Akdha ff: Destiny CH 15 updated (Thread Closed)

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arnavkushibest

@arnavkushibest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

really superb upate👏waiting for the next part,thanks for the pm😛

who is that new entry made jalal angry

excited waiting😊

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Tahni ...Tahni...Tahni..OMG...👏👏👏👏👏

Wow yar.. You are terrific writer yar..What a chapter!!😳😳

Amazing !! I love you so much for this amazing story..⭐️⭐️

Loved the way you described their dresses and Nikah..Now plz update Jodha u r mine!!
I am dying for it !!😛😛 Love you so much darling !!😊😊😊

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ash

@ashpat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

i am so excited to read more. this was amazing update Tahni!!! A new entry? girl or guy? omg? i am curious now. plzzz update soon. I am loving jalal is affected by jodha already...thx for pm.

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SShreShthA

@SShreShthA

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: PrincessNany
Tahni ...Tahni...Tahni..OMG...👏
Wow yar.. You are terrific writer yar..What a chapter!!😳😳

Amazing !! I love you so much for this amazing story..⭐️⭐️

Loved the way you described their dresses and Nikah..Now plz update Jodha u r mine!!
I am dying for it !!😛😛Love you so much darling !!😊😊😊

Totally with nancy update that also na... Plz

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SShreShthA

@SShreShthA

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Btw jst 23like r more left... 😉

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Silvy

@SilverBell

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Awsome Update. (:
I Hope Jodha's Suffering Will Be Over Soon.

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pooja urf pari

@parish99

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

HEY!
awesome update dear, loved it
please do continue soon
& please pm me, if possible

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#168

You are a awesome writer! Fresh concept! Please pm me when u update!

Love it

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philantus01

@philantus01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

awesome update tahni...loved it...👏👏

finally d intoxication of love ll blossom between d duo...😳😳

poor jodha ...feeling bad for her...frst her dad n now her hubby😡

i m eagerly waiting for d next update😆😆

new entry...A man???? whether jalal ll b jealous😕😕

oh ho so much questions in mah mind😆😆

thnx for d pm 🤗

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Az3003

@Az3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#170

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Tahni my Darling I'm so sorry I was away😭😭😭

I just read your update and it was fantastic👏👏👏 Thank you for dedicating this to us 🤗 Love you Sweety... Now to the update

It was unbelievably fantastic!!👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I love the pre-love hate track and you describe Jalal and Jodha's feelings so beautifully and eloquently that I can feel that their hatred for each other currently will soon blossom into a beautiful and powerful, legendary love❤️Your dialogues are spot-on and witty. You are the master of nokjok banter😆😆😆😆

Thank you for the wonderful update Tahni my Darling🤗❤️ My fave part:

Both of them were drowned in each other's hatred. Both planning on taking revenge. Destroying each other's life. Little did they know what had destiny planned for them. The First Chapter of their lovestory had already started..

You are superb and I love you for this!!!❤️😳😳😳

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