SidNi TS : Love In A Metro (Last part pg18) 02/06* - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

166

Views

11.2k

Users

23

Likes

207

Frequent Posters

rachana10 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Wow aayushi new story with new concept... Train love... Cs and prologue seems interesting.. Would love to read the rest...😉

P.s: All the best for ur exams...👍🏼
A.Green thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: NIALOVE

super interesting to read

thanks😃
A.Green thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: NiaDiva

quite interesting dear

thnxx😆
A.Green thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#24
thank u😊
A.Green thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Nia_doll

super waiting for chp 1

u will get it soon thanks😊
A.Green thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#26
thanxx😉
A.Green thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: aparnalokam

wow another new storyamazing prologue and cs seems intersting waiting for ur update😳

will give it today😃
A.Green thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: rachana10

Wow aayushi new story with new concept... Train love... Cs and prologue seems interesting.. Would love to read the rest...😉


P.s: All the best for ur exams...👍🏼

thanks will give 1st chap today!!
and thank u😃
A.Green thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#29

This story will be in Siddharth's POV.

Part 1

"You jerk! Can't u see while walking?" she asked irritated.


"I am sorry but.." I started but she stopped me in the middle and in a quite rude tone said ,


"Wow wow first bump into a gorgeous girl like me and then just say sorry and get away? No way mister!"


Roshni Patel , a very very very , ok cut the verys , beautiful girl indeed. She worked in a call-center and hated rich guys.


U know if I would have told her back then that I was rich she would have hated me too.


Oh btw I am Siddharth Khurrana and I am telling u the story of my love Roshni and my first meeting and how it was so eventful.


But but but lets just go a little back in flashback to how a rich guy like me crashed with her.


The Big Bang!!


"Mom I am going." I said packing my bag getting super-late.


"Sid atleast eat something and go." mom said after me and I am sure would have sighed in annoyance when I went without eating a bite.


So I came back in and took a sandwitch in my mouth and kissed her on her cheeks saying "Bye my super sexy mom."


And then mom would have hit her head smiling at my cute antics.


"Sid Baba tyre is punchure!" the driver said as we reached Rajiv Chowk.


"Oh no isn't there some mechanic shop any where chacha?" I asked Chacha politely.


I was not one of the typical rich guys who would have fired their drivers by now.


"Na beta!" chacha said and I cursed myself.


'How was I supposed to go now? In an auto? In such an hot weather?' I questioned myself when I thought to go by metro.


Obviously I wouldn't even have to change the metro as this one went straight to Dwarka.


I mentally fist-palmed myself on getting the superb idea and told chacha to take the car in garage and I'll reach office myself.


"Oh my, shit!" I said as someone pushed me from behind the queue apparently in too much hurry.


'Trying to catch your wife pal' I thought seeing him run in such haste and then thought 'Not your cup of tea dude its difficult to even understand them and u are trying to catch her!'


And thats when the mini volcano started her assault on me.


I was wonder-struck. I had never seen such an amazing girl. It was as if violins started playing as soon as I saw her just like in movies as if she was my soulmate.


She clicked her fingers in front of my eyes and I came out of my dream-world.


"Uh yes?" I asked totally clueless of what she had been talking.


"What did u say yes?" she asked and started laughing , a sweet and tinckering laugh like bells were ringing in my heart.


"U wanna go to the police? U sure? Should I lock it?" she said immitating Amitabh Bachchan of KBC and I had to laugh at that.


She looked so cute doing that , I wanted to pull her cheeks.

We had become the matinee show of all people on the station.


"Hello stop laughing and stay away from me!" she said annoyed and left.


I smiled at her as she dissappeared in the swarm of crowd.
Wow eventful right? A metro station , where u don't even get a space to breath , I talked or rather argued with a girl there for full 15 minutes.


Correction , irrevocably gorgeous girl.


I ran and caught the train before it left. I had to make my way inside somehow.


I tried to get a place to stand as thinking of getting a seat in a metro was way beyond becoming David Beckham someday.


Thats when I saw her again , standing in the ladies compartmeent squashed between two ladies.


I chuckled as I saw the fat one almost pushing her down to the floor and thats when she saw me.


I looked away trying to avoid her , maybe she thought I was stalking her.

I suddenly saw two guys gawking at her.


It was as if she followed my gaze and started moving backwards uncomfortably , trying to get away from their lustful stares but it was too crowded and she would have fallen.


Of course she did not , I caught her in time.


She gaped at me and all the ladies shriecked as if I had murdered someone.


And to my bad luck the train stopped at a station and some of the ladies called the policeman asking to arrest me.


I was like What The Hell. So much for helping someone? I had only just stepped in the ladies compartment for crying out loud!


"Oh hello sir I didn't do anything?" I said pleading looking at the gorgeous girl who had got me in trouble.

Roshni stood there dumbfounded.


"No I didn't even do anything!" I said trying to reason out but in vain as the train was gone and I was already late.


I saw the train coming back after 10 minutes or so from the other side.


I turned and was shocked to see The Girl Who Got Me Late.


'Am I imagining her?' I rubbed my eyes hoping she would dissappear.


"Excuse me Sir!!" I heard her breath-taking voice and was taken back to our first meeting a few moments ago.


Oh wait I have already told that to u haven't I?


So thats it for today folks.


Why she came back?
How our love story started?


Too many questions right , Oh no worries I'll answer them all soon , very soon!


After all I am The Siddharth Khurrana , I solve everyone's problems so I'll solve your query too.

-----------------------

So this was the first part do tell ur views on it!

Tried writing from 1st person the first time.

Edited by Starsfireflies - 10 years ago
1029168 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#30
res
unres
Am I first??
Oh yes, I am.
Loved the first part dear. Siddarth's dialogues were sooo awesome.
And the last line was KILLER.
Update soon.
Will be waiting and yes, PM me.
Thanks.

Edited by -kanishka- - 10 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".