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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guyz i just got a plot for my own story....i m gonna write in my diary...and then post it tmr...i can assure u that there are bIg surprises for those who wanna read....will i get support....will u guyz read it if i post my story...this is my 1st aTTEMPT!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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thx devil..i din knoe u returned...wannabe frenz...so sorry din accept ur offer previously... pls forgive me!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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TITLE:PYAAR KA MATLAB
Background music:Dil Samunder(from garam masala)
Agirl tells her mum Mrs Hayathi Begum that she's going for a morning walk
Ma: Tikh hain..jaldi aana...

MORNING WALK AT ORBIT GARDEN
She takes out her diary and writes her thoughts...

23 November 2004
FLASHBACK>>SHE RECALLS

CONVERSATION BTW JASSIE AND SHARMILA
Sharmila: aren't u sick and tired of watching the series Jassi Jaissi Koi Nahin..SO DAM STUPID!!
Jassie: Hey sharmi, STOP IT!! How could u say that that in front of ME!!!
U knoe just how much i lurve Jassi aka Mona Singh..she pretty just like me....Kaash muje aisi dost mile hote..
Lakin mujhe aisi duffer jo mile dost ki tarah....

Sharmila: Arre bolti jaa rahehoo tum...
PILLOW FIGHTING FOR A WHILE>>>>

BAS KARO
Jassie and Sharmila turned back
Jassie: Haya tum bhi na
Haya:Tumhare results hain na aaj...Sharmila go with her to get her results..
Sharmila: Oh yeah..your degree results for Biomedical Sciences?She should have definitely failed, Aunty kyon ki yeh to pyaar ki chakkar mein hain na..
Haya: Pyaar? OOII??KISSE???
Jassie: Sharmi, chup karo!! Meri jan,meri pyaare dost, chup!chup!!
Sharmila: Apne Mona SIngh aur kisse....Aunty dun be afraid..She doesn't even talk to boys..how can she??
Jassie: Sharmi it is just that i haf no interest in boys...un ladkiyon ki tarah nahin hoon main...such BOYMANIACZ!!!

COLLEGE
Sharmi: yeh campus to bohat achi hain yaar...bohat badiya hain...
Jassie: god tum bhi na...kab kya bolna chahiye bata nahin...god mein tension me hoon aur tum skool campus ki khoobsoorthi ki bare mein baat karti hon...
Woh dekho note board....yeh code BBSEF01 0503A mere degree classes ke hi hain...mere results toh gayi...oh god....pls help me!!
Sharmila: Arre chalna!!!
Jassie: Sir...mere results...
Abu: Jassie...here's ur results...i didn't expect this from u....u haf indeed disappointed me a lot!!!
Sharmila: Enough sir..She did her verie best...Bas bhi karo......mujhe hi malum hain woh kitnakaam kar rahi thi usske degree ke liye!!!Bohat dhanyawaad aap ki comments ke liye....
Jassie: bas yaar...tum yeh results le kar ghar jao...maa ko dikado...
Sharmila:Lakin tumne to dekha hi nahin...
Jassie: Phir kabhi dekhlenge...I want to spend some time with myself...Please...
Sharmila:Tikh hain...Orbit garden hain na..
Jassie:yea...tum jao...
Sharmila:before making any decision,think of the consequences please okay?
Jassie: Dun worry yaar....i will be okay...

AT HOME
Sharmila:Jassie Orbit Garden pe hi hain
Haya:Kyun?
Sharmila: Sab bata thi hoon...
Haya: Kahin woh kuch kar diya to...
Sharmila: Mein jassie ko janti hoon...
Haya: Phir bhi...
Sharmila: Tikh hain aunty...main chali jassie ke paas

ORBIT GARDEN
Jassie!!!!
Sharmila: Kya kar rahi hon??
Jassie:CHODD DO MUJHE!!!!

End of episode 1...
episode 2 up tmr.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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pls post ur comments regarding e 1st episode...so thhat i can continue!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was very nice jassie.. please continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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good job uptil now, waiting for the next part.... (i bet u passed with flying colours) 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow! Continue jassie.

And..err...you have a habit of writing in your diary? 😕

Hope the similarity ends there, apart from your id of course? 😕

lashy, i lowwwwe ur avtaar!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great effort. Keep it up 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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tmr's preview:confrontation wif abu,jassie and sharmila..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Jassie:chodd do mujhe
Sharmila:yeh kya kar rahe ho??
Jassie:i m throwing my diary away...i have dreamt a lot of dreams...sadly to be left incomplete...
Sharmila:bewakoof mat bano...tumhare results dekho na...
Jassie:mein nahin dekhoongi
Sharmila SLAPS Jassie
Jassie:(opens her eyes wide)...OMG.....i can't believe it....mujhe itna zyada marks.....
Sharmila:jee karta hain ki uss abu ki bacchhche ko main jaanse marduu...
Jassie:chod na...

AT HOME
Haya:meri jassie...
Jassie:haan haya...main teekh hoon...
Haya:agar sharmila nahin hote na jaane meri beti ka kya haal hoga...
Sharmila:tum dono ki ek thappad ki zaroorat hain...giggles....
Sharmila gives a tight jappi to both haya and jassie....


AT NIGHT
phone rings...
Aby:HI jassie
Jassie: aby...kaise hon...main tumhe bohat misss kar rahi hoon yaar..kaise he aaj kal...
Aby:u got e application form?
Jassie:wad application?
Aby:internship programmes overseas
Jassie: nahin toh...what is it all abt?
Aby: it is all about whether u want to work overseas or study further..
Jassie: can i talk to u later...my mum needs ther phone....
Aby:any probs,yaar?
Jassie:yaar sorrie...i m not feeling that gd...
Aby: okie i shall talk to u later

Conversation ended

THE NEXT DAY
Jassie and Sharmila talk to Abu
Jassie:Sir, what is all this...I haven't gotten any admission form..
Abu: Jass,i thought u will not like to go overseas
Jassie:is that ur decision or MY DECISION that is impt?
Abu: BUT
Jassie: Sir, you have played enough games with my life...
Abu: What are you talking abt?
Sharmila:you haven't understood what she has been saying??
Abu: Listen if both of u are talking abt the admission form, i totally forgot!!
Jassie: I am not going to leave you alone...I am going to complain to the Dean...
Sharmila: Sir, nothing is going to stop Jassie in her decision..If you have committed a crime, you gotta pay THE PRICE!!!

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