON BEHIND THAT IS STILL NOT UNDERSTOOD BY HIM...

Precap - shatranj ka khel...

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NOTE - GUYS SINCE I M NOT A MUSLIM SO DONT KNO ANYTHING ABOUT HOW TO CELEBRATE EID SO THIS ALL IS MY THINKING AND NOT HURT ANYONES SENTIMENTS...

nice start dear...awesome

nice start dear...awesome

A very Good Start

Vow! Beautiful ! Awesome! Superb! It's really superb! Jodha's beauty the way u explain! Fantastic ! Continue soon and please pm me! 👏

Wow this is an awesome story👏👏👏

will update it by tomorrow