ViTharv OS- I lost my baby too!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey I am back with another OS on ViTharv!

This is a scene that I wish to see, which I doubt we will ever get to see. 😳This is a sad OS, so please be ready with a box of tissues. This scene I would love to watch for the performances, their love, their understanding and their togetherness! ❤️Don't throw rotten eggs on me for this sad OS!😆

Hope you will enjoy it!😳

ViTharv OS- I lost my Baby too!



Vividha was sitting as if she had lost her sole reason for her existence. She has lost her baby a day ago and she was discharged today. How much has changed in the last two days. Two days ago; we both were happy in our own little small world; comprising of Vividha; me and our baby! It was a day that left me shattered; the news shook me to no end. I had lost everything and was on the verge of losing Vividha too. I had to act fast; but how was biggest question? I didn't want to act different and be an insensitive jerk. I could understand the pain she was going through; but couldn't she understand the pain I was going through seeing her in this vulnerable state?

"Atharv'" her voice brought me out of my revere and I stood there looking at her. She was holding a tray with food and two plates on it.

Vividha: "Atharv chalo...tum haath fresh ho aao aur khaana khana aa jao. Maine tumhaari saari man pasand cheezien banayi hai."

He smiled at her and entered the shower cubicle. She removed his black undershirt and his signature track pants. She left them on the bed and arranged the food on the table.

She called out to him again, "Atharv'"

He came out of the shower; wearing his jeans and his towel thrown carelessly around his neck; he looked at her and she signaled him to change in his night clothes. He obliged and went next to her. He pulled her in a comfort hug and went next to the table. He saw that she had arranged the table. Both had food in silence and their eyes doing the talking. Both understood the pain each one of went through. Both finished their dinner and Vividha cleaned up the plates. Vividha slept in Atharv's arms!

It was past midnight at around 2; when Atharv woke up and went outside on the Terrace after checking that Vividha was sleeping. He pulled up the comforter and kissed her forehead gently promising that everything is going to be fine!

Atharv's POV! ~

"Nahi dekh sakta tumhe takleef main Vividha. Nahi hain tumhare Atharv main inti himmat ki wo tumhare aankhon main aansoon dekh sakoon. Main jaanta hoon ki tumhe bahut dukh hua hai; par is ka matlab yeh nahi ki tum jeena chod dogi."

"Main tumhe ehsaas dilaoonga ki sirf tumne aapna baccha nahi khoya hai... maine bhi khoya hai. Jaanta hoon ki tumne apni jeene ki wajah kho di hai."

"Par tumhe jeena hoga Vividha...mere liye. Aapne Atharv ke liye...kyunki tumhe aise tadapte huye dekh kar main roz mar raha hoon. Tumhara Atharv sirf duniya ke saamne bahut majboot hai...kisi cheeze nahi darta...lekin tumhe khone se darta hoon. Apne bacche ko to kho chooka hoon main...main tumhe nahi kho sakta."

He cried remembering her words, their dreams of the new addition to the family, the happiness of both families. The loss was too much to handle. He was a defeated man today. He had lost their only child; their strongest bond and was on the verge of losing Vividha. He shuddered as the thought occurred to him once again - he was losing Vividha too. He was losing his most precious possession. Life was slipping out his hands like sand.

He had to act fast; and he knew something,

"Vividha tumne hamara baccha khoya hai...jeene ki ummed nai. Main tumhe yakeen dilaoonga ki sab kuch nahi khatam hua. Hum hamari duniya phirse banayenge. Aur jab tak hum saath hai; hum har mushkil saamna karenge."

Vividha's POV! ~

She was on the bed and knew exactly where Atharv was! She knew he too is going through immense pain. She knew how much was he attached to their baby. He had built a small world around us, comprising of Atharv; Vividha and the baby! He was more excited about the baby making an entry into their lives. He was her life; her world; her universe. She had to be strong for him. She had to suppress her sorrow; her tears for him. She knew he can fight the whole world but he can't fight with me. He can fight the whole world for me but can't fight our Love! He is weak, emotionally and I know that. I have to stand up for him. He needs me now the most!

She gets up from her bed and is walking in the room.

"Main tumhe toote huye nahi dekh sakti. Nahi dekh sakti tumhe akele haalaton se ladhte huye. Nahi bardasht kar sakti ki tum roz tadapo. Jaanti hoon ki mujhe jarasi kharoch bhi aaye to tumhe dard hota hai; isliye maine faisla kiya hai ki main jo ho chukka use bhooloongi."

"Sirf tumhaare liye Atharv main aapne aansoon aur apna dard chupaoongi. Main aapne dard ko daboongi aur tumhara sahara banoongi, kyunki main jaanti hoon ki tumne bhi apni zindagi ka sabse anmol hissa khoya hai."'

"Main ladhoongi Atharv, tumhaare liye haalaton se; sabse ladhoongi; sirf tumhaare liye. Main tuhaari taakad banoongi is ghadi main. Main jaanti hoon ki maine apna hissa khoya hai; par main tumhe nahi khona chahti. "

"I love you Atharv!"

And saying this she walks back to the Bed in anticipation that tomorrow will be a New Beginning for them; A New Day and A New Hope!

The End!

I hope I have lived upto the expectations of ViTharv fans!😳



Positive criticism welcome!


Love,

Mayu

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Shweta13 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome mayu 👍🏼 this is what strength Vitharv have,to live for each other and love each other..

If at all the story moves forward I would love to see preggi Vivi but I certainly dont want to lose their child, that will be way beyond my tolerance too ... Vitharv had enough pain, now no more pain for them.

But you have written so well and have portrayed their bond 👏
Edited by Shweta13 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love this OS as usual this is exactly what we want to see love empowerment how love empowered them to deal with all circumstances and all obstacles.But u kill their baby😭 I want to see that OS in which how Atharv handle his Vivi when she is pregnent she wakeup him and demand things at 2am like some pickle but tumnay mery armanon py pani pher diya really this OS is really very emotional for me.For me u r next mamta mata for me.But its ok i hope i will get to see those moments in your next upcoming OS.Lovely and emotional OS keep it up 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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most emotional mayu

nicely written

atharv and vividha r each other's support system and they can face any situation when they r together

but i certainly couldnt see atharv and vivi loosoing their baby, i cannot imagine it, give them any difficult situation or troubles in their life but not this

this is most emotional and i certainly look forward to ur lighthearted or intense romance between them which r my favourite

thks for the OS
Edited by prabharajani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mayu🤗 Lovely OS, loved it so muchh..you write so well!

I love how you always highlight ViTharv's bond and relationship in every OS, whatever the situation might be. They mean the world to each other, they are each others' most prized possessions. Losing each other would mean losing a big part of their own self. That's the depth of the love they have for each other.

Losing a child must be so painful...they both must be hurting so much. Yet they stand strong for each other because they know the pain is not all just one person's. It's shared, both happiness and sadness. It's incredible how much they think of each other even in this situation. They've lost the symbol of their love, they can't afford to lose their love itself.

But all this apart, I want happiness for these two. They have faced enough sadness and problems in life..they deserve to be happy now. So I wish this ever happens to them on the show- if they reach this stage in it that is.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mayu 🤗

Sorry for replying this late. kinda got to know what the plot is and it made me so sad.So I wished to comment after a good episode got aired.And lost hope if we would get anytime soon. Who gave you this idea?I am so emotionally attached to ViTharv that I didn't want to read a sad os 😭 They have lost so much and all I want them to have a happy life. They deserve the happiness.Coming to the os,You know I will always love your work.And true love is all about standing up together in ups and downs of life.Atharv and Vividha being each other's strength, Isn't that one of the vachans... You brought it perfectly in this os.Atharv and Vividha are serious relationship goals,Mayu.I didn't get one part though.Why was Vividha doing all the work.Cooking, Washing plates...For we know she needs rest and Atharv wouldn't let her do that in her situation.I asking this because you told its been only a day.I appreciate the fact you wrote an os for us amidst all your commitments.Thank you for writing this.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Constructive criticism... I need english dialogues..😭

I literally understand half of the story...then imagine the other half ...
Someone take pity on my poor soul...😔
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mayu thank you for wonderful is just that we already witnessing too much stress n heartaches in the show and reading a os which is emotional leave me emotionally wrecked !!

Lovely is indeed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shweta13

Awesome mayu 👍🏼 this is what strength Vitharv have,to live for each other and love each other..

If at all the story moves forward I would love to see preggi Vivi but I certainly dont want to lose their child, that will be way beyond my tolerance too ... Vitharv had enough pain, now no more pain for them.

But you have written so well and have portrayed their bond 👏



Shweta🤗

Thankyou so much😳

Yes, that's the beauty of these two people in love, they will support each other irrespective of the fact that they are hurt themselves.❤️

Sorry to upset you, but incase this happens, we know they will get over after this gloomy phase.

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: saharsonu

Love this OS as usual this is exactly what we want to see love empowerment how love empowered them to deal with all circumstances and all obstacles.But u kill their baby😭 I want to see that OS in which how Atharv handle his Vivi when she is pregnent she wakeup him and demand things at 2am like some pickle but tumnay mery armanon py pani pher diya really this OS is really very emotional for me.For me u r next mamta mata for me.But its ok i hope i will get to see those moments in your next upcoming OS.Lovely and emotional OS keep it up 👏


Sonu🤗

Thankyou so much😳

I know. But I wanted to portray their pain and their loss, and how they together face this situation. It shows their love and their commitment to each other and their relation. 😳

Next OS will be also emotional")

Love,
Mayu

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