Intro poem On Jiya Jaley

Hi friends,

Just a poem striked me for Jiya Jaley...so sharing with u all..

Diloo Ke taar ko chu jaye,
Rishto ke jharokho mey kho jaye,
Dil mey pyaar ka jasbaat anjana sa,
Anchuha ahsaas masumiyat ke sath panapta sa,
yeh 'Sunaina 'jiski sadgi ,masumiyat aur nritya ne deewana sabko kiya,
yeh 'chandan' jisne dusro ke dukh dard mitane ka pakka irada hai kiya,
Dono ka milna ek pal mey kuch kehsa gaya,
lekin Naa dil samjha Naa kuch rishta agey baddpaya,
Dusri Mulakat ek dusrey keliye Pyaari yaad bann rehgayi,
Ek dusre ko itne pass aur kitne door le gayi,
teesri Kadwi mulakat ajeeb itefaak si hai lagi,
shayd yehi mulkat banjaye inke jeevan ki Ek majboot kadi,
Ek nayi kahani ek naya chitrikaran pyaara humey lagey,
Kuch Aisa yeh chalraha sab pucche kya dekha tumney'Jiya jale'?

----- Bhoomi

Bhooomiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii... u did it yaar
it is fantastic yaar 👏 👏 👏 .. keep it up..

Originally posted by: gaurifan

Bhooomiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii... u did it yaar
it is fantastic yaar 👏 👏 👏 .. keep it up..

Aialaaa Reena mera chehra bluch kareke 😳 laal hogaya...U really liked it..heheh...Actually after our conversation abt JJ I just had these words in mind..likha notepad pe socha lets share iwht u..and posted ...didnt even recheck it.... 😆 itni jaldi thi...

chalo i feel this was not to the parr next time when i write aur jyada achaa likhne ka try karungi...

thanks Reena for ur encouragemnt..🤗