Sensations- part 10 PG 10 updtd 31 december - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Santiago24

Yayyy! We have an FF on RajVi finally! Thank you Nisj.. great going.. pls update soon

Do mention😆
Will updt soon
Thank u😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2
The doctor came and treated her sprained ankle. But there was no sign of Adhi or maasa, thankfully.
It was late afternoon when Devi was limping her way to Her Store room when she saw Saradh and Kesar talking. She noticed that Kesar enjoyed his company and Saradh valued her's. Something really beautiful is on its way!
Devi smiled at the thought and went to her room.
The day passed like that and fall came.
Adhi and Saradh were discussing some work when Saradh asked out of the blue,
" How's Devi now? Better".
Adhi stopped abruptly and looked up at him.
"Yes, she is fine, You don't need to Worry about Her".
For Adhi, his words meant that Saradh didn't need to waste his time worrying over that woman.
But Saradh understood something entirely different.
His eyes widened and he stifled a smile.
What a discovery!
" Adhi, no need to get all offensive on me!"
"What?" Adhi asked confused.
" I was just asking generally about Devi but you went and warned me to mind my own stuff and not bother myself with Your Devi", Saradh explained.
" When did I ever say that?" Adhi asked incredulously.
"You didn't but your undertone did! Getting all Jealous just by my asking about her!"
Saradh accused playfully.
"When did I! Don't be delusional! Jealous!! Over that woman! Not a chance in hell!" Adhi exclaimed but froze when the memory of their proximity passed his eyes.
" Relax! I was just pulling your leg. I asked because you looked lost, like your head was not in the work and stuff, probably because of Her".
"Can you shut up! That Chauhan doesn't bother me at all", Adhi shouted.
" When did I ever take her name?" Saradh asked meaningfully.
Adhi paused.
" Don't you have work to do. Wasting time like that!" Adhi asked.
" OK, I am going but changing topic won't change the Fact", Saradh spoke while disappearing into corridor.
Adhi shut the files and threw them into a corner. He sighed deeply.
Whatever that transpired in the morning bw them, he wasn't feeling even an iota of remorse even though he was convincing himself to feel disgusted by that incident.
He wanted to feel that again.
"NO" ,Adhi shouted to no one, against his own treacherous Desires.
And against his better judgement, Adhi found himself at the door of Her room.
Looking in, he found her leisurely sprawled on the floor, smiling while looking at the phone screen.
'That frustration again!' He groaned internally and stepped inside the room.
Footsteps alerted Devi and she looked in the direction to see Him.
And she jumped up into a standing position unconsciously.
Adhi looked confused but nevertheless took a step closer. And oddly enough, she took a step back.
Now that was weird. She was eerily quiet! He expected her to enquire him the reason for visiting her so late but she...
He took another step closer and she stepped back, again.
Devi's mind was blank. Her whims were controlling her steps.
And thus she took another step back. But didn't realise that a sack of wheat was right behind her and lost her balance on striking it.
Adhi continued to look as she fell on her back, on the sack; hung in the middle barely balancing as if in a yoga position and then trying to get up but failing due to absence of support.
She rattled like a fish without water and he chuckled.
"Help kijiye na!" She pleaded.
" madad chahie toh..." He asked smirking.
'Tit for Tat'
" Fine! I will do what you ask, now please help me up!"
" Anything!?" He asked for confirmation.
"Anything!!" She repeated exasperated.
"OK" he affirmed and pulled her up by her palms.
And she came right upto him. Close enough to be, enchanted by her fragrance.
He was engrossed in her eyes and Devi softly freed her hand from his hold. She turned to lift her phone but paused on feeling a resistance.
Turning around she found her wrist in his steel grip and his eyes pulling her closer like a magnet. And thus she let herself be pulled closer.
Both continued to look into each other's eyes.
"I have work to do", she whispered softly, in a voice she never knew existed.
" You promised right now. Anything", he reminded her in the soft tone, equally dazed.
He felt Peace right now.
Peace...
Devi...
Saradh...
His words roamed his head.
Jealousy...
And with that Adhi let go of her hands abruptly and stepped back.
He started leaving when few voices were heard in corridor.
But he started to leave nevertheless.
Devi smiled as a light bulb lit over her head.
"Ruk jaiye".
He paused and turned around.
" I think maasa is outside ".
" So.." he asked uninterested.
"So if she saw You leaving MY room at this Hour she will MISUNDERSTAND".
" Je toh sahi baat hai", he murmured.
" Ab ke?" He asked.
She did a bhangra internally.
Her plan has worked. She will ask him to hide in such a place that his hiding place will be given away easily and maasa will see him. And then he will be Super Embarrassed.
"Now, you go and hide over there", she pointed.
He agreed and disappeared in a flash.
Devi smiled and awaited the arrival of Dear Maasa.
Recap: His cold hands against her warmth felt soothing. The air cackled as their breaths danced in unison.
How's it!
Do comment
Edited by nish_vir - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
ufff!! your writing crackles with chemistry..
and the best part, i dont read your story but I see Devi and Adiraj and the whole show as i read it.. Here I saw the entire scene between the two in Kalkotri.. she falling, he pulling her up.. he asking ab ke?!!

Love love love it! ❤️

Go on!! 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Super duper update. ..loved it...specially loved adiraj saying 'ab ke?"waiting for the next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Santiago24

ufff!! your writing crackles with chemistry..

and the best part, i dont read your story but I see Devi and Adiraj and the whole show as i read it.. Here I saw the entire scene between the two in Kalkotri.. she falling, he pulling her up.. he asking ab ke?!!

Love love love it! ❤️

Go on!! 😊

Beech beech mein Hindi daalne SE feel aati hai!😉
Thank u for ur inspirational words...makes my mind race with sensational thoughts😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinlora

Super duper update. ..loved it...specially loved adiraj saying 'ab ke?"waiting for the next part

Sabko "ab ke" hi psnd aaya!😲
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Devi and Adhiraj really have sizzling chemistry. You just portrayed that chemistry beautifully in your writing. Looking forward to reading more.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Part 3
Suddenly her mouth was clasped. She tried to yelp but failed.
She found herself being pulled behind the boxes and ramming into something rock solid. Looking up, her eyes met his and she relaxed.
He removed his hand and whispered slowly in response to her inquisitive eyes.
" chori, I understand you good enough to know that you were planning to trap me and embarass me again ".
Her eyes widened.
' Gyi Devi paani mein' she thought ruefully.
" Chori kathe gyi maaji SA!" Urmi stated horrified.
Masa huffed in response and shouted, " search the store well, or that chori will appear out of nowhere again and lie that she was here only".
Adhi and Devi were hiding behind a stack of boxes when Adhi suddenly jumped and bit back a yelp.
Devi turned around horrified and widened her eyes at him.
His pale face dictated all as she saw chotu adhiraj near his legs.
" Urmi, I heard some voice from there. Check it!" Masa ordered.
Adhi's face lost its palor but Devi was cool. If they were caught in the situation now, it will be a far worse blunder than earlier.
She chuckled inwardly.
Her joy was interrupted when she was pulled again.
Noticing her surroundings, she found herself in a box huddled closely to him.
It was a bit suffocating and she moved a bit. He turned to glare at her but paused on finding her face close.
The box was small. Too small.
They were too close for His comfort.
He sighed.
It was getting real hot. Devi realised staring into his hazel brown eyes.
Their position was compromising. In his hurry to fit in, he had taken Devi in his arms. They were in a hugging position with her face resting over his shoulder and hands around his waist. His face loomed a bit over her shoulders and his fisted hands nearly refrained from caressing her waist.
The air crackled. Their hot breaths mingled as they stared at each other.
It was literally hot. Their bodies got wet with sweat and the environment became even more sensual.
Masa and urmi had resigned long ago and had left but the two in the box didn't care.
Sweat stinks. Usually.
But Adhiraj was totally getting worked up by the weird arousing scent in air.
He felt like hugging her.
' Oh God' he prayed internally.
His prayers were heard.
Suddenly air entered the box and his neck found enough space to straighten up.
' Strange! Did the size of box increase suddenly'.
He looked up perplexed and was left open mouthed.
Urmi stood right above their heads with shock painted all over her face.
" Devar sa the ke kar rahe ho?" She questioned.
He decided to stand first but failed.
Right. He and Devi were tangled with each other.
" chori ", he hissed.
" What?" Devi snapped out of her trance and looked up to find Urmi.
He motioned with his head to get up.
She nodded in understanding and they both stood together.
Devi's legs wobbled a bit and she was about to fall when he balanced her.
Eyes met again and Urmi was long forgotten.
Something weird was happening. Devi found herself getting lost in his eyes over and over.
What is happening!! He is unable to tear his gaze away from her big eyes.
Urmi cleared her voice and they both straightened away from each other.
" Not a word about this to masa", Adhi ordered Urmi.
" Main toh na bolungi devar Sa par ye chori.." Urmi was interrupted by Adhi.
" Just focus on what I told you".
Urmi nodded meekly but kept standing.
" What are you waiting for? Leave!" Adhi shouted annoyed and thus Urmi hurried out.
He slightly massaged his head as Devi continued staring at him.
Suddenly he looked up, horror written all over and before Devi could register anything else, she found herself engulfed deep in the sanctuary of his warmth.
'He is warm'
She thought over and over as her body went limp in his embrace.
Eyes wide open because she was experiencing bolts of something new.
Adhiraj had his arms wrapped around her waist and head protectively, his face buried in her neck.
" Devrani Bai SA".
As kesar's voice reached her ears, Devi snapped into reality with a jerk and so did Adhi and moved away from her, and left before something else could happen.
Devi tried to gather her nerves. It was a mess. Her heart was racing.
What was Adhi doing?
" Devrani baisa aap theek hai", Kesar asked rushing in.
" Ha...jethani SA...I...I...amfine. What will happen to me?" Devi replied, still a bit haggard.
" Thank God. I was startled when I heard a deafening voice"
" Voice?" Devi asked inquisitively.
" Ha, that's why I rushed here, seemed like sound of boxes falling".
Devi stood rooted to the spot before sharply turning around, to find all the steel boxes and the utensils in them scattered on the floor.
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'Adhiraj was saving her or else her head would have been flattened real good'
' Thank God, it wasn't any sign of affection; just his usual helping-but-not-telling self' Devi sighed in relief.
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" I didn't hear the sounds at all!" Devi shrieked scaring the wits out of Kesar.
"Kya hua?" Kesar asked.
Devi was in a shock. She failed to notice that sound because she was way more shocked to be in His arms.
"Oh My God", Devi whispered and slipped onto the floor.
" It can't be".
Adhi was doing push-ups in the room reminiscing their close encounters.
Focus
Focus
And Adhi stood up annoyed.
He was a mess. His heart was threatening to jump out of the rib cage for some reason! And he had no idea!
However he vividly remembered the lump that formed in his throat when those trunks were going to fall on her.
They were real heavy.
If they would have fallen on her, she...
And his chest gave a painful squeeze.
What the hell?
Why was it aching at the mere thought of imagining Her hurt?
So how's it???
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Bahut khoob, chori.. bahut khoob..
Te aise hi likhte jao..par thoda jaldi😊

Ok, normal now... I again saw the whole scene in kalkotri today.. sexy!!! That bit bout adiraj getting scared of chora adiraj was a nice touch 👏


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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Very nice update!! Looking forward to reading more!!

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