Ms. Ekta Kapoor how do I get a volunteering job in Balaji?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please let me know the protocols and I will do volunteering service for Balaji to teach your so called creatives how to begin, edit, continue, highlight and finally end a scene!
I have no experience in the showbiz industry but nevertheless I know how to handle and what to show when a lead pair is on in the same frame. Without so much as touching, or hugging or singing around trees I can show romance between the lead pair.

The creatives you have gone out of your wits showing endless meaningless fights and that is why you have forgotten when you have to tone down your lead characters and bring love in the air.

The boat ride was utterly dry with Jodha's curt replies followed by the attack and again no carrying the scene forward or any recapitulation later on from either side.

And golden opportunity missed of Jodha and Jalal on the same bed in the same room!! I am confused as to guess did she spend the night on the bed or not. Niharna, takna, toh dur ki baat, simple sleeping together on north and south pole of the bed was also missed.

Creatives if you want to know about romance go and read Pride and prejudice 5 times at least, read some Shakesperean plays and you will know what romance is. Even go and watch Satyajit Ray and you will know without even touching how romance is expressed, shown or felt. The tent scene left me all high and dry, no editing, no conclusion...cut abruptly midway.

Even simple things you could have highlighted upon, Jalal noticing Jodha upset on her mom and his simply stating how precious moms are insinuating Jodha that her anger is baseless or to let go and patch up with her mom was missed. Maybe you have forgotten that you have shown Jalal with a heart when he opened up to Maham and compared himself to Jodha saying how similar they both were, maybe you forgot the aarti scene where both felt the other's presence to the core, their underlying attraction, the undercurrent and vibes they share when they come face to face...CV's you must be suffering from temporary amnesia and that is why you are cutting their scenes abruptly without properly finishing and editing them.

I am utterly and thoroughly disappointed. And am disappointed in your selection of Rana Pratap as well. I know this is Jalal's story and you have to make him look superior, strong, smart and intelligent but you could have chosen a better person to play that character of Pratap. Sorry to say this actor looks sleepy to me and I can't relate the rajputani strength, power, glow, glory, pride and bravery in him. Nothing personal to the actor playing the part but somehow he is not befitting Rana Pratap's character.

Tomorrow I want to see the pleasure of Jalal in sharing Jodha's room and her reluctance in doing so and yet every step of the way the unsaid attraction, the unseen force binding them together, the unfelt romance that is lying within, the unheard heartbeats that will play drum roll in each other's ears, the under lying chemistry that will pull them to each other, unparallel nok-jhoks, unbeaten care for each other...all being portrayed clearly and yet subtly which will override the screen and will overflow in my living room giving me goosebumps witnessing it.

I know CV's you can do this, just pull up your socks! This is a Love Story and we are craving for healthy romance between Jodha and Jalal.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I want a volunteer job 2 😆
1. Why is romantic scenes ended abruptly ... Yday Epi Jodha came to Jalal Tent ... N she wanted to be there... Jodha expression was out there ... N Jodha sat on the bed n bas... Is it for viewers to imagine whats next... What a waste Cvs ... First time Jodha n Jalal on the same bed n nothing happen... im not telling them to do anything play with the expression ... Awkard expression... at least show us Jodha sleeping ... n Jalal sleeping... & at least show us morning... there was an OS written in the forum : Confusing Soul Credit to the writer, in one of her sentences she mention something like Jalal admiring Jodha Sleeping... Wat a waste cvs... Yday u should have shown jodha Sleeping on bed feeling awakard, somehow manage to get her sleep, this is wer Jalal open his eyes n admires Jodha sleeping... Background music play... Jodha feels Cold... Jalal put her blanket on... When he wanted to go, then Jodha turns n hes stuck with her... Background music... I should be the director now 😆
2. The Boat Scene - Again scene ended abruptly ... For viewers to imagine... I say wat the... its ok for them to go back to the camp safely but we viewers wanna see how they escape n reach there safely ... in detail... why was the need to cut that n go to drama mode straight
3. Cvs I have no problem with the drama thing that JA is showing but plz remember this is a Love story 2... U just dun put two people n one frame n give us half baked scene... For God Sake this is a Love story not Cursing Story...You have come up with good scenes earlier so what is the problem now...
-The bath tub scene wer Jodha helps Jalal that scene was good
-The arrthi scene was good...
-The sword scene was good 2... so whats stopping u guys from giving us good ones now...
4. Romance is something that started long way back... If today people kiss, hug n etc is bcoz it was started way back in old times. the method of doing it might be different but romance is still a romance no matter in wat era. The presentation can be be different but thinking that this does not suit that era n so its pretty ridiculous .
Thank you.
Sincerely,
An Ex-Gul Khan Show follower
Edited by riyya6 - 12 years ago
Sexylicious. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I want to volunteer as well. As Rajat's Spot girl ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hit the nail on the head! I totally agree 100%

Things went downhill since the tiger attack. The story was heading in a beautiful direction and God knows who picked it up and dropped it in a disorienting maze of loose threads and cliched romance.

We need more threads like this to guide the CVs out of this labyrinth.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Yes there have been loopholes

Hope the Cvs undrstnd their mistakes😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me too. i honestly want sum action scenes for rajat, bcoz his action skills havent been used properly yet. so can i be in action department plz.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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"Tomorrow I want to see the pleasure of Jalal in sharing Jodha's room and her reluctance in doing so and yet every step of the way the unsaid attraction, the unseen force binding them together, the unfelt romance that is lying within, the unheard heartbeats that will play drum roll in each other's ears, the under lying chemistry that will pull them to each other, unparallel nok-jhoks, unbeaten care for each other...all being portrayed clearly and yet subtly which will override the screen and will overflow in my living room giving me goosebumps witnessing it.

I know CV's you can do this, just pull up your socks! This is a Love Story and we are craving for healthy romance between Jodha and Jalal."

Brilliant! i completely agree with the beautiful lines written by u in bold, i also want to see the depth of romantic nok jhonk in their teasing expressions that ooze sex appeal and make our heart skip a beat..bring it on cvz..bring out the magic of romance from the lead..and we know u can do it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

I want to volunteer as well. As Rajat's Spot girl ❤️

tumbhina tani
oiiinano thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mee pari ki costume designer i made her wear salwar easy to wear n remove
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okay now I also want to volunteer atleast I can tell her where should be the camera focus
An ofc the editing ...and all the creative team is not doing anything great
.. 😆

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