SidNi OS - Dheere Dheere

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hie guys... 🤗 Back with another OS. Since its abi birthday, dedicating it to her... 😳
Happy Birthday abi... 🤗 Do read and share your views... 😳

It was raining heavily. He was going for a meeting when his car halted at a signal. He was looking around when a girl caught his eyes. She was on the mud ground and was laughing. She looked pretty cute. He got confused as why she was laughing , when a group of kids came running towards her and gave her hand to stand up. She managed to stand up when one kid asked her to bend and tied her eyes with cloth. It was then he got it. She fell down while playing hide and seek with the kids. She started playing again. He smiled. The signal turned green and the car started.


More than two weeks passed by but he didn't forget her. He went that side often to see her but she was not found.


"Har pal meri aaye yadaan

Yadaan vich ae tun
Dil di gal main dassa

Te dassa fir kinnu"


He was walking into his office when his fell on her. He enquired the receptionist as why she is here and came to know she is here to meet him. He asked his receptionist to send her first.


After few minutes, she entered his room. She looked lavishing. She was looking so beautiful in her black and red anarkali. He kept staring at her when she was talking about her NGO. He noticed how her hairs her moving disturbing her and how she kept moving it back. He was enjoying her bangle sounds when she was waving her hands in air while talking.


"Teri meri, meri teri ik jind'di
Ik jind'di what do to
Jhoomun main nachun main gaaun
Ke likhun tere liye main kya karun"


"You should come and visit us someday" she said handing over the visiting card of her NGO and left. She turned one last time before leaving and smiled at him. The next day he went there to see the NGO. She was telling stories to kid by acting. He kept watching her not knowing how long when someone patted on his shoulder. He was surprised to find her near him. She was all smiling again and he could not help but admire her.


"Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana
Dheere dheere se dil ko churana (churana..)
Tumse pyaar hume hai kitna jaane jaana
Tumse mil kar tumko hai batana"


She introduced all the kids to him. He spend a beautiful evening with the kids and her playing, roaming and telling stories to them. He left all happily. Sleep was at distance that night. He recalled the incidents that night and never know when he slept. A week passed by. He was living the happy days of his life.


"Sham wahi, kaam wahi
Tere bina o sanam
Neend nahi, chain nahi
Tere bina o sanam"


One day he got ready to see her. He wanted to say her what she meant to him. He went to see her but she was not there. She has went to her hometown for some work and will be back after a week. He was disappointed.


"Teri meri story jaise
Big Bang Theory
Main sunaun chori-chori ye sab ko
Tu mujhse door main yahan pe majboor
Shikva karun main ye Rabb ko (Rabb ko..)..."


A day passed by and he missed her badly. He packed his bags. He reached her home and was standing outside. She passed by and noticed him standing there. She was shocked. Her parents ask her if she knew him and she just nodded.


"Ek din tum bin beete lage saal
Mera hua bura haal
Mera hua bura haal
Haal kabhi apna mujhe to bataao na
Aur laut kar kabhi wapas mere paas aao na"


Her parents invited him inside and told him to attend her engagement. He looked at her. She avoided his eye contact. Tears welled up in his eyes. He went near her and congratulated. She understood his pain but didn't face him and ran into her room.


"Sota hoon kabhi rota hoon
Tere bina o sanam
Paa kar sab kuch khota hoon
Tere bina o sanam"


He said them that he has an important work the next day and returned to his home. He recalled all the sweet moments spend with her and tears rolled down his cheeks. He never met anyone for 2 days. He locked himself in his room.


After 2 days his secretary told him about some problem in NGO. He rushed there to find noone . He searched the rooms but noone was there. He reached his home in the evening and found everything dark. He shouted at his servants to turn on the light but noone responded . He went and switched on the lights to find his home beautifully decorated. He looked around and found her walking down the stairs in red saree. He was shocked.


The NGO kids came with cake . His servants arranged the cake on the table. He looked at everyone. She came near him and showed him a box. He looked at her confused. She asked him to open. He opened to find a ring inside. "Will you marry me?" she asked him smiling.


"Teri meri meri teri ik jind'di
Ik jind'di what do to
Jhoomu main nachun gaaun
Ke likhun main tere liye main kya karun"


He smiled with tears in his eyes.

"Is this yes or no?" she asked winking.

"Yes" he said finally and pulled her into a hug. She hugged him happily.

He made her wear the ring and made her his finally. They cut the cake together with everyone clapping around them.


"Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana
Dheere dheere se dil ko churana (churana..)
Tumse pyaar humein hai kitna jaan-e-jaana
Tumse mil kar tumko hai batana"


I will write Dheere Dheere from Roshini POV for the same story if you guys find this story as nice... 😳😃


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tehreemsajid thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Nice os
Yup do write from Roshnis pov
madhuharini thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Hi Sandy... thank u so much for this beautiful and cute Birthday gift 🤗 I am very very very happy for this gift 😃😳
Coming to OS, it is written fabulously👏👏 Till Roshni's engagement part, it went so calm and nice then all of the sudden, happiness blasted inside Sid's heart through Roshni's suprize... that was really such a cute and romantic surprise wht Roshni given to Sid😳😃❤️ And tht "will u marry me" part is very much romantic and you ended it with a happiest note of SidNi love😳👏⭐️


Plz do write Roshni's POV also dear... thank u so much for PM😃😳
Edited by madhuharini - 10 years ago
rosesidni thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Loved it Sandy, beautiful OS.. Do write from Roshni's POV too😊
Just_Smile thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
That was amazing sanz..loved every bit of it😳 ..from begining to ending👏👏Roshni's surprise proposal everything was good..loved it
Edited by ChandzLoveSidNi - 10 years ago
stephie34 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Awesome and please do write Roshni pov that will be fun to read
prathe thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
superb sandy👏 yes do write ros pov too😳
aparnalokam thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
wow super
yup v want roshni's pov plzzz
A.Green thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
That was awesome os!!😃 The story was so nice ,I'll be waiting for Roshni's POV..😳
abinaya98 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
Awesome sandy...I loved it..d write frm rosh pov❤️

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