BACK WITH BKB-Who’s the Bakri??? - Page 5

Some of our members had this demand for my poem.
I had written something a few years back for a 'hasya kavi sammelan'
So aapki khidmat men pesh hai........

Aatma ek manushyaki le chale yamraj,
baithe jahan chitragupt the,lekar apne saaj.
dekhkar mrutatma, chitraguptji pahle to zunzlaye,
fir alsaaye, chayki chuski lekar chaprasi par chillaye.
baithe rahte ho din bhar,kuchh kaam nahin ho karte,
roz nayee mange late ho, strike se nahin darte.
munh kya takte ho mera tum,ledger iska lao,
pap-punyaka hisab hai karna,jaldise tum jao.
chaprasi ledger le aya,chitraguptne chashma lagaya.
mrutatmaka khata jo dekha,unko kuchh samajh na aya.

jhankke apni aenakse dekha,uparse neeche tak dekha,
mastak par ubhri ek rekha,pap-punyaka kiya jo lekha.
kahne lage kya kahun main iski,baat nahin koi kahne jaisi,
pap-punya kuchh nahin khatemen, balance NIL hai bahikhatemen!
baat suni jab gahri sochmen dub gaye yamraj,
kahne lage kya yah sambhav hai jeevanmen maharaj?
kya yah koi sant hai,peer, fakeer ya gyani??
nahin-kaha chitrguptne,yah hai Hindustani.
pap-punya ki fikra ye karta,jo hota forty nine men,
jeevan to sara kat gaya iska, rashanki line men.
alu-pyazke chakkarmen ye fira hai mara mara,
non-tel ki fikra men ye jeevan se hai hara.
tum hi kaho,kahan bhejen isko,swarg ya ki nark?
samajh nahin paya ye abtak in dononmen fark!
swarg-nark ki baaten chodo,kahne lage yamraj,
ye layak usi deshke,jahan bhrashtachar ka raj,
sitam sahna aur kuchh bhi na kahna,bani jahan ki pahchan,
Bharatwali queue men laga do isko bhi bhagwan!

Originally posted by: veekay

Thanks Neelam. Hanji main great hi hun!😉 & thanks for not tanggofying me!😆

Better character & actor......🤔........yaar ek hi kyon?? sab hi achhe the! If I name one,that would be injustice to others! But I love Apu or should I say Armaan?😊

As to your second question, the story that has touched my heart after JJKN is ACHP. I just love it. The characters,actors & chemistry-all are too good!😃

Thanks for answering my question. BTW what is ACHP??????? Sorry ,e no short English-------------- Punjabi only-------hehehehe. I might not have same channels as you or I didn't get your Abbreviation.😆

Originally posted by: veekay

CB, you too??? Yes I was going to ask you ,what are you doing here.😆 So you do visit the forum kabhi-kabhi! chalo, hum gharibon par bhi aapki inayat hai!😉

so you want to know-india-forums or aunties club? Let me think......🤔......

But then I am a kind of person,who wants the cake in her hand & eat it too!😉 I can do with both kind of aunties!😆

Yes I agree CB sirf BKB ke post me aatee hai....

Oh dear, I had no idea, until I read Meena's mail. Congo-shongo honey. jitna enjoy karna hai karlo because I'll be back soon and then you will be squirming!!! 😈

awwww vimmi di is the bakri, is she??? umm i see a lot of people have already grilled her..

ill just stick to one question.. if there was one role in a serial (Not JJKN) that you would like to play, what would it be?

😛 and best of luck being grilled with all the mirch masala..

Originally posted by: lashforever

awwww vimmi di is the bakri, is she??? umm i see a lot of people have already grilled her..

ill just stick to one question.. if there was one role in a serial (Not JJKN) that you would like to play, what would it be?

😛 and best of luck being grilled with all the mirch masala..

I'll answer it - KAAJAL!!! 😆

Originally posted by: hansa

I'll answer it - KAAJAL!!! 😆

good one Hansa... this way Vimmi di wil lbe with her Apu 😉

Vimmi di , very nice kavita...great ... u r very talented. keep it up and keep posting ur kavitas.

Originally posted by: veekay

Some of our members had this demand for my poem.
I had written something a few years back for a 'hasya kavi sammelan'
So aapki khidmat men pesh hai........

Aatma ek manushyaki le chale yamraj,
baithe jahan chitragupt the,lekar apne saaj.
dekhkar mrutatma, chitraguptji pahle to zunzlaye,
fir alsaaye, chayki chuski lekar chaprasi par chillaye.
baithe rahte ho din bhar,kuchh kaam nahin ho karte,
roz nayee mange late ho, strike se nahin darte.
munh kya takte ho mera tum,ledger iska lao,
pap-punyaka hisab hai karna,jaldise tum jao.
chaprasi ledger le aya,chitraguptne chashma lagaya.
mrutatmaka khata jo dekha,unko kuchh samajh na aya.

jhankke apni aenakse dekha,uparse neeche tak dekha,
mastak par ubhri ek rekha,pap-punyaka kiya jo lekha.
kahne lage kya kahun main iski,baat nahin koi kahne jaisi,
pap-punya kuchh nahin khatemen, balance NIL hai bahikhatemen!
baat suni jab gahri sochmen dub gaye yamraj,
kahne lage kya yah sambhav hai jeevanmen maharaj?
kya yah koi sant hai,peer, fakeer ya gyani??
nahin-kaha chitrguptne,yah hai Hindustani.
pap-punya ki fikra ye karta,jo hota forty nine men,
jeevan to sara kat gaya iska, rashanki line men.
alu-pyazke chakkarmen ye fira hai mara mara,
non-tel ki fikra men ye jeevan se hai hara.
tum hi kaho,kahan bhejen isko,swarg ya ki nark?
samajh nahin paya ye abtak in dononmen fark!
swarg-nark ki baaten chodo,kahne lage yamraj,
ye layak usi deshke,jahan bhrashtachar ka raj,
sitam sahna aur kuchh bhi na kahna,bani jahan ki pahchan,
Bharatwali queue men laga do isko bhi bhagwan!

I am at loss for words vimzz!👏 Absolutely wonderful. The poem is excellent vimzz.👏

Originally posted by: veekay

Some of our members had this demand for my poem.
I had written something a few years back for a 'hasya kavi sammelan'
So aapki khidmat men pesh hai........

Aatma ek manushyaki le chale yamraj,
baithe jahan chitragupt the,lekar apne saaj.
dekhkar mrutatma, chitraguptji pahle to zunzlaye,
fir alsaaye, chayki chuski lekar chaprasi par chillaye.
baithe rahte ho din bhar,kuchh kaam nahin ho karte,
roz nayee mange late ho, strike se nahin darte.
munh kya takte ho mera tum,ledger iska lao,
pap-punyaka hisab hai karna,jaldise tum jao.
chaprasi ledger le aya,chitraguptne chashma lagaya.
mrutatmaka khata jo dekha,unko kuchh samajh na aya.

jhankke apni aenakse dekha,uparse neeche tak dekha,
mastak par ubhri ek rekha,pap-punyaka kiya jo lekha.
kahne lage kya kahun main iski,baat nahin koi kahne jaisi,
pap-punya kuchh nahin khatemen, balance NIL hai bahikhatemen!
baat suni jab gahri sochmen dub gaye yamraj,
kahne lage kya yah sambhav hai jeevanmen maharaj?
kya yah koi sant hai,peer, fakeer ya gyani??
nahin-kaha chitrguptne,yah hai Hindustani.
pap-punya ki fikra ye karta,jo hota forty nine men,
jeevan to sara kat gaya iska, rashanki line men.
alu-pyazke chakkarmen ye fira hai mara mara,
non-tel ki fikra men ye jeevan se hai hara.
tum hi kaho,kahan bhejen isko,swarg ya ki nark?
samajh nahin paya ye abtak in dononmen fark!
swarg-nark ki baaten chodo,kahne lage yamraj,
ye layak usi deshke,jahan bhrashtachar ka raj,
sitam sahna aur kuchh bhi na kahna,bani jahan ki pahchan,
Bharatwali queue men laga do isko bhi bhagwan!

😲

didi, i felt this poem right through my heart.
its really beautiful of a poem...😳