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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys am new here just an attempt..Do leave comments...

Sidni os - Guilt

Roshni walked with small steps towards her mom,her heart breaking and Kritika watched it happily.DD could sense her daughter broken. As they proceeded to leave someone stopped them .Sid's dad dragged Simran and slapped her across the face.

Kritika-" Ma.."

Mr.Khurana-" Thats it Simran , I tolerated you enough ..You would not ruin my son's life for that sadistic daughter of yours."

Before Simran could argue, A couple ran through the doors and rushed to Sid's room .

Mr.Khu-" Nisha what happened?"

Nisha-" Dad...Sid..he ..he.." sobbing hard.

Beeji-" What happend to him?"

Nisha-" Took overdose of sleeping pills.."

Simran gasped and Roshni felt the life leaving her...

3 hours at the hospital so far had drained everyone...Nisha however stood strong .Simran was just sitting lost when Nisha walked into the corridor talking on the phone..

Nisha-" My name is Nisha Viraj Rathod. I want extra return ticket for Siddarth Khurana"

Beeji-" what are you doing Nisha?"

Nisha-" Taking Sid away from Selfish people Beeji..He needs People who love him unconditionally and not for their selfish needs." Looking pointedly at Simran ,Krithika ,Roshni and DD.

Simran-" How dare you call me selfish-"

Nisha-" Isnt that the truth? You don't mind killing Sid for your daughter's happiness.""

Kritika-" Hey listen..."

Nisha-" You cant stand Roshni because she remainds of Rajveer,your mahan husband right..Go ahead look at this file.." giving a blue file

Kritika shivered with disgust as she read the whole file.. It had all details of Rajveer, his illicit relationships, his plans against DD,herself and his marriage with two other women he abandoned on knowing their pregnancy and suddenly she felt glad that he died... Simran felt a suffocation rise upto her throat.

Nisha turned to Roshni and her mom and told them about Simran's condition..

DD felt herself shiver knowing how Sid had sacrificed his love to save her..

Nisha-" How do you live with yourself?"

Simran stared at her..

Nisha-" Are you a mother? A mother loves her children without conditions but your love comes with conditions apply clause. How do you live with yourself?"

Rajveer and Beeji prayed as Sid fought for his life.Nisha stood watching the rain droplets on the window..his words echoing" I want to go Nisha to my mom the only one who will love me without conditions..I am so tired.."

DD felt herself feeling the emotion guilt for the first time... Simran stared at her hands and the folder in Krithika's hand as guilt began to eat her...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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😭 so sad.
thank god our Sid is not the suicide type but I think he may fall sick.
are you going to continue it?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its nice..😃
loved how u added another show's character although i have seen it only a couple of times!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woow, Faaab! :)) Great story, pleaase continuee! :))😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow its amazng dr plz do continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update👏👏 Do continue soon😊

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