UPDATE 21DECEMBER: Jassi' s reaction

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Armaan walks on tiptoe to the chair where Jassi is sitting and soundlessly puts down his precious plate on the bed next to the chair. Then he claps his hands over Jassi's eyes.

Jassi: (giggling and feeling his hands) Armaan! Kya kar rahe ho!

Armu: Jassi, main haath hatha raha hn par tum promise karo, tum apni aankhein ban rakhogi, aur tab tak nahin khologi jab tak main na kahun!

Jassi: (teasingly) Kyun Armaan? Kya karna chahte ho?

He grins and removes his hands, peeking in front to make sure Jassi HAS her eyes closed. Then he swivels her chair around to face him. She gulps a little in expectation (wonder what she thought was coming!😉) but he picks up one of the laddoos and tells her to open her mouth wide. She obediently does his bidding.

He places the laddoo in her mouth. "Ab batao…yeh kya hai….?"

Jassi slowly bits on what he has given her. A peculiar expression crosses her face. "Atte ke laddoo?"

Armu: (gleefully) Wrong! Armaan Suri ke haath ke banaye hue atte ke laddoo!!

Jassi's eyes fly open. She gazes at Armu, still with tat odd expression on her face. "Yeh laddoo…tumne banaye hai Armaan?"

Armu bows, takes her hand and kisses it. "Sirf apni Jassi ke liye!"

Jassi slowly and deliberately munches on the laddoo, tears flowing down her face. Armu gazes adoringly at her. When she finishes, she gasps out, "Thank you Armaan!! Laddoo bahut…bahut achche bane hai..!"

Armu: (springing up) Toh phir ek aur lo….(he picks up one and stuffs in into her mouth, ignoring her feeble protests) …pata hai Jassi, mujhe tumhari kitni chinta ho rahi hai…tum theek se kha bhi nahin rahi ho…aur expectant mothers ko toh do logon ke liye khaana chahiye….

While he is prattling on, Jassi's face contorts and he looks at her in concern. "Jassi, tum theek toh ho na?"

She tries to smile, but ends up gulping instead; she pushes past him to the bathroom, where he can hear her throwing up.

He looks suspiciously at the laddoos. Tentatively, he picks up one and tastes it. "Yeh toh bilkul theek hai…phir Jassi ko kya hua?"

Bua sneaks into the room and tells the disconsolate Armaan what Amrit has told her. Armu looks at her in dismay. "Matlab….in ladduon se Jassi ki tabiyat aur kharaab ho gayi?"

Bua nods grimly and shrugs. She hears Jassi's footsteps and rushes away.

When Jassi arrives, there is a guilty expression on her face. Armu stares reproachfully at her.

Jassi: Oh Armaan…I'm sorry! Tumhare laddoo sachmuch bahut tasty hai…..

Armu: Jassi, tumhe mujhe batana chahiye tha….dekho na, inhe khaake tum aur sick ho gayi….damn!

Jassi: Nahin Armaan….

Armu: (sighing and taking her hands) Main bhi kitna bada idiot hun…maine tumhare liye wahi cheez banayi jo tumhe pasand nahin hai….lekin tumne wo laddoo khaaya kaise Jassi?

Jassi presses his hands. "Tumhari banayi hui koi bhi cheez, mere liye buri kaise ho sakti hai Armaan….tumne itna pyaar se laddoo banaye, toh main khaaye bina kaise reh sakti thi…I'm so touched Armaan1"

Both are getting just a wee bit teary-eyed. Armu bends down and kisses her forehead, and then he raises her hands to his mouth and kisses them. They stare at each other on common rapture. 😳😳😳

Monday: Hospital visit

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akalra thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Lovely! Thanks Blyton! You're an excellent writer... 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sooo cuteee 😳 😳 😳
blushing noww 😃 😃 😃
thanks! 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cute update 😳 thanks blyti di 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks blyton ,awesome update as usual

haiiiiii how cute and romatic of both of them to do things for each other . I can see MandA enacting this scene with total masti and spontaneity
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I can see them act out too. I really hope they think of making a sequel using ur updates.
Excellent Anjali.( blyton)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Haiiiiiiiiiiii both of them lowe each other so much 😳
Thanks so mcuh for the lovely update Blyti 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome blyti
i thought that in ur updates jassi is getting over-emotional.i was damn sure that she'll cry at some moment and when the llne denoting that arrived i was sure of my doubt-that jassi is getting different from the real show,becoming too senti.but then next was a good sight when u proved me wrong by the real reason of crying.
thanx for including something like cj in the updates,.
and this one was awesome.the janda romance was limited.it wasn't excessive which although we're in love with but moves the show apart from its real path.
thanx for this outstanding update.

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