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Adden

@Add123

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Suvarna

@Super Kool

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Posted: 11 years ago

I almost melted by the time I reached the end of the OS...I could visualise each and every line...and, couldn't help but smile...thank you for writing such a beautiful post...😳

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Nikita

@niki_2293

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Posted: 11 years ago

beautifully potrayed...loved every part of it...especially akbar taking jodha out of the palace...amazing chemistry

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aanchal_c

@aanchal_c

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Posted: 11 years ago

swesome i hope smthing like this happens in the show.

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ash

@ashpat

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Posted: 11 years ago

it was just fabilous.i really liked- very different. i hope write another os,ss or ff.thanks.and if u do write than plz pm me👏

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dreamyjennice

@dreamyjennice

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Posted: 11 years ago

Adden u here...aww I love ur writings...hmm...do u rem me from dek forum...tagain this is ws awsome

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@--Janvie--

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Posted: 11 years ago

It was Just Awesome yaar! 👏 👏 ⭐️ You are such a Beautiful Writer. 😳 I loved this OS to the core of My heart.❤️
That Cliff scene was described beautifully beyond words by you especially followed by that Mandir-Masjid-the union of two religions! 😊 Trust me,You took My breath away!😉 😳Have to say you are Creatively Talented Writer with An Amazing Beauty of Words!! 👏 👏 ⭐️
The Way Akbar make it up to Jodha is so Mesmerizing and Beautiful in itself. 😳 I so wish the same can happen in the show too. 😳
Pls Write more OS,SS,FF anything you may prefer on Akdha.And Pls Do Continue this OS...I'm greedy to read more.😉 😳 😆
And Pls Do PM me whenever you write anything on Akdha or update this one. 😊 😳 😳

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Annie

@Star_girl

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aww, love the ending. so romantic. 😊

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SHARBI_NISHKA

@SHARBI_NISHKA

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Posted: 11 years ago

OMG FINALY WE GOT AKDHA HUG IN FF ...
NICE ATEMPT

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Chandni

@Chandni-

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Omg this was amazing I could seriously imagine everything the emotions and the expressions everything was so surreal! Thanks for sharing this it was absolutely beautiful please write more :D

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