Jodha Akbar Fan Fiction - The Ultimate Saga CH1pg5

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Yoga priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Interesting Prologue Hun 😳

Waiting for update 😉

Btw congrats for your FF 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: cuterishabhala
Hey!
so ur a vivian fan too!!!
Gr8 yaar...i guess since MBEIEJ has now lost its charm,all d rishbala fans & even vdians have found a new adda here in JA furum!
anyways nice 2 c u here & BTW its an awesome ff
Do continue soon & pm me as well

yeh love Vivian; saw all his shows! 😳 Still watching MEIEJ for DVD

i am a Rajat fan also! 😳 I started to watch this show bcz of him but Paridhi is damn good as well.

and thanx for liking my FF. Will pm u for sure 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm
Nice👍🏼Please continue...
and dont frgt to pm me

thanx dear

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: yoga23priya
Interesting Prologue Hun 😳

Waiting for update 😉

Btw congrats for your FF 👏

thanx dear

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: arnav26
Good one!!continue soon😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: worldequalsyou
please update soon and pm me :D

will pm u

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Guys I know I updated after a long time and I am extremely sorry for that. I promise i'll update more often and please leave ur precious comments and likes.

Chapter 1

"Teri Jodha Mughalo ke ghar jayegi!" Shaguni Bai's predictions haunted Mainavati almost every passing second.

Now when she got to know Jalal had trespassed their territory her fear doubled up for Jodha.

She wanted to get Jodha marry Suryabhan as soon as possible. She spoke to Raja Bharmal for his consent. He also agreed thus they sent a "sandesh" (letter) to Suryabhan regarding Jodha and his alliance.

@ Bhanpur

"Raja sa aapke liye ye sandesh aya hain Amer se!" One of his soldiers said. Surya took the letter and read the letter.

The letter contained the fixed date for Jodha and Suryabhan's marriage. They wanted to do it secretly as he was scared of Shaguni bai's prophecy regarding Jodha's future. Surya was on cloud nine and in both palaces everyone was busy with the wedding chores unaware of the storm that will arrive.

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"Kya? Shehzadi Jodha ka vivah Raja Suryabhan ke saath?" Jalal inquired. His anger knew no bounds. "Ji huzoor." One of his soldier said who stays as a disguised Rajput soldier in Amer as Jodha's guard. "Unki vivah kab hain?" Jalal asked while twitching his sword round. "Huzoor do din baad." The soldier said. "Hmm.. takliya!" He dismissed all his guards as he needed to make some plans to stop this marriage.

"Hume ye kataye manzoor nahi ki koi humari cheez chinney ki koshish bhi kare. Rajkumari Jodha hamari hain! Aur uss par koi haq jatay ussey pehle voh hamari ho jayegi!" He thought with an evil smirk on his face. He clapped his hands and two guards entered. "Sharifudding ko ye paigam (letter) bheja jaye ki hum unse mulaqat karna chahte hain aur voh shegri hi Agra pauche." He said and dismissed them.

Precap : Jodha missing... Suryabhan found dead!

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