Wish it had been this way after makeover

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Jassi walks out, armaan is turned to nandani, his back towards the entrance. nandani tells him,
"wo dekho wo rahi jassi," and he turns around at this, and the first thing he sees was a hazy vision due to distance. with every single step jassi takes towards him his vision gets clearer. but what is this, this seems like a girl in a dress that fits sooo perfectly to her body, and jassi is never like that, is she really jassi, and he blinks his eyes, once, twice, thrice, and some more just to make sense of what he is seeing.

After a few moment of self check he realises he is seeing none other than jassi - his jassi; his one and only love, the girl who melted his heart for the person she was. and than his eyes rests on her beautifully cut hair. his heart stops at what he sees, she looked gorgeous. she walks pass him and stop by nandani, while he just stands there breathing the air that just touch her and then him when she walked pass him. and then her soothing voice drips honey in his ears,
"armaan sir?" she says and he turns around only to stare at her. nandani realises and walks away making an excuse, and as soon as they are left alone he comes near her. her heart pounds as he closes their distance and finally comes at a touching distance. Very gently he lifts his hand and moves it gently, barely touching over her beautiful hair. she closes her eyes instantly, feeling his touch and then his hands cups her face,
"apni jassi say tu main janay kab say pyar karta hoon. par aaj tumhain dekha tu laga aasmaan say koee apsara utar aayee hai." his words brings a broad yet shy smile on her beautiful face. she drops her gaze and he lifts her face up,
"meri taraf dekho jassi," he persuades and she lifts her eyes, "chahay kuch bhi ho jayay, tum meri ho aur bas meri hi rehna." he says with amazing passion.
"main aap hi ki jassi hoon armaan sir. Sirf aap ki." she matches his passion and smilingly hides her face in his broad chest. Ge wraps his arms around her and rests his chin on her head, closing his eyes, living jassi and her love.
"i love you jassi ....." words of love pours out of his tongue sending shivers down her spine. his love was sooo evident, how can this be fake. she can feel his love and happily she moves her arms around him and loses herself in his warmth and safety.

What say girls???? 😊

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shanti05 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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O yes Kashu !!! This wud be soooo beautiful !!! U won't beleieve when I was watching the vidoe I just imagined this and I was like Kaaash Armnaan was there instead of Purab !!! The whole makeover first glimpse of Jassi wud be soooo romantc and beautiful !!! His words whud send shivers down her spine and she wud have been so happy and a shamili Jassi in the Armaans of her Armaan Sir wud have been soo tratful to watch !!! šŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oooh how i wish it would have been just the way you described šŸ˜... thanks for sharing your beautiful script with us..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey to aap yahan pe bhi lafzon ke jaadoo chala rahi hain.............wonderful naration .........kash armaan was the one instead of open mouthed purab but thanks for such sweet naration šŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Haiiiii Kashish if only Dreams could come true 😳 ...

I wish something like this happened in the Serial too 😳 ..just imagine Jassi coming out of the hotel and Armaan giving her those Killer Passionate looks and murmuring "Kya yehi meri Jassi hai ya phir swarg se utri koi apsara" 😳 😳 ...I mean it would hv been a treat for all Jassi and Armaan fans if the makeover of Jassi would hv happened in Armaan's presence..that is if Armaan had also somehow come to Mauritious 😳 😳 ...

But as I keep saying Some dreams never come true 😭 and some nightmares always comes true 😔

But Kashish just wonderfully written yaar šŸ‘ šŸ‘ ..why don't u continue this story and make it into an interesting FF šŸ˜›
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Arre wah...Tum yahan bhi shuru ho gayi.....awesome K !!!
now instead of Jassi we can put ourselves in the scene....well this if called giving
wings to your imagination!!!... šŸ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iloveapu

Arre wah...Tum yahan bhi shuru ho gayi.....awesome K !!!
now instead of Jassi we can put ourselves in the scene....well this if called giving
wings to your imagination!!!... šŸ˜†



hahahhahahahahaha Nups i was waiting for you "tum yahan bhi shuru ho gaee" hehhehehehe i knew u would say that, i juts knew it. 😊

array yar, na karo bhaee, uff dil kitna khush hota to see armaan and jassi, than that purab .... uff, i tell you, i cant tolerate him!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti06

Haiiiii Kashish if only Dreams could come true 😳 ...

I wish something like this happened in the Serial too 😳 ..just imagine Jassi coming out of the hotel and Armaan giving her those Killer Passionate looks and murmuring "Kya yehi meri Jassi hai ya phir swarg se utri koi apsara" 😳 😳 ...I mean it would hv been a treat for all Jassi and Armaan fans if the makeover of Jassi would hv happened in Armaan's presence..that is if Armaan had also somehow come to Mauritious 😳 😳 ...

But as I keep saying Some dreams never come true 😭 and some nightmares always comes true 😔

But Kashish just wonderfully written yaar šŸ‘ šŸ‘ ..why don't u continue this story and make it into an interesting FF šŸ˜›



ahhh jyoti, u got that girl, some dreams never come true. not here, neither in kaajjal serial. thats why they say, life is not always fair.

i so wish it would have been armaan instaed of purab ... ufff i just cant take him any more. what does he think of himself. arghhhh.


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: thesaint148



hahahhahahahahaha Nups i was waiting for you "tum yahan bhi shuru ho gaee" hehhehehehe i knew u would say that, i juts knew it. 😊

array yar, na karo bhaee, uff dil kitna khush hota to see armaan and jassi, than that purab .... uff, i tell you, i cant tolerate him!!!

I know Kash today to he was like a poonch always behind Jassi !!! why can't he go lok after his 400 crore company yaar kyn ussike peeche pada hai !!!😔

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: india05

I know Kash today to he was like a poonch always behind Jassi !!! why can't he go lok after his 400 crore company yaar kyn ussike peeche pada hai !!!😔



uff shanti, seriously. how sefish is that ... just because jassi is getting beautiful now he wants her back in his life. no matter how mahan he tries to become, he shall remain a shallow coward. 😔

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