SidNi TS : Love In A Metro (Last part pg18) 02/06*

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Rachana

@rachana10

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Amazing start and story with sid pov...😳 Loved sidni intro part and sid dialogues were so cute...😛 Wow he is in love with her in their first meeting...😳 Sidni interactions are lovely.. Continue soon..

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729619

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Very nice! I liked the way you wrote! 😊

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tehreemsajid

@tehreemsajid

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Wow what a nice start loved it

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skinnypal

@skinnypal

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

it was a nice start and good attempt on first person writing..👏

it's kinda difficult to write that..

Sid's thought process was cute and roshni returns to save him from the police. !! 😳

continue soon.. 😃

Edited by skinnypal - 10 years ago

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aparnalokam

@aparnalokam

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Wow amazing update loved it
Sidni r jst adorable
Loved dere introductn
Continue soon

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afghangirl

@afghangirl

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Very good start. I really like Sids point of view.

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Aayushi

@A.Green

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: -kanishka-
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unres
Am I first??
Oh yes, I am.
Loved the first part dear. Siddarth's dialogues were sooo awesome.
And the last line was KILLER.
Update soon.
Will be waiting and yes, PM me.
Thanks.

glad u liked it..

all the best fr exams!!

i'll surely pm u

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Aayushi

@A.Green

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: rachana10
Amazing start and story with sid pov...😳 Loved sidni intro part and sid dialogues were so cute...😛 Wow he is in love with her in their first meeting...😳 Sidni interactions are lovely.. Continue soon..

thanks i m so happy u liked it!!

will try to give next one soon