Sneak Preview! MandA Fanfiction! o_O

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Well, as many of you already know, there's a new fanfiction brewing in the
underground world of IF (also known as msn messenger)! So what's it all
about? Basically, it's our (and I speak for many of our dear IF-ians) dream
vision of the MandA mystery. DREAM vision, not reality. Please keep that
in mind when you read this. It is not based on factual information, nor is
it implying any sort of love-relationship between MandA. It's ONLY for our
entertainment! So read on!This particular scene is taken from one of the
most recent chapters of the fanfic. It shouldn't be too difficult to follow!


During the short break between shots, Apu and Mona secretly met up in
one of the small hallways.

"Hi," she said shyly.

Apu took a step toward her when a voice reached them. "Tony, have you
seen Apu?"

"Shit!" he whispered. Looking around, he spotted a small closet, and
gently tugged Mona into it, closing the door behind them.

Mona held her breath as she heard footsteps clatter in the corridor they
were in just a few seconds ago. She was about to move when she realized
that Apu had put his hands on the wall, one on either side of her, so that
she was trapped. She glanced at him and their gazes locked. He leaned in
close, and solfty began to sing..

"Hum tum, ek closet mein bandh ho.."

"Apu!" Mona whispered half-heartedly tring to push him away. "Shh!"
Though her fear of his wife, Shilpa, discovering them was great, she could
not help but grin up at him.

He leaned ever closer so that their breath mingled. He reached for her
hair.

"..Aur baal khuljaye"

Her hair, which was once in a simple ponytail, was now free on her
shoulders.

"Apurva!" Mona whispered. She tried to grab the hair-tie he had stolen.
"Give it back!"

He kept it just out of reach, laughing as she kept trying to get it. Finally,
she turned away, defeated and out of breath. He turned her toward him
and held it out to her. Mona stared at it for a few seconds, before
reaching out for it. He let her take her hair-tie before grabbing her hand
and pulling her toward him. He put his arms around her, and she leaned
in his embrace.

"Apu?" Mona whispered at last.

"Mm?"

"Time kya hain?"

"Mm..."

Smiling, she carefully pulled away and looked at the ever-present watch
on his wrist. Her eyes widened.

"I'm late!"

She tried to move, but he caught her. He took her hair-tie again, amidst
protests, and gently turned her so that her back was to him. Mona
quieted and let him run his hands through her hair, let him gather it all
up and tie it, handling it as though it were fragile and delicate. The
ponytail came out too loose, but Mona didn't care. She looked at him and
again their gazes cast a spell, drawing them closer. He didn't let his eyes
leave hers as he took her hand and kissed it.

"Go," he whispered.

Realizing just how close they were, Mona blushed and quickly ran out of
the closet, leaving her co-star smiling in the dark.


Hope you enjoyed! Keep an eye out for the "official realease." I can't make
any promises as to the exact date, but things aren't looking to great with
all the exams coming up! So please, bear with us. We're trying our hardest
to get this done!

Much Lowe,
Piggie and Twiggie

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fading_smiles thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ahhhh omggg 😳 i love it! keep up the great work! aww! 😳 😳 😳 looking forward to more! 👏
priyaaa thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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note: all creative credit goes to tiki 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was awesomeeeeeeeeeee 😳


CONTINUEEEE SOONNN YAAARRRR
😃

i didnt know my angels were so talented 😆
Edited by sweetsorrow18 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG...LOL!....I can't stop saying that but it's just STUPENDOUS ladies!!!...hehehe..Piggie and Twiggie...too cute!! Romance ho tho aise!!! 😳 Awesome job sweeties!!! 😃 I just wanna keep reading it over and OVER again! lol!! Too Good!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO....
LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

THE creative team of jjkn does visit IF.....if they rread this 😆 ..and what if shrieky reads this 😆 .....she will break into the jjkn sets, grab chunu and fleeeeee 😕 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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piggie...you are only 15....twiggie...you are only 14*15*16.....is umar mein itni besharmi 😈
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Buffie

LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO....
LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

THE creative team of jjkn does visit IF.....if they rread this 😆 ..and what if shrieky reads this 😆 .....she will break into the jjkn sets, grab chonu and fleeeeee 😕 😆

😲Ai hai buffie! Shub shub bolo yaar! Then she'll really need to read the chipkofying article that you had posted!😆😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
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woohoooooooooo wow
u gals r only 14 and 15 and wow
i m impressed

i wish our romance queen also reads this
she wud love it
bring more dears

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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 👏

that is really creative....!

as if you can see it happen i front of you. very clear representation...

you guys have a great future in this.... and who knows may direct mona and apoorva through this in not so long future😆

continue the good job guys... looking forward to the completed story


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