Another one from Armaan for Jassi

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Posted: 20 years ago
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You often say

You have an ugly face,

But its the single source

That makes my heart race...

From dawn to dawn,

From dusk to dusk,

I need to draw in,

From your eyes,from your soul...

My anchor, my Sun

Without you,

I 'll have everything,

But still nothing, still none...

Yesterday I rushed ahead,

Today I grope behind,

But tomorrow I know

We'll walk the road to Eternity...

Hand in Hand...

You and Me...

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: alien_visitor

You often say

You have an ugly face,

But its the single source

That makes my heart race...

From dawn to dawn,

From dusk to dusk,

I need to draw in,

From your eyes,from your soul...

My anchor, my Sun

Without you,

I 'll have everything,

But still nothing, still none...

Yesterday I rushed ahead,

Today I grope behind,

But tomorrow I know

We'll walk the road to Eternity...

Hand in Hand...

You and Me...



Alien... thats a very, very sweet poem... it has inspired me to write a take-off on it .... a sadistic poem on how Armaan must be feeling for Jassi at this very second😉 ... i know u won't mind cos u're such a sweetie...


Inside your head
lies the empty space
that was the reason
for my fall from grace....!!

Ashes to ashes,
dust to dust
My life was a cake
Now it's a burnt rotten crust🤢

You ruined all the games
You spoiled all the fun
Here I stand in the
firing line of the gun☢️

Yesterday I rushed ahead
Today I grope behind
Crawling with the Kohinoor papers
I wish I hadn't signed😭😭😭

Here, take my hand...
SLAP!!!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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u people are too good👏👏👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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queenbee that was great. Specially the SLAP 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey That is super...But Queenie I dont think Armaan will ever feel like that for his Jass...You should hv posted it separately, as there would hv been more visitors...

Anyway, Armaan se aap sab ka pyaar banaye rakhne keliye, mera ek chota sa khosish tha...

I loved ur poem too...

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: alien_visitor

Hey That is super...But Queenie I dont think Armaan will ever feel like that for his Jass...You should hv posted it separately, as there would hv been more visitors...

Anyway, Armaan se aap sab ka pyaar banaye rakhne keliye, mera ek chota sa khosish tha...

I loved ur poem too...



I know he won't... it's a sacrilege to think he will😉 ... Armaan will always, ALWAYYYYYYYS love Jassi... ❤️🤗.. thats why i posted it under ur sweet poem, so that no one murders me😛😛😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
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alien! u know u r wonderful poet! i loved ur poem very much!👏 👏👏and bee, that was so funny!!!!😆!!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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very nice poem alien_visitor!! and queenbee urs is too good!!😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
#9
Amazzzzzzing Queenbeeeee😆

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