Akdha ff: Destiny CH 15 updated (Thread Closed) - Page 73

Vow Tahni...👏👏👏 Romance...Passion...Jealousy... This chapter is filled with my all favorite emotion... and you have done commendable⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️job on it... The way U write your story blow me off every time.

Lets comes to the story... I am glad Poor Jalal is feeling better after seeing Jodha's behavior toward surya... So Cute... I was laughing when she said CHIII... And Jalal's answer touched my heart... vow... U deserve clap for that dialogue... Jalal and his dream ye to gaya kam se...

Jalal laughed at Jodha's reaction to his words. He slowly moved closer to Jodha. He moved his face closer to hers. His lips brushed against her ears. Her divine smell reached his nostrils and he was lost in it. Jodha closed her eyes, feeling his warm lips on her ears. Jalal spoke in a low tone "You are not the only one who knows about love."

Yaar this sentence gave me shiver... Superb!!! Your writing is very practical... Not too dramatic... very much close to reality... Jodha will know soon... if he is love with her not... her curiosity is at the top... and Jalal is giving her surprise pe surprise... Dress and earrings ... FOR MY JODHA...awww... and my fav...black sari... I love sari...OMG!!! So many compliment... the way he looked at her... I picture everything... I love the lines below:

. I just want to make him understand that you are married to me and that you are only mine." Jalal gave out his explanation in a protective tone. Jodha thought to herself "Go with the flow." She spoke " You don't have to give me an explanation Jalal. Im ok with it."

Vow... amazing... They both ready to accept each other but what is stopping them... they both are in love...I am waiting for their confession... Jo made him Jealous... hmmm he felt ignore... but smart Jallu take her away from him... and Dance... SUPER SONG VO JUST PERFECT FOR THE SITUATION he was about to kiss her... And came back to their sense... thodi der baad me sense aati ho😲😲😲...vow... I have imagine entire chapter... Yaar... I am really impress with UR writing... Love U Sweety...🤗🤗🤗

Brilliant Update Tahni darling..!!👏👏 Loved How Ja is slowly feeling soft for her and forgetting his revenge..!!

Update , update , update , . We all really love this 👏

Tahni 😎 MISSING U SWEETY😳 WHERE ARE U... AAJ KA VADA HAI😳

OH JANE JANA THUNDE TUJE DIVANA... UPDATE JAAN

AAJ NA CHODUNGI TUJE DUM DAMA DUM...

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

Di 🤗 where were u?

Yaar I came back from vacation yesterday...🤗 I was at my sister home...but I was login every day on IF... I had my Ipad... Ye pura week kafi dull ...pari ka zataka... So how r U...

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Yaar I came back from vacation yesterday...🤗

I also went to a two day vacation...
How was it? 🤗

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

I also went to a two day vacation...
How was it? 🤗

Supeb!!! I went to my sister home in Ohio... Cleveland... so much fun... I was active on if...but not that much...any way lately IF is so quite... Tanhi we need some fun post... some romantic post... WITH OUT U VERY QUITE ON IF😆

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Supeb!!! I went to my sister home in Ohio... Cleveland...so much fun...I was active on if...but not that much...any way lately IFis so quite... Tanhi we need some fun post... someromantic post...WITH OUT U VERY QUITE ON IF😆

happy u had fun..
IF is rocking these days! Actually from yesterday after the lip lock spoiler.. I made two fun posts.. Will make another one.. Aww 🤗
I did