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Posted: 12 years ago

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Arzz kiyaa hai

Mein likhtey jaoon tum padte jaon
Chalne de yeh silsilaa khabroon ka
Kabhie tum like karo toh kabhie hum like karen
Chalne de yeh kissa mohobatoon ka
Is par hain hum us par ho tum
Tere bina na hum mere bina na tum
Chalne de yeh mausum aashiqui ka
Kabhie khafaa toh kabhie khushi
Kabhie baichaini toh kabhie sukoon
Chalne de yeh bahaar india forum ka

I should send this to javed akhtar for his feedback Gulzar will defily kick me out
He is such a maestro of poems

But hope u all like it

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Wah Wah !! kya baat hai khbroo ji😊👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Very Nice.. Good Creativity 👏⭐️

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Guys can anyone translate... I dun understand 😕 But I know it's awesome 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

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wah wah.. khabroo..good.. nice poem 👏.. mujhe laga poem ke zariye aap JA ki age ki kahani bayaan kar rahi ho.. par it's really good one ji..😊😊..

P.S- don't send it to anyone, people doesn't like competitors.😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: riyya6
Guys can anyone translate... I dun understand😕But I know it's awesome😉

Why not dear :-) you dont understan written hindi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: AkhdaKhabroo

Why not dear :-) you dont understan written hindi

A bit yes but poem level no

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I saw the word khushi n that's the only thing I understand 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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waah-waah, waah-waah, waah-waah!👍🏼

luv it!❤️

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AkhdaKhabroo

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Posted: 12 years ago

mein shayar toh nahi magar aye JA jabse dekha meine tujhko shayaree aa gayee.

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