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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well hello there, jodha akbar fans!!
today is the day, our show has started! finally giving us a feast to watch our favourite actor do the magic over our hearts! yes its rajat tokas i am talking about! well my luck has not been favouring me these days and also my lazy aunt! wy you might ask! its because the remote is always in her hand making the tv under her control! ya ya could not watch the epi at 8!! *curses under the breath*

Well that is my side of the sory, my pain. coming to the epi, would like to tell somthing. it can be a suggestion or a request. depends on how you see it! (I saw 3 parts online, hehehe. :( quality wasn't good)well starting on:
1) the makbara scene: a really innovative and creative way to start the epi. it was beautifully written except for the language. I personally did not like the language. it was way too modern. not shudh hindi. I guess ekta should improve it!

2) the war scenes: well the war scenes are difficult to direct ad enact, the scene where the young jalal gets attacked by the rajput and the time he gets hold of the man's hand could have been better. the boy they chose to play 15 old jalal had very little resemblance to RT! well my opinion again.

3) rajat's entry: well that was totally nexpected! the entry could have been abit more power packed!b well not a very good entry but not a disappointing one either.

4) jodha's entry: well loved all the parts, jodha running and stuff but again there the hindi is bugging me! it needed a bit more you know filtration for example instead of guss krodh could be used. rukh jao could be rukiye! mean thodi shudhta??

Well apart from the fact that the hindi could have been better and little more improvements, the parts saw were awesome! the soul talk in the makbara was awesome! hayyyeee rajat's voice was mwah!paridi's was good but donno why I found their voices somewhat different like they are using their nose! hmph again can blame the freaking quality of the video!
Well wpuld love it if ekta would just improve the hindi, the urdu is fine but hindi, improvement needed! well that was my take! do dicuss stuff and voice your opinions! no bashing or hate! love ya!

P.s: it took a lot of time to type this! And I was trying my best to keep some atandards of writing! You don't like no problem but comment or view and make it red hot topic! not only mine every topic in the forum if you want it to be in top 5!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ya the episode was good...n the entries were awesome...

n Rajat was looking so cute 😳 haaye aaj toh maar hi daala 😳

anyways coming back to the point...Paridhi was also good

but they shud improve their speech...its a little mixed up i feel 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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well i will agree wid u a bit...i was soo disappointd was d whole jodha's family abt d dailogues...dey r rajputs...dey need to say evrthng in a rajput manner...sujamal was quite...jodha is btful...evrythng is fyn wid her..i jst want more rajput accnt in her...oderwise she prtrys a rajput prnces well

rajat k to dailogues v ni theexcpt dat mkbara prt...which was mndblwing...his voice jst made my heart skip a beat...mesmerwng...lvd it..jodha sft voice was gud dere...dat prt was epic...nd bairam khan doing nyc...nd rajat k jinne v scenes the dey were awsmm exo d precap

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Posted: 12 years ago
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The dialogs could have been much better , I felt that too . Hopefully the scriptwriters will pay more attention to these details .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome post:-)
I agree with u:-)
Jus Loved Rajat<3<3<3
Paridhi was also good:-):-)...
But In the last moment where Jodha was doing Aarti.. I found that scene a lil overreacted, so much camera drama Like Ekta mata's other serials 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -The_Tomboy-

Well hello there, jodha akbar fans!!

today is the day, our show has started! finally giving us a feast to watch our favourite actor do the magic over our hearts! yes its rajat tokas i am talking about! well my luck has not been favouring me these days and also my lazy aunt! wy you might ask! its because the remote is always in her hand making the tv under her control! ya ya could not watch the epi at 8!! *curses under the breath*


Oh no!

Well that is my side of the sory, my pain. coming to the epi, would like to tell somthing. it can be a suggestion or a request. depends on how you see it! (I saw 3 parts online, hehehe. :( quality wasn't good)well starting on:

1) the makbara scene: a really innovative and creative way to start the epi. it was beautifully written except for the language. I personally did not like the language. it was way too modern. not shudh hindi. I guess ekta should improve it!

I liked this scene one,man 😆 All because of Rajat though. ☺️His voice has always been so appealing <3

2) the war scenes: well the war scenes are difficult to direct ad enact, the scene where the young jalal gets attacked by the rajput and the time he gets hold of the man's hand could have been better. the boy they chose to play 15 old jalal had very little resemblance to RT! well my opinion again.

Agreed.I think they should take stuntmen only in these scenes n not just junior artistes.It does make a difference!The chotu Jalal didn't make an impression on me.

I have seen a very very talented teenager (small boy infact!) doing something similar to this. 😳So that may have something to do with it 😳 Dude,come on.There isn't anyoen who cna be better than Rajat!So,yeah.Chotu akbar just didn't work for me


3) rajat's entry: well that was totally nexpected! the entry could have been abit more power packed!b well not a very good entry but not a disappointing one either.

Ah!the bhaari bharkam entry i have been shouting about!Hehe.knwo what?i have an intuition,a proper entry will be shown tomorrow.the kind we want 😉

4) jodha's entry: well loved all the parts, jodha running and stuff but again there the hindi is bugging me! it needed a bit more you know filtration for example instead of guss krodh could be used. rukh jao could be rukiye! mean thodi shudhta??

Yes.i agree.They mixed some marvadi words in the middle i guess.(Mhaare,thaare etc) So that was fine.but you know,they can use hindi only n maybe polish it a little bit more.Liek how they did it in PRC.Its hard to beat somethin like that,but still,ithey cud try

Well apart from the fact that the hindi could have been better and little more improvements, the parts saw were awesome! the soul talk in the makbara was awesome! hayyyeee rajat's voice was mwah!

i have been gushing bout his voice all over the forum ☺️ how awesome can he be?!

paridi's was good but donno why I found their voices somewhat different like they are using their nose! hmph again can blame the freaking quality of the video!
Well wpuld love it if ekta would just improve the hindi, the urdu is fine but hindi, improvement needed! well that was my take! do dicuss stuff and voice your opinions! no bashing or hate! love ya!

P.s: it took a lot of time to type this! And I was trying my best to keep some atandards of writing! You don't like no problem but comment or view and make it red hot topic! not only mine every topic in the forum if you want it to be in top 5!


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i love you woman!you spoke like a true Rian 😎

brilliant post gowriii
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Rose--


But In the last moment where Jodha was doing Aarti.. I found that scene a lil overreacted, so much camera drama Like Ekta mata's other serials 🤣


i so agree! 🤣

i was like,what is she doing?! princesses dont do that!! 😛

that scene was a big let down for me.it was stretched way too much n poorly executed.not to forget the horrendous BGM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Grown up Akbar's entry was a total let down ! 👎🏼
They gave a much better entry to the chotu Akbar and I must say that boy did extremely well . 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: disha15



i so agree!🤣

i was like,what is she doing?! princesses dont do that!!😛

that scene was a big let down for me.it was stretched way too much n poorly executed.not to forget the horrendous BGM!



Yup that BGM🤣
Kya kare hai to Ekta mata ka hi serial na;-) 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i jst hope ek will wrk on bg score... i want supr dupr bgm for akbar...

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